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Matabar. Chapter 72 - Birthday and a Blue Mage

🕑 Added 2025-02-17 23:01:01 +0000 UTC

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Payasuo

Yeah, the story has some problematic stuff at times. Still a great story, though, and I can give it the benefit of the doubt so far in that it hasn't yet shown clearly homophobic depictions.

Storyflower

projection.

U Sila

The ending is great contrast and a breath of air after the horror before. Thank you for writing. P.S. Some of the criticism you get is bizzare to me.

micah wales

Stop being a freak

LiteWvr

Somebody's thirsty for dommy vamp mommy :D. Jokes aside while Ard/Tess def has longevity issues unless Tess is just being built up to be slaughtered into a Maguffin, Cassara/Ard has the issue of you know, Cassara knew his great grandfather, presumably when he was young. She'd redefine cradle robbing. But tbh I suspect Tess is permanent just based on the current foundation of their relationship being choosing eachother even though it doesn't make sense. Tbh I'd like Ard to either find a matabar chick who's been hangin out in the Fae world or mebbe he figures out how to wake the sleeping blood in the alcadian descendants. I just don't want the title to be accurate :(

Baamz

Disappointed that you depicted the monster in women's underwear. There's a lot of transphobia that has roots in that cultural depiction of a psychotic deviant in women's clothing, which isn't a stereotype based in reality so much as the 1-2 punch of a single media darling serial killer and the movie Silence of the Lambs spawning a lot of copycat depictions like this.

Eddie

It's cute right now, but I hope their relationship doesn't get dragged out too long. It's obviously never gonna last. I assume she's gonna break it off. Her dying would be cheap and lame. Hope they part on good terms like Anna. Ardi gonna live forever, so Cassara is the only choice.

Jayden Southworth

TFTC! Is Ard going to reveal his star soon?

SirWinsALot

Damn brutal way to learn to be a bit less trusting in these parts. Love to see it. There is a build up of the Tess relationship, I bet something happens in that arena eventually A threat to that relationship I think isinevitable, Now will Tess back off or not. She does have ptsd of a soldier husband/father. Its more likely that she backs of then Ard does tbh

Manohar

Seriously doubt that Ard doesnt see this mission and his job at the second chancery as some lifelong commitment .. far from it He would much rather just study magic and be with his family If the relationship with Tess becomes permanent then Ard has even more motivation to quickly wrap up this part of his life If he doesnt I can see Tess leaving him bcs she couldnt handle being in a relationship with a soldier/agent

VaeVictis9

They make an adorable pair, but I wonder if she truly understands she'll always come second to the job.

Lorcogoth

so don't quote me on this but I think he lured the counterspell out with the ice flowers. since the iceflowers are a large area spell, his opponent had to react with something similar, however in his drunken state he didn't realise that his own spell would extent to the windows. when the fire reached the windows it triggered the wards that were setup there.

John

Thanks!

Silver Beard

She should get used to it or move on. Life of a wife to the 2nd Chancellery

R

Mhhh he saw them walking around the house with peter. And his teammates arrival by the front door surely triggered them. I guess his spell managed to tag the Clocks as "friends" and tag the blue mage as "not quite a friend"

Xonian

Hopefully Ard grows from this and learns to be more mature in his trust. And also get some payback.

marco contreras

I think it was the alarm wards that he took advantage of, he did say there could be explosions if they went off but I could be wrong

2,4,6-Trinitrotoluene

Maybe a bit unclear what Ard was doing with Ice Flowers here? The arrangement beneath the guy's feet triggered the house's automated wards that torched him somehow? I got that part but it's kind of unclear how Ard knew it was even there or what it did. Let alone trigger it.

Piotr Pajchel

Aww that’s so cute…

Reuben Jennings

Tftc


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