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Chapter 758

🕑 Added 2021-12-01 01:46:21 +0000 UTC

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Stockmar

Soon Padawan, soon *insert evil laughter*

Zarik0

Did we not get a little snippet of that? it was vs wraight ambush at the north wall we get a little part with Sarnia pov in the fight, its was way back tough :P

CentaureHeart

I really want Bai Qi to lose his flegm and start to sweat and panic. It's starting to piss me off that he's always a trick up his sleeve

CentaureHeart

Damn that cliff, great chapter, hopefully we see the end of it next time

Thanks fixed.

Had to do it at some point, right?

Thenais

Feels like a classic 3 stages rpg final boss ^^

Gjim

Well dang didnt expect the baddy to have kiity litter power up. Maybe Baatar gets a magic shovel or extreme fire hose?

Stockmar

As has been said. That was an excellent read. That was an excellent description of the mind of one of the characters I've loved. One day i would love to see his Rose (Sarnia) in action and also see how she thinks. But still i loved this. Also gave an indirect perspective on the character of the legendary and great Akanai. And Rain ... That was a horrible cliff hanger

Senio Holland

Yessss! 10/10 Ruff - bloody nailed this one. Also - Some typos :) but Alsantset was too protective of her little brother and refused to let it happen. What ashame. Through the streets the moved like Wraiths, working Concealment and Cloud-Stepping

The last several chapters keep on stressing about the dry and harsh climate of the west, and then we get Blessing of Sand Bai Qi. Rain is gonna conjure rain next, isn’t he? Healing the masses and clumping Bai Qi’s shit.

Allastin

Well, Baatar said it before, blessings are nice, but it’s not the be all end all.

Haschen

Bai Qi is a three phase boss fight lol

Diplodicus

Nice Fight Ruff! Really enjoyed this chapter. I hope Rain has some extra shenanigans to pull his dad out of the fire but if you go the Game of Thrones route that's cool too 😢

To be fair, I've been purposefully leaving out the more obvious separated lines, and really any sort of direct dialogue from Rain. For reasons that will eventually be clear

TheLunaticCo

Finally, someone realised it is actually rain(or a version of him) talking to them.


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