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Poison -16- by Melanie Brown

🕑 Added 2024-08-07 02:55:35 +0000 UTC
Poison -16- by Melanie Brown

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D. Karch

I was almost thinking that Diane was going to get pulled over and checked by a police officer, Just to add some drama to the story. Good fun read tho.

Samantha Herat

If mom ever found out Zach called his sister to come get him at 4 am..... ohhhhh he would be is serious trouble, but Diane more so she lied to mom & drove her brothers car to pick him up from where he was at.

The Goddess

Great chapter Loved the ending Zach owes Diane big time At least Diane said 2 am so mom won't be too mad Diane will need to make sure Zach doesn't spill the beans

Rachael_P

Really lovely episode. Thank you.

Michelle Kurtz

This is definitely gonna catch up to her.

Melanie Brown

Just FYI, Mom's name is Sandra.

Melanie Brown

Great cover art!

Melanie Brown

Her birthday is a little over a month away.

Tenacious

Nice cover art! She is being a nice sister and a proud dad. She's is having her new birthday soon?

Dallas Eden

“From her, formerly our room………”……….yeah, it’s obvious that Diane still remembers. I’ll bet that still hurts too. Funny how Susan seems to remember that Diane used to be her husband when it suits her - like when her son needs help with his tie. It seems to be the only time she cares about it though. Zac’s attitude regarding his father is abominable. He apparently doesn’t want to remember or believe that Diane is really his father - as is evidenced by his reaction to Diane telling him she is proud of him, and by his reaction to her helping with his tie. The whole bit with ignoring her and hugging his mother after the graduation ceremony. Conveniently, he remembers who Diane really is when he is in trouble and needs help though. Personally, I would have helped him out - and then thrown him under the bus with Susan rather than lying to protect him. With the way the two boys treat Diane, if I were her I would tell them to take a hike. Susan’s whole attitude still bothers me. She doesn’t act like a woman whose husband was just turned into he daughter, and she doesn’t seem to care how Diane might feel having been put through what she has. I am still expecting there to be another man that she was seeing behind her husband’s back. She certainly doesn’t seem very broken up at the loss of her husband, and isn’t the least bit sympathetic with what he is going through.

lisa charlenne

mom finds out there both dead lol


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