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The Dagger of Heaven at the End of Time - 18

🕑 Added 2024-10-27 19:38:00 +0000 UTC
The Dagger of Heaven at the End of Time - 18

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Eric Naftaly

Nice of Randall to choose Rani as an eleventh-generation heir, so to speak, but he must have dozens of tenth- and eleventh-generation descendants among the colonists, including (by definition) at least one of Rani's parents. If just about everyone in the kingdoms had been expecting divine intercession of some sort -- I'm not sure how widely the dire predictions about the Dagger had circulated -- then there may not be too much cause for concern about resistance, even with the major changes that seem to be coming. But except for the Undergrounders, none of them have electronic weapons that Randall can short-circuit, which could limit his ability to make unpopular changes. I don't know whether we'll be seeing more of the follow-up here; seems to me most stories of this type just jump ahead to the happy ending (Rani and Alvin's wedding?) with a brief summary of how they got there from here. Guess we'll see...

Melanie Brown

Dramatic image. I like the sky.

Eric Naftaly

They're not in the system where they were supposed to find the fusion precursors. On the other hand, the aliens were mining the planet, so there was something there that justified the trip -- though since they were gone by the time humans arrived, there may not be much left.

Melanie Brown

You’d think they could get the yokels to make fuel for the ship.

The Goddess

Interesting and informative chapter Looks like Rani will eventually become a real female We finally find out what the dagger really is Nice image

Sammy C

Julia, the colony ship missed its original target in the Proxima Centauri system while everyone was in suspended animation. Luckily the ship’s AI recalibrated and found another habitable planet in a nearby system. Meanwhile, events on Earth prevented any serious search for the lost colonists… until Randall’s uploaded mind was consulted several centuries later.

Julia Miller

The narrative is great telling us of the history from the first expedition to their planet. The only thing I don’t understand is why he had to search all the other planets nearby. Didn’t they know where the original colony ship landed? Or was the original expedition like the Interstellar movie where they simultaneously explored many planets looking for a suitable planet? (But were unsuccessful)


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