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Chapter 501

🕑 Added 2019-08-23 00:59:32 +0000 UTC

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CentaureHeart

Mitsue Watanabe is the father of Hideo no? I think we had the pov of Hideo a while ago and he was obsessed about beating Rain's record on the frontline and he got knocked out by his father. The end of the chapter was basically him demanding more power, not unlike when Gen did it. So I think we know who the first assassin is going to be, unless the Abbott turns him around. Thanks for the chapter !

Not even the abbot can stand up to Alanstets glare.

Andrew

Thank you!

Dark Chaos

The best way for the leader of the defiled to take down the Imperial clan would be to have the People turn against the empire. And what better way to make them do that then make it look like the imperial clan betrayed Rain when he is fighting Gen? We already know that the imperial clan might have resources inside the defiled so it seems possible that the defiled might have resources inside the imperial clan.

Typo: "led run" -> "run"

Morog T Tiny

I look forward to Rain regaining his strength.

such anger, such sin

Malcolm Tent

Repetition can definitely ruin sentence structure but I feel like it works fine there. The repeated use sort of highlights the difference between Rain and what a real outsider is.

Malcolm Tent

Woe betide anyone who messes with Alsantsets family. You think Sarnai is a scary mother in law, imagine when Tali and Tate grow up and get married. The thought gives Tiger Mom a whole new meaning lmao. I'm glad Rain has her there though. Now I just cant wait for him to get his strength back so he can go back out fighting with Song. Pretty sure mass murdering defiled is pretty much a date night for her lmao.

Tycho Green

love the chapter. you say that rain saw himself as an outsider and that is the reason the people treated him as one. then an outsider wronged him. the double use of outsider, with one being an actual outsider doesn't sound good. you have another word to get the point across? but my first language isn't english so it might be fine, you're the one who has a way with words after all. savage divinty and ToG are my favorite stories, i hope you have a nice and well deserved break when the time comes!


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