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HC: Handyman | Ch. 163 - Vases

🕑 Added 2025-02-25 11:43:12 +0000 UTC

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Cássio Ferreira

Thank you for those notes and for your comment. I've fixed the typos. :D

Paxmorgana

Only spotted two typos, though one of the long Romies looked fishy. Jack don't wear boots to have them scrape across the inside of the well. And then there's this sentence: "However, this time around, there was only a C." I would rewrite it as "However this time around, there was only a single C." Other than that, our boy's gotten good as heck at pottery, hell yeah.

Cássio Ferreira

Thanks! I've tried to keep everyone's feedback in mind. As I go through the book and proofread it I'll remove any excessive descriptions! :D

ByLAWphoto

that was a great balance of crafting and description. I could feel Jack grinding without getting bored. awesome!

Shakyamunie

TFTC ! Can Jack even improve Marie's gear? I don't really remember the description of her stuff but I always imagined some bits of armor for her class and not just cloth garnements, at least leather to hint some protection since they throw grenades and bomb arround to fight.


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