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HC: Card Slinger | Ch. 40 - Trash Islet

🕑 Added 2025-01-30 12:41:06 +0000 UTC

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Shakyamunie

Oh yeah much better, it has a logical flow now, thanks a lot for your work !

Cássio Ferreira

Hi there! Sorry that it took me a while to go through it, but I think the dialogue is better now. What do you think?

Cássio Ferreira

Thank you so much for that input. I'll go through it again and tweak it.

Shakyamunie

Thanks for the chapter ! The conversation between JustTin and Hercmerc feels weird, he basically says "i thinks he is on trash islet, pay me so i can tell you where" and then after making a deal juste answer "he is on trash islet", like he just tells the same thing twice, and there's no reaction from JustTin so it dosent seem normal ?


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