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Second Spirit -11- by Melanie Brown

🕑 Added 2024-10-29 21:01:41 +0000 UTC
Second Spirit -11- by Melanie Brown

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Melanie Brown

People handle being lost and terrified in different ways.

Michael Maor

Its a well written story but the level of stupidity the MC repeatedly displays is getting annoying.

Joseph

Yeah, kinda figured that would not go well…. But it looks like Linda may be better off, really. Dad seems like a racist jerk.

Melanie Brown

Nice pic of Linda

Julia Miller

I agree. Jack didn’t even think about something he could tell his father that only they would know. It’s a lost opportunity he will never have again, now that he has now become Linda, the native girl.

The Goddess

Nice chapter Linda should have said something to prove she was Jack Inappropriate for Jack's dad to kick Linda Nice image


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