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Becoming the Dark Lord - Chapter 200

🕑 Added 2025-07-31 19:27:39 +0000 UTC

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Or leave out the bit about ph lol. That's probably too technical for the conversation. Anyway, tc for all the chapters! It's nice seeing so many each day. Lol

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As written, this statement initially read (to me) like he was saying snakes' stomach acid has hcl and humans' doesn't. I get what's being said now, and think this might be clearer; focusing the comparison around the strength of the acid, not the use of hcl. Edit suggestion: Snakes use hydrochloric acid. Much stronger than ours. -> “Snakes' stomach acid is much stronger than ours, lower ph.

wulfie le bard

Oh also just a passing thought I forgot to mention, there was no notification for Charlie

AturatoWriter

Thanks for the heads-up! I've fixed it. And no, the snake is actually male.

wulfie le bard

She struck like a thunderclap - did the snake get gender for this one sentence?

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