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The Dagger of Heaven... -9- by SammyC

🕑 Added 2024-08-19 22:17:37 +0000 UTC
The Dagger of Heaven... -9- by SammyC

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SingularCurve

I always have to like star wars quotes even if it is unintentional.

SingularCurve

My take on this is full of possible spoilers so be warned. In my youth I read a story where humans had crashed on a planet and had evolved to live only 7 or 8 days due to the outside environment. The protag of that story finds a crashed spaceship of their ancestors due to circumstances and ends up extending their life due to the shielding of that crashed spaceship. This story influences my thoughts on pieces like this. My theory is that the "underground city" is part of a crashed spaceship or space station of the original humans that came to mine the planet, and has been buried by the eons. Thus it may be a "cultural heritage" that our current humans have no idea how to work or make due to future evolution having lived on the planet. Much like the legends of Lost Atlantis.

Melanie Brown

I've got a bad feeling about this.

CJ

Yep birth defect fixed, now will she accidentally get educated!

Julia Miller

The underground city sounds amazing. I wonder who made it and why they abandoned it? Rani keeps picking up new suitors, the newest being Alvin. I wonder how Malcolm will feel about this development. I’m also wondering about the technology of this place. Would it be possible to make Rani into a woman? Would Rani be willing if this were possible?

The Goddess

Interesting chapter Georgia is pretty cool Loved her line about eating Rani I wonder if Eric will join the Rani's traveling party Nice jumpsuit


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