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Chapter 737 unedited unmemed

🕑 Added 2021-08-31 00:44:27 +0000 UTC

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The family knows now, cuz Rain had to explain what happened in the abby's cave. Akanai, Baatar, Sarnai, and the older generation already knew though. I was really careful about making sure NONE of them ever called Taddy a half-hare.

Thenais

"most notably the Thorny Desert Flower, Brigadier Leony of Lhatep" reads like a product placement. the end of the chapter made me smile :)

Tycho Green

Forgot to ask last chapter, but when did it become known that Taduk is an AB? Rain said he wouldn’t tell anyone when he found out and the only other person that didn’t know all along is the guy that Taduk admonished at the wall. He was able to link that person to Taduk retrospectively. But now Akanai, Song and other people know the truth. In what chapter was that revealed?

Young Youghurt

Defiled have walls. Rain: "Afraid not. CANON WIT CHAIN!" Defiled: "Wat is dis?"

Zarik0

He gonna reload some of his reserve of heavenly energie with this demon i guess (and maybe get some hint or discovery to suck him now after all change he have gotten in his present self) What about the spectre? no one here? so they discover him and flee when he was sneaking/coming here? (that bad if yes) or they get a wide wide area no going around him to afraid of him?

Zarik0

This is a valid point but if he do it piece meal too much, its a nightmare with the number of character we have, we gonna/can be lost in and dont follow anymore at some point and its really adding hard work for the author to do this for not much better gain in my personnal view (and he can begin to do mistake if he begin to multiplie the mini plot-line by written them piece meal, good we have a lot already and some are "neglected" because the story is already a multi plot line and pov interlined and enougth "slow" down by this That a really difficult aspect you pointed to balance Yes it can add some quality to follow your point but the effort to do it and the risk it can entail is not work the "little" gain in my personnal opinion, we dont want our author to be more burn out and drowing that he is for this, he have enought mini plot-line/background/etc to close and interlink already to add to do it in a piece meal manner He jungle a lot already, dont kill him ;P

Diplodicus

Thanks for the chapter Ruff! Loved the backstory on Gao Changgong, if you ever do a second pass over the story it would be cool to see more about the western resistance.

Gjim

Gao Liang reminds me of that drunk scruffy uncle that I never had, kudos.

Gardor

I know chapter 737 is pretty late in the game to still be complaining about random shit, but you know how every now and then you'll give one long exposition chapter on a character before getting back to the plot? Have you considered trying to spread that out between several chapters, rather than just destroying the momentum so I can learn about this dude's life in full detail? Nian Zu comes to mind, I think, and his chapter was the same as this one except in the specifics, where we went over his whole life and his new faith in falling rain. I love the character backstories, I just think the pacing may be better served by doling out snippets of their pasts piecemeal, rather than all at once every 50 chapters or whatever. We can learn about characters through more than just internal monologues thinking about their own pasts.


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