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Chapter 609

🕑 Added 2020-07-20 00:27:15 +0000 UTC

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Thenais

loved it.

Man. Do i really have to upgrade tiers. Fuck.

Morog T Tiny

this is a hard chapter to write but I can see so many mine fields from his actions in this chapter.

Thaabit Rivertree

I agree with your assessment Ruff. Also, I somehow dont think Rain would be so calm to make that complaint at the end of the chapter. Overall, I enjoyed it... But I wish Rain had made up some reason why he thinks Ping Ping didn't become defiled. What'll happen later when ping ping and pong pong defend him? I think it'll be fine to have him go over his notes after this incident.

Thaabit Rivertree

I agree, they shoukdv eknown he was going through inspiration and had someone to replenish his paper/ink. Good chapter though.

Meschmee

I find it difficult to believe on his first day awake he is left alone for hours with no concealed guards nearby. Maybe they just chose not to show themselves when the Imps were there, but the Uncle should of been able to notice them (maybe he did and that was why he was acting wearily).

Pacnether

Unless it’s rafo and someone close to legate has betrayed him

Pacnether

Yeah a little hard to believe that the wraiths would have gone unnoticed

Alric Good

I think the wraith attack and the legate leaving should of been the start of the next chapter but yeah found the wraith attack odd. Like would of made more sense if it was another person and not a wraith. Other than that I enjoyed the chapter.

wanderer117

It was super weird that the Legate got jumped by concealed wraiths in a room that recently had a half step divinity and Rain in it. One of them should have noticed a room full of concealed assassins. Maybe have the Legate jumped just outside of Rain's room,since Rain can't see through walls atm and half step left to deal with his opposite number. Or let more time pass and distract Rain with the notes. Or something.

Not that bad of a cliff. More of a bump for me cause now Rain can see if the Legate's name is warranted as Lou2 claims. And who knows if he can get inspiration/insight from it once he has parsed through what he have seen.

lala jhones

You cant talk about last chapter and end on such a cliff this one XD.

Arnon Parenti

Probably why he was challenged, The Enemy can do math just as well as The Legate and they know he can't have any challenge go unanswered, so drew him out to clear the way.

Brungar

No way a human divinity that was guarding the legate missed these wraiths or they got in during his brief exit window without inside info/ or however they snuck in to rains compound left an opening in the defenses somehow. this seems fishy to the extreme

Arnon Parenti

Two very hard to pass truths, newborn divinities are easily impressed and suppressed, PingPing is in even more danger of becoming test subject than PongPong who would probably just flatten the fort and run for it. The other is if Rain is perceived as a shortcut to divinity many very powerful factions and individuals will want a piece of him, it will be worse than what LuoLuo faced when two factions asked for her services and her teacher realised the scorned one will rather have her killed than serve the other, a divinity making machine is by far more desirable than an expert maker, even if there are less people on the cusp of divinity these "few" rule nations and powerful factions in the empire.

Gardor

Why can't She Zhenwu know what happened? He's the closest thing rain has to a patron, knowing rain prevented a defiled divinity from being born has gotta be worth a couple gold stars.


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