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Chapter 611 unedited unmemed

🕑 Added 2020-07-25 16:19:06 +0000 UTC

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I would reread RR releases, but no need to do so right away. Maybe when the volume is out, go through it again, because I do make changes and edits to advanced chapters before they go out to RR.

13lack12ose

Thanks for the chapter!

Aaron Martinez

It's interesting how in tune Song is with Rain. Right away she knows he didn't get laid and that he thought the words were nonsense.

New to tier 2. Should i reread it when it releases on reddit or is this mostly the plot?

Prinny Knight

Tiger form, wolf form, get ready for MAN FORM

SugarRoll

I like the way this chapter was written in a different POV. Lots of information but without Rain's rabbit hole of a monologue. Stray thoughts are fine as long as it's brief. It provides insight to the character but also moves the story along. I imagine this chapter would've taken multiple chapters to go through on Rain's POV but essentially would've given the readers the same level of story progression.

There's also DMG's accidental speedy stealth :D

roit roit, thanks will fix.

The key was widespread, gotta keep it more or less contained. spreading it willy nilly wont do any good, in his eyes, cuz it messes with preconceived notions. Also, Pong Pong be around. Somewhere. :D

They get hella inspiration. Its how they do most of what they do, including become Core bearing MW in the first place. It just happens, like Gen's metal hands.

Phaeth

Great chapter. Small mistake : Song was surprised to see Rain up at breakfast but she noted he was up when she saw Ping Ping in the courtyard

I thought the Legate told him not to share his "findings" to others. But like all else I should have expected Rain to ignore his warnings. And where's Pong2

Pacnether

Also, do defiled get inspiration too? Reread the section on Gen getting Freddy Kruger hands but couldn’t get any clues there

Pacnether

Only caught on when I did a second read through. Separately, there might be a logic flaw in the bit where Song would feel guilt about having a lie in but a busy schedule keeps her mind off things - can’t put my finger on what seems off though

Pacnether

Clever writing, describing intent via sarankho’s actions as a subtle premonition of Rain’s theorising

yea it was all over reddit too lol, too adorbs to leave out

Lotfi Adam

You got the arm-raising thing from Discord, didn't ya? :D Cutest shit I've ever seen

She is doggo sized, Mama Bun just got a whole bakery back there yanno? She real thicc

Alric Good

Spicy and exciting

lala jhones

Every Song chapter is a great chapter, even better with rain in it. That being said I had no idea Ping Ping was that small I thought she was the size of a dog not the same size as Pong Pong so cute lol XD

Andrew

Thank you!


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