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Chapter 664

🕑 Added 2021-01-14 01:15:28 +0000 UTC

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Thanks will fix. Yea, its mostly my shitty sleep schedule slowing me down. I cant stop needing naps. I dont know how i survived without them

Diplodicus

Typos I found: - "if anyone were too heavy handed with his precious daughters, but alas, needs must." - "Who were these enemies he fought, and how did no one else notice their arrive?" arrival

Diplodicus

Thanks for the chapter Ruff! Although I hate waiting I know these last chapters are the hardest so take your time and make it great!

Nope, he wasn't THAT far

Pacnether

Did Rain travel beyond the range which Song’s oaths allow?

Oh yea. I should have Pong Pong acknowledge that or sth

Lol, yea, Baatar and DMG are 30 years apart, and technically, Baatar should be calling him Uncle, but brother is as far as he'll go :D. Both intimate, but also stubborn

Zarik0

xDDD i love the scene, everyone is frantic and suddenly rain come back trying sneaking in and get caught :PPP But yeah why he just dont say wraith? I would love to have see a scene like everybody freeze about rain back bloody and toutim and they see little turtle coming (appear out of concealement) to rain and squeak interogative and rain nod and tumb up (like saying problem solved) xD

roflvaliant

Interested in finding out what happened to all the bodies. Did Rain just kill enough of them to retreat with the bodies or did he out right roflstomp all of them lol.

It embarass me that it took me a great while to figure out who this "Brother Du" is. Yan is an orphan and I do not recall Baatar having had any conversations with or regarding a "Brother Du". And then it hit me. Ah... DMG. Also loved the small scene with Song protecting Rain. Don't know how much of it is based on her oath but seeing as how she has pegged down in how it works and manipulating it like before, I'd hope more of it is because she cares.

Kyle J Smith

Great chapter, thank you!


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