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Chapter 336 v1.0

🕑 Added 2018-05-13 21:03:51 +0000 UTC

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mm while i pref to keep things faster paced in fights, I had to slow this one down. This is not only Yan's first ch in forever, it's also a vehicle for explaining Awakened Skills and stuff.

Alan McBrayer

Way too much inner monologue during Yan’s fight I actually yelled at my phone for her to quit talking and fight. It would have been a fun fight to read if you just had the few quips and a few lines of inner monologue, but the words describing the fight were half as long as the inner monologue which made her look wrongly arrogant and boring.

loved the wu gam fight, show them central sissies what's what.

Thundermike00

So anti climatic win but I so fucking loved it, everyone or almost everyone saying wu gam will be a good match for rain and BOOM rain just blew him off in one move. A slap to the face of everyone who thought wu gam was going to be a good match

NomadicSoul

This made me so happy, woo rain kick some ass!

Łukasz Gajewski

i liked ending very much, it was very Rain like, fu..ng overhelming

Reid Palmquist

Short end but I liked it nevertheless. Had just the right amount of unexpected after the last chapter.

Andrew

Thank you!

thx for the chapter! awesome and funny win for him .............. somehow there is something missing to Rains fight. Dunno its your story.

mt2222

Thank you. Simply thank you. I am quite addicted to your chapters.

Adrian Lazarus

Thanks Ruff, loved Yan's pov and Rain's win.


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