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Chapter 668 V2 unedited unmemed

🕑 Added 2021-01-29 22:22:00 +0000 UTC

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Archit Goel

Please take your time. Better to be slow and have quality work!

Whoops, thanks!

It was supposed to be something similar, but the martial dao insight thingermajig i had planned didn't make sense

Marcus Österberg

Thanks for the chapter. I do feel like there is an inbalance in which characters point of view we follow lately. But that might just be me wanting to get past the emotionless Rain arc. One of the things I loved the most of Savage Divinity was how Rain interacted with the world around him. Which is not really the same when he struggles to say more than a word per sentence.

Arnon Parenti

The incidental reminder of his lost love and close quarter fighting reminded Min Gyu Should be Nian Zu

Diplodicus

Well done! I like this one a lot better. Great job tying in the backstory to Nian Zu's breakthrough

Arnon Parenti

Great revision, turned a mediocre chappy into a good one.

Me too

Sassy

I like this version better. 👍


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