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Chapter 761

🕑 Added 2021-12-10 01:49:07 +0000 UTC

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Merry Christmas to you as well!! And thanks for almost six year of great entertainment.

Thanks, fixed. I did it awhile ago, but I forgot to say anything lol

Thenais

it doesn't feels rushed at all. love it like that.

Matt

Take your time. No need to rush or meet deadlines. I think we are all here for a quality story. This arc feels a little rushed but still happy overall.

TheLunaticCo

I much prefer these sort of recap PoVs be "rushed" Since they don't really add anything to the story for me, or at least nothing worth an entire chapter.

Senio Holland

Great stuff Ruff - On the upper edge of rushed, but still high quality! PS: and you think you couldn’t blocked his attack? Don’t be foolish, girlie.” ... Could've?

yea see i knew he said something, but I didn't go back to look at what is was, because I have some changes i want to make to the chapter. Easier to add both in at the same time.

Diplodicus

Also, not sure if you missed this or if Mila doesn't hear it because it wasn't sent, but you have Rain speaking to her in the last chapter: “Be strong, beloved,” I whisper, even as Buddy tugs at his leash once more, but I cannot help myself. “Your father is a strong man, and he’ll recover from this soon enough.”

Diplodicus

Thanks for the chapter Ruff! Really like this one and I felt the pacing was on point if maybe a bit quick, but personally I like details. Although due to the exhausted PoV's it does make sense.

Where the emperor of mankind is but a rotting carrion on the golden throne, Rain might well be following in his footsteps guiding his forces whilst his body lays atop a cot.

Arnon Parenti

Poor Mao Jianhong, walk the Martial Path to the top, gain controll of OP Blessing, Conquer the West, take the Path Less trodden, defeat innumerable imperial Peak Experts, give up everything for Power, and none of that matters, you're only measured for your good looks and dashing figure. If Yan calls him Pretty Boy in battle I think he will flip it, turn True Demon of Allure in a second. What is Ice if not water condensed into a mirror to behold yourself, eh Pretty Boy?

NeWorlDark

I mean this was a solid 7/10 for the plan, they didn't get the kills but the enemy had to reveal probably almost all their hidden cards and they got the cities. Though holding them might be a bitch.


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