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Becoming the Dark Lord - Chapter 213

🕑 Added 2025-08-06 11:02:01 +0000 UTC

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AturatoWriter

Really loved your analysis. Luke is exactly that kind of character. He adapts to tough situations in his own unique way. It's going to be interesting to see how he handles things in the next arc. If you pay close attention, you’ll notice he’s being shaped around different assassin styles: stealth, ranged attacks with a bow, and even direct combat when necessary. In the next arc, let’s just say he’ll be in a pretty unusual situation, haha. It’s gonna be fun to watch.

Cmndprmpt

Okay, I don't think he initially planned on losing his arm. I feel like he was gonna use his finger for this, then he lost his arm and went with that. The most impressive thing about Luke is his rate of adaptability. He doesn't make a thorough plan, but leaves room for errors and unknowns and other such things. And when he has to adapt, he does so extremely well and efficient. You've done a great job of writing a relatable MC, at least relatable for me. Even when he makes a choice I wouldn't have made, the choice he does make is perfectly reasonable for his character. He's basically sys-apoc Deadpool in morality. I love this cast of characters so much. Even the shitters like Paul and that one orc that Charlie got the rune skill from.

Pete

not dead yet!


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