WACK DADDY
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Her Desire - Chapter 4 - BETA
🕑 Added 2023-03-09 19:26:47 +0000 UTCWell here we go boys.
Please look for errors of any kind as you play. Please ensure your save files are working and also that "paths" and "stats' are working properly based off your game. Provide feedback if you can!
This isn't a long Chapter for a few reasons (including because I am out of town all next week and wanted to release before then) but it has quite a lot of naughtiness and moves peoples "relationship's" forward in a big way.
Comments
WACK DADDY
Thanks for the feedback my dude. This is what I need. Want to release to public this weekend because I won't be able to "fix" any issues if they occur for the 5 days I'm gone.
me
Very hot! 2 minor grammar edits (I only played the lez content): 1) Amber talks to Chloe in the kitchen: "...your father is coming home tomorrow so I really wanted some quiet tonight anyway." I think it would read better is you said "so I really wanted some PEACE AND quite tonight" or "so I really wanted some quite TIME tonight" 2) During group scene: "Vera and I leaned up and got closer to so we could watch". I would remove "to" so it reads "Vera and I leaned up and got closer so we could watch". Or if you meant "too", you could say "Vera and I leaned up and got closer as well so we could watch".
