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Chapter 456

🕑 Added 2019-04-30 23:54:15 +0000 UTC

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Rain is middle management. All he does is delegate :D

Thenais

Typical Rain, ditching all the work to poor rustram :D

Arnon Parenti

Great chapter, I especially liked Gam's challenge and anxiously await his counterparts' play, Du Min Gyu and broken sword Piccai are holding out somewhere in that line. Also sweet how Rain understood he needed to make himself scarce for the plan to work.

I don’t know, that’s just so stereotypical and done.

One of the reason's why society (and even Imperial Scion) take notice of Rain and treat him as a threat..He have the charisma, skills and supports from others..he grow too fast, have protection by Divinities and have the right mindset & knowledge..he become too dangerous for both Imperial Clan and Defiled alike.. Can we have an arc where people target his loved ones instead? I want to see Rain becomes crazy and following the path of blood and murder..

With your introductory comment, I am concerned you are pushing yourself towards a false summit. I doubt your readers will care if you move beyond your predictions and limitations you set for yourself, but I don’t know how failing to meet your own goals will effect you?

This has given me a firm appreciation for how strong the chapter 451 became. I think this is a good look at Rustram, and more importantly, a good use of foreshadowing (which is quite difficult for the amateur writer).

EndlessTurtle

I'm really wondering what Rain's breakthrough is going to look like, so much build-up... I would not be surprised if he does something completely awesome and then just forgets how he's done it though

Arnon Parenti

Thanks for the chapter, this was a refreshing POV, I ship Roo Roo and Chou Chou, another point of union between Bekhai and the protectorate will do good for both parties.

Andrew

Thank you!


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