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Matabar. Book II. Chapter 4 - Blueprints

🕑 Added 2025-07-24 23:01:04 +0000 UTC

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Alibhai

I didn't even notice the mistakes in my own comment until I read your's.🤦‍♂️

Pedro Sernagiotto

The chapters read pretty similarly to the ones professionally edited, save for the occasional grammatical error that was pretty rare beforehand, now appearing a couple times per chapter. It makes sense, since when you try to proofread something yourself wrote you already know what’s supposed to say in those places, and your brain can trick you a bit in a way.

Alibhai

"metal box weighing about half a hundred kilograms" -- Maybe you were trying to say 50 kilograms? If you were you could just say that or if you were trying to say 150 kilos you should say hundred and fifty. Most of the chapters just as readable as before , since you asked about the editing and what not, apart from certain mistakes here and there. Like a "missing or the grammar being slightly off.


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