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Poison -8- Melanie Brown

🕑 Added 2024-07-02 19:06:51 +0000 UTC
Poison -8- Melanie Brown

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Michelle Kurtz

Cory needs to grow up. Is Mom going to give her the talk.

Dallas Eden

The comment about Diane being, “Just like when you were a man, you’d never give me any consideration when you invited some co-worker and his wife over for dinner at the last minute,” is telling. There were definitely issues with their marriage that apparently “Diane” didn’t realize were issues. I still am expecting Mom’s boyfriend to show up pretty soon. For all of her comments and apparent pushing for Diane to be more girly, she suddenly is having issues with her inviting a boy over to study? Sounds like a power play on Mom’s part; she is acting vindictive and has plans to put Diane in her place - probably humiliating her in front of everyone while doing it. Yet she still ignores Cory’s nasty attitude and continues to let him insult Diane. Cory is a nasty piece of work who needs a good slap.

SingularCurve

Frankly, the whole way "Mom" is treating her former husband tells me one of two things First, she was either desperately in love with the man and this accident has totally destroyed her world thus her need for serious therapy. Or Second, She Felt neglected and abused and is trying to get revenge on him through his new persona of her daughter. Thus she needs REALLY serious therapy. Neither of these things makes her a good mom, partner, etc... and is seriously hurting Diane on her readjustment to her new life.

Melanie Brown

That’s a cute picture.

Samantha Herat

Diana making C-4? Knowing her she probably could or a nice binary explosive like in "Die Hard with a Vengeance". I digress Middle school yes she COULD PROBABLY test out of 8th grade & maybe even high-school, but I don't THINK the university would like that too much. As it was their mistake in the Chem lab that caused all of this. For some reasion Corry thinks that it's Diannas fault their dad isn't there it's the university that is at fault & they are not going to admit it. That one of their students screwed up. In a way I guess they are, but not publicly announcing that an experiment gone wrong changed a 40 year old man into a 13 year old girl. Mom is having a fit because Corry is spreading rumors to Mom just typical trying to get someone in trouble other than him self.

Julia Miller

I think middle school is driving Diane crazy. Not to mention her brother Cory, who she now has to sit beside in Science class. I hope she tricks him into blowing something up in an experiment. And now Mom is mad at her for inviting Gene over to study. I'm sure Mom will make her study at the kitchen table instead of her bedroom. All in the life of a 13-year-old schoolgirl who thinks like a 43-year-old man. Oh yeah, keep up the C-4 jokes. And the new cover looks great.

Sammy C

My niece once asked me what kids carried to school before the ubiquitous backpack and I told her boys carried little briefcases. We also had to wear ties on assembly day. She chortled.

lisa charlenne

what a brat Corey is and mom needs to chill the hell out

Erin Halfelven at BigCloset

LOL. And those were all mine, after I got through fixing errors in Melanie's script, I made three myself. Thanks for the catch.

The Goddess

Interesting chapter I bet Diane could make C-4 It wasn't Diane's fault they lost their dad Love the new cover art Three minor typos Poisonn, Poisoned, and Son-of-a=bitch


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