Draft for Cover of HCP6
🕑 Added 2024-08-16 08:18:25 +0000 UTCHi, everyone!
The artist just delivered the drawing I asked him to do of Roth to add to the cover of book 6 of Hidden Class: Pacifist.
I'll still add the background, but how do we feel about the illustration so far? Do we like it? Do you have any suggestions on things that the artist should tweak?
Comments
Cássio Ferreira
Thank you for your feedback.
Cássio Ferreira
Thank you for your feedback!
Cássio Ferreira
Good suggestion, although I've already Lin on the covers of books 4 and 5. I think it's time to do something different.
Cássio Ferreira
Thanks, Liam!
Cássio Ferreira
Thank you for your feedback.
Alexander Wright
Armor looks great! Overall it's a good drawing that fits in nicely with the other covers in style and the smile shows the progress from where he was to where he is now.
ByLAWphoto
His face looks wrong. There's stretch in the muscles when a smile is sincere. Right now, he looks like he's faking a smile. It makes me feel like he's duplicitous and fake.
Blacklynx39
At this point in the story, he should have a flag. It is central to the Union, and his play style.
Alexander Wright
Maybe add the kitten to his shoulder?
liam coffin
The armour looks amazing and faces are really hard to do and they’ve done a decent job there too