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The Dagger of Heaven at the End of Time -20- by SammyC

🕑 Added 2024-11-20 04:51:36 +0000 UTC
The Dagger of  Heaven at the  End of Time -20- by SammyC

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Eric Naftaly

Well, if Randall used the moon/space station to figure out where things stood before he landed, the race that built the satellite shouldn't have any trouble doing that, and don't figure to be taken by surprise. Which (as Harry intimated) puts the humans right where they thought they were back at the start, about to find out what folks who likely have the capability to destroy their civilization want to do. Of course, humans are a lot more capable (and united) now than they were then. I wonder if they've made any progress toward getting those educational devices working that the aliens left Underground. I'd have liked to think that their presence in the story was for more than one joke at Merlyn's expense. Anyway, if communication can be established with the new arrivals, Rani's talent at negotiating with strangers probably would make her the ideal contact. It's unfortunate -- from that standpoint, at least -- that this story isn't going any further. That said, indigenous people encountering technologically superior invaders haven't fared very well here on Earth.

Julia Miller

Now you have ended this story and if you like, you could write a sequel to it. Hopefully the aliens aren’t like us and will work with the humans instead of going to war.


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