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Chapter 703

🕑 Added 2021-05-17 01:41:35 +0000 UTC

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BStew

He already had a domain. He just utilized it differently here.

BStew

More like limited omniscience that rain had in god mode

Stockmar

I can feel a heavy outpouring of rain on the horizon... Perhaps the eyes of many families filled with tears

Sodiumfreesalt

IDK if I got it right but smaller scale = more rain while larger-scale = less rain. This is probably to make room for character growth since Ruff probably wants a detailed war story and not just another typical weak to strong MC progression story.

Zarik0

I see your point, but its really a personnal like or dislike of the writing style of the author and the multiple different character Yeah i guess some people can get frustrated by it Personnaly i fucking like it, the world and what happen in are so rich and big with all different character and line of plot, that all the different Pov and timetab of the story for me really get more deep in the story, it get more positive point and likable aspect for me than negative (and yeah the only "negative" point we can say is its somewhat slow on Rain Pov chapter appearing because release time) But with all the deep and rich of the story and what happen with the different line of plot well the author is somewhat bogged down in (the beginning was more "simple" with less thing happenning and the world building and character was more "few/less") And now if he focus to much on Rain he cut to much of other and simplify it and its a massive waste of what he have build in my opinion if he do that Guess some people are frustrated by this because they dont get enought of Rain Pov (1 every 1.5 week?) because release time and the massive work the author need to assemble and finish all the different little line of plot for the big finish, so a lot of other Pov I guess new reader dont gonna have this problem when they can read the complete story (or atleast a lot lot less because no need to wait the next chapter and just get "dissapointed" for a chapter Pov on a character they dont specially like) Just keep doing it author and globally in my opinion its much better that you take your time and do it like this and not let loose end appear by rushing thing, with how much you have build you bogged down by it so its slow and we get some frustration by it but that dont change that its very good (and its better you dont cut piece of your building when you begin to build the end, we just need to be patient about this aspect and in the end its gonna be better)

Tatsu

It is always stupid to respond to criticism with "just move on" "dont read it if you dont like it" and so on. It is the same as telling people watching for example GOT to not complain about the dumpster fire that it became in the latter half. People get invested in stories and characters and then see the whole thing heading down a direction they absolutely don't like. It is only right to get frustrated by that and then proceed to vent said frustration somewhere. It is especially jarring if you have a story focused on the MC at the beggining that then devolves into a clusterfuck with POVs, fillers and sidestories everywhere. People stay for those precious few chapters with plot progression that include Rain and then have to wade through a swamp of side stories that they still don't want to miss since there are tiny bits of plot scattered about. To be honest, if the story would have started like this I would have never read it past chater 10 or so. Same reason why I avoid "The wandering Inn" and everything close to it like the plague. It is like the Author wants to squish multiple stories into one but doesnt get anything done in any reasonable timeframe due to essentially writing more than one book playing in the same universe and at the same time. You have a whole cast for each faction involved that could reasonably be made into its own story and just throw everything together because you write on whatever side takes your fancy at any given moment. At this point I am only staying around to see the end and would honestly be glad if chapters get labeled by POV or even an editor mercilessly squashing side stories and fluff. If you are one of those readers that can root for all the different people and get invested with them then all I have to say is good for you and enjoy the story.

Different Nick

quin cavalry?

Zarik0

Go go Hongji fuck them hard with the Irregulars (ah take this imperial scum, in 5 mn of fight with crossbow they done more kill than your 5 days of fight, guess your honor and face take a serious hit here and make a lot of them reconsiderate in the future) The Revolution is comming!!! I get shiver when thinking when they suddenly appear and lauch salve of arrow who get the sky midnight ;P Hongji is Evolving ;P so Echolocation Chi Blessing Scrying? he can "decloak" the new wraith with this new technique so its some sort of Blessing/Elemental Chi technique gathering infos I vote for Echolocation or Radar type mechanism, (he get the vibration of feet too)

Gjim

Rain makes a Goku entrance at the end of next chapter

CentaureHeart

Thanks for the chapter! Can't wait for the next part :)

Diplodicus

Awesome chapter Ruff, glad Hongji finally got some prime time, that and a domain to boot!

Allastin

Man, that was a great read. Those people who died smiling was nice. It reminds me of that chapter from “release that witch!”. Where a soldier was asked why does he still fight knowing he might lose everything? He said, “because it’s worth fighting for”. This was a play within the story that touched and inspired many who saw it. 😭

Andrew

Thank you!

Diplodicus

Smells like Rain on the horizon...

Gardor

When did I become so bitter

Gardor

You just hate your main character so much. Giving him split personalities, having him kick the shit out of himself mentally for chapters at a time, putting him in comas (plural!), giving him super-autism for a while, and just in general refusing to write from Rain's perspective. If you ever rewrite this story, you should just kill off Rain around chapter 300, and then move on.

Nobody

I hope we get to Rain soon.

Adrian Gorgey

Rain to the rescue?


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