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Chapter 734 unedited unmemed

🕑 Added 2021-08-22 21:28:40 +0000 UTC

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Deinos

Sorry but I don't see them all agreeing just because of some pity-party that is followed by some naive hopes. Not unless he's brainwashing them with his aura or whatnot, but otherwise there's nothing in there that should convince people that saw it all.

Archit Goel

Great speeches are tough to write.

Tycho Green

Nice chapter as always. The speech lacked impact though. I thought it could have the desired impact on the crowd if he told them that he can cleanse people, but he can hardly say that publicly. The Imperial Clan would have no choice but to act if he announced it verbally instead of demonstrating it when he actually does it. Don’t know, but the speech convinced me only because I know for a fact what Rain can do. If I stood in the crowd, listening to him phrasing it like he did, it would have not been sufficient for me.

Archit Goel

Great chapter!

Josh

He is essentually already big mommas favorite boy for some people. Guess what happens if he does some jesus like mass baptism in the sea

Pixelblade

The emperor is so fucked if Rain pulls off this campaign. There is a loooong list of generals in history who refused to relinquish their command after succesful campaigns, using their loyal soldiers to succesfully secure power. Even if Rain were to be killed at this point, there'd still be almost certainly a rebellion. Be it from martial warriors, commoners or both.

Manu Sniter

Good chapter

Thenais

more like a credo than a discour, he is altering the faith of the soldiers. crusade, indeed. he is deviating from the imperial's doxa, and could totally be judged for heresy.

Diplodicus

Thanks for the chapter Ruff! Good speech if a bit cheezy but that's Rain for ya. Definitely getting some holy crusade vibes too

Gjim

My head cannon is that Rain puts on sun glasses as he finishes this speech.

Loved the speech a great way to rally the troops. Thanks for the chapter.

Andrew

Thank you!

Young Youghurt

I think it lacks better turning point. That moment when lame ass joke turns into charismatic leader moment. Also Rain speaks too long about his feeling, I think he should style that into facts. Seems more pompous and speechish?

Speech lacks some punch imo. Otherwise thanks for the Chapter Ruff.


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