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The Black Belt Affair Ch. 20

🕑 Added 2025-09-01 13:00:12 +0000 UTC

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Amer Gill

Doesn't anybody want risky sex and cruel cheating anymore? There was so much scope for both,the foundations had been beautifully laid,I was waiting for the chapter where Carlos screws Ashley from behind while she's professing her love to Jacob over the phone.But Jacob discovers them both and BOOM the story seems over.I'm crushingly disappointed. Eddie's still an excellent writer though.

Vinny

The fact that he’s involved with a married student of his does not speak well to his morals or ethics. These are very important aspects to the art of self-defense. Control of your mind and body are central themes in most self defense disciplines. The fact that he can’t demonstrate that shows he’s really just a poser. I can’t blame him though, it’s really all on her for getting involved in the first place. But, again, the fact that he used his position of authority and leadership to manipulate her into that was pretty low.

Chris K

Something just struck me as odd about Carlos. The way he scrambled for his clothes upon hearing Jacob, and then stood with nothing to say as Jacob stared at the both of them. I think Carlos puts on a tough guy act. Easy when your wrestling with a 100lb woman or an out of practice injured student. But, where was his self assured cocky attitude when Jacob walked into the bedroom? He almost seemed scared shitless. He didn't start being arrogant again until Jacob left the apartment. Just a thought..


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