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Not an extra chapter or delay notice

🕑 Added 2019-11-09 19:11:46 +0000 UTC

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SugarRoll

This is better as both chapters have story progression. Much easier to read compared to an entire Goujian chapter that didn't move the story forward.

Atlas Dwarf

The timeline feels a lot smoother and less choppy from PoV switches.

Brent

I like it.

Daniel J. Pace

So far I like it better like this. Keeping some of the main plot line action in both seems flow better for me.

524 would be 3.5k 525 5.3k still need to edit and flesh out a few things, so I'm guessing 4k and 6k at the end.

ThePolarParadox

Ruff how many words is this frankenchappy?


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