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HC: Handyman | Ch. 151 - Breakthrough

🕑 Added 2025-01-28 10:31:06 +0000 UTC

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SwR

Yep, It seems less abrupt.

Cássio Ferreira

Oh yeah! The synergies just keep piling on. It's getting harder to keep track of all of Jack's skills.

Cássio Ferreira

Thank you so much for that observation. I tweaked the beginning of the chapter. Does it feel better now?

SwR

I'm not sure about pacing here between 150 and 151. The sudden scene shift right back to the fortress felt abrupt. Maybe add a line to 150 saying they fled back to camp or the like.

ByLAWphoto

that's a LOT of synergies, holy hannah! Jack's going to be hard pressed to learn all the things AND keep the team going. moderation and balance, Jack!


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