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Matabar. Chapter 96 - The Castle Tower

🕑 Added 2025-04-24 23:02:01 +0000 UTC

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sigma

When there's something strange? In your neighbourhood. Who you gonna call? 2nd Chancery!

sephirothrr

while I agree to some extent there is actually a fair bit of precedent here - see basically any conversation between Ardi and the orcish jackets guy whose name I just forgot

Bound

Thank you for the chapter! I'm usually not one to comment, but I wanted to talk about a line that bothered me in this chapter. The part where Ardi said "your body doesn’t rely on oxidative phosphorylation" felt very out of place. I think Ardi has been interacting with people, and with Milar, on a daily basis enough that at this point he wouldn't just say something like that instead of what he knows almost everyone else would understand easier in the first place - it makes you not need to breath. And Ardi DOES know how to explain things simply, because he explained simply with his next answer. I think the whole cliche of "smart person says something no one else understands - other person says 'in English please' - smart person says thing the way they should have in the first place" is very overdone and does a disservice to the characters. It feels out of place with Ardi's capacity to interact and communicate with other characters, and in this case, Milar specifically, especially when the rest of the dialogue all flows very naturally and is very well written. In any case, that's just my opinion on this specific line of dialogue, I have no other complaints this chapter, and I'm excited to see where things go with this Homeless Weaper!

Diarmuid McGinnity

I wonder will the Spider issue be solved by the end of book one because most of these plot points seem very disconnected rn. I suppose it could all come together pretty quickly though if they find something big


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