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Magical Girl Gunslinger: Chapter 34 - First Patrol
🕑 Added 2023-09-01 20:06:10 +0000 UTCComments
Taylor
Rereading this again, and i think I only caught this because I'm binging the whole series, but is this the same Sargent Kelley that Lilly mentions that talked with her and showed her how to use shelters? That seems like a really nice touch!!
Fayhem
Finally getting around to catching up now that my work is slowing down, and loving it. Did find a minor typo here if you're collecting those: “Ever, It’s good to see you again!” she cheered in a sing-song lilt. “You too, Naiad! It’s been too long.” "It's" should be lowercase in the first sentence.
Ethan Barrow
Loved the chapter! I'm really looking forward to seeing the next one.
Patricio Cabrera
Selene congratulating Mai on awkwardly standing around had me busting. She might be s a good comedic foil.
Mikasane
Yup! Thought it would be a fun little Cameo!
Sam C
Hah was that AU Taylor and Lisa in there?
Nephi Plante
I'm so glad you're back and writing.
A-aron
Huzzah!
Thelon
Guine sounds like a lot of fun. Looking forward to how she interacts with Moon Bun.
milk_
LETS GOOOOOO
