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do you still think about it, page 3
🕑 Added 2021-11-05 23:01:09 +0000 UTCfirst page - prev page - next page
i need to go back and add navigation links...
this page seems to have not much going on except for mirroring a sequence in drop-out, but what it's mainly supposed to establish is tension. it sets the tone for the rest of the comic as "probably not positive" and turns what seems to be a strange meandering pace into suspense (ideally).
the main key differences i wanted with the two sequences is sugar making direct eye contact with her reflection and holding it, and an escalation from discomfort with the reflection to active hostility.
it's been weird getting into the pacing of smaller pages, but this one felt easier. it may just be because it was a small sequence, so easier to work with.
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bramblepaws
LOVE the intensity of the face in the 4th panel and the mirroring to the drop-out sequence
