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🕑 Added 2018-02-22 23:51:01 +0000 UTC first page - previous pagehad a lot of fun writing and tweaking keshet's Writer Dialog here. i don't often get the chance to get into the "prose" mindset anymore.
originally, i didn't intend to mention the wine again at all, and keshet was intended to set it down with the other glass, but i decided while doing the previous page that she would hang a lampshade on it. a lot of the decisions i ultimately make about keshet's actions and dialog hinge on her perceptiveness and leaning on the fourth wall, to avoid making her seem like an NPC on the fringes of Protagonist Outis's story.
had outis not implied they were going to drink it (probably!), she likely would have finished that one, but i also didn't want to give her the impression of having a Problem.
Comments
Charlie Mead
holy crud I fuckin love Keshet lmao. Definitely relate highly to her prose-y writer speak. My wife's very tech-y so it makes me wonder what our relationship would be like if she was more ''artistic''. Anywayyyyy you did a great job fleshing out Keshet, I'll be honest and say I didn't find her and Oats particularly compelling on paper, but this comic has made me really invested in their relationship n seeing more of them. It's nice to see such an obviously loving relationship LOL.
hazel
"keshet i WILL kill you on your birthday" being completely fucking ignored is such a statement, such a mood such a look, iconic
