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Poison -21- by Melanie Brown

🕑 Added 2024-08-28 21:42:57 +0000 UTC
Poison -21- by Melanie Brown

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Erin Halfelven at BigCloset

when you open collection or use the tags to bring up a set of stories, you can choose what order they display in, oldest first or newest first

Russell Johnson

I would love an easier way to read these chapters. I have to go to collection and scroll thru the list each time.

Robin

If Luke heard all about Diane, she and Sandra better get their backstory straight so that whatever mom told Luke remains the same as Diane tells Brian. Also, what kind of bs is different curfews for kids the same age, regardless of gender. That is totally a power move on mom’s part.

Samantha Herat

Man life is so not fair to Dian moms date turns out to be her crushes dad & apparently dad dosent like him much.

Kevin Wentzel

That last line started me singing.... Bobby Vinton - Sealed With A Kiss

Jo Dora Webster

I love each new chapter that's posted, Melanie B., of 'Poison'. Thank you for your writing which always leaves me looking forward to the next chapter. And there is a new Amazon Book Club (Details on BCTS) Our first book is Melanie Brown's "Racing Hearts". I look forward to reading this great book with all of you.

CJ

LOL! Brian had to be his mother's date's son. of course! An Brian is her top kisser, she needs a larger sample size!

Melanie Brown

Really nice picture of Diane

The Goddess

Given your comment I wonder if Sandra arranged with the University for the "accident" to happen and that it wasn't just random

Dallas Eden

Yeah, that relationship is definitely not just getting started. Sandra is way too chummy with Lucas - and what’s with “Tony”. “His aunt used to call him that.” Apparently Sandra has known him for a very long time; I wonder how long she was screwing around on her husband? Also, what kind of an asshole tells someone, “You can call me Mr. Campbell?” That’s just rude. And apparently Sandra sees nothing wrong with that - of course it’s just another way to put her former husband in his place and show him who the dominant person is now. It goes right along with letting her know that she has to be home hours before her irresponsible “brother”. Sandra is enjoying treating her former husband like a little girl; apparently she feels the need to belittle him in front of her lover, who she has apparently told all about Diane. She probably enjoyed telling him that he should treat her former husband like a little girl to make him feel even more inferior. Now I am sure that Diane will get sent to bed like a child when they get home while Sandra jumps into bed with Lucas and makes plenty of noise to let her know what they are doing in the bed they once shared. Diane will probably have to put up with serving him breakfast the next morning too. You really know how to write a hateful character. Plus, throwing in the fact that he is Brian’s father, and then that Brian will be gone in a week? That’s adding insult to injury. Diane will be subjected to seeing Sandra screw Lucas knowing that his son, the boy she may like, has been sent away for the summer. All while being treated like a little girl by everyone in the family.

Julia Miller

lol! The plot thickens for Diane.

The Goddess

Interesting chapter Amazing how Diane keeps having these coincidences or the university is manipulating events If Diane dates Brian she will be calling Mr. Campbell Lucas in reality


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