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Chapter 423: The Invisible War

🕑 Added 2025-11-21 04:41:20 +0000 UTC

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Joshua

Author did you read any of the comments. I feel like everything you wanted can be done without the way you portrayed the MC. It really isn't hard to just listen to someone, especially when what they want is only beneficial to you.

Michael Grover

Going to post this now. Johnathan's arc needs to end and soon. He is an unlikable character even as a rival/evil villain. His arc should have ended last book and not gotten the power up he undoubtedly got when he made it to earth. Heck do a poll here to see how many enjoy him as his shadow threat vs those that just want him dead and arc closed.


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