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Chapter 681

🕑 Added 2021-03-04 17:27:10 +0000 UTC

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Aaron Martinez

I like plot armor, but here I was a bit worried for Luo-Luo. Rain lost Ai Qing so it's unlikely she'd die, but captured and interrogated or even turned? Possible enough to worry me. I'm glad it didn't go that way.

Thanks, will fix. Yea, that whole thing you mentioned about fight scenes is what makes them difficult to write. The first drafts are just... godawful

Nigel Franklin

Forgive me if someone already pointed these out. 1. "the Defiled Chosen stationed outside the manor were no better off, as their screams of impotent (rage? terror?) rang out" 2. “First the Stormguards, now the Templar Aspirants, the weapons we have to wield against the Enemy has (have?) grown once more.” Loved the chapter, you say you have difficulty writing fight scenes but the challenge seems to be good for you. Its rare that I can form such a well defined mental image for a literary fight scene. p.s. It probably helps that in this world individual duels matter to an overall battle much more than usual.

Gardor

HORNSWOGGLED

Gardor

Me after chap 678: "oh shit! Rain has a plan, we're actually gonna have an MC again! I'll get back into patreon, no author would be cruel enough to drag this out after 300 chaps of faffin about". Me after realizing the five advanced chapters all take place from other, far away POVs: "Bamboozled again. Why do I keep falling for this."

Gjim

Yes, well written was expecting the monk to sacrifice himself for Hideo or for Rain to chuck his sword from the heavens to start round two. Looking forward to what comes next.

CentaureHeart

That was a really good fight but it's getting really frustrating that the enemies never die. They are always saved at the last moment, it's like they are MC in a Shonen manga

just me that wants a MuYang chap?

Senio Holland

Great fight! Plot armor made it a little less exciting - but you're really good at painting an image of combat, one that I could clearly follow in my minds eye. A rare skill.

Arnon Parenti

I believe Happy an Kukku will take on Eyebrows.

Nigel Franklin

Now THIS is drama and plot development.

Jabari Lambert

Luo Luo best girl

Archit Goel

Finalllly. Thanks for the great chapter.

Diplodicus

Great Chapter Ruff! Really tense fight scene. I can't wait until we get to see Rain vs. Eyebrows

Zarik0

The fight is nicely done, i like it :) I think more and more after the "problem" defiled and uniter regled we gonna have a fight/revolution/secession with the emperor clan

Tijay Arnie

Mushrooms thrive after... Rain

Thenais

experts are more common than mushrooms these days :p


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