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Matabar. Chapter 74 - Corporal

🕑 Added 2025-02-24 23:01:03 +0000 UTC

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Nùmenor

Fuck I love this story. Tess' character is really starting to shine. Great work!

LiteWvr

Yeah but counterpoint, they had nothing real romantic at all in those 4 years and all of a sudden jump to the end. Not saying that doesn't happen I just don't prefer it.

Grish99

I really hope author won't "die off Tess" especially for the "motivation" sake. Especially when it's not needed like right now.

Silver Beard

Between the two- I think he'd got the better gig/view. She should move in with him... not the other way around. See as she usually does the Jacket's books- "they" should be able to work out a substantial holding for no costs at all...

Silver Beard

She's definitely a liability, but it is possible to have relationships and work. Depends a lot on the woman.

Silver Beard

Now? I puts up the fucking wards that should have gone up 3 months ago... two sets of them... his place and hers.

Takttiger

I'd rather he draws inspiration from the sewing patterns to develop a new type of magic, but I guess people's tastes run differently :D

van eisley

So… Tess is dead

Suer

I was quick in terms of chapters, but they knew each other for like almost 4 years. He knows Tess for less than a year.

LiteWvr

I have to say that as much as I hated how quickly he jumped to sex with Anna I'm loving how this relationship is going.

Jennings

Hahah good luck lad.

dethrothes

No magic has left him this flabbergasted. I'm cheering for you Ardi!

Ethan Norton

Lol

Adunn

Oh she’s so dead.

John

Thanks!

Deviant Ranger

indeed what to do..

SAB

> “But I haven’t even completed my-” Given the situation and tension in the room that he surely noticed, I have a hard time believing Ardi would just unthinkingly blurt that out. Or say anything, really, unless he was directly addressed.

Monadologist

I definitely appreciate the teasing of the 'oh this is where they break up' moments over the last few chapters combined with the subversion of those tropes. It makes her come off as a much stronger character.


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