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Chapter 765

🕑 Added 2021-12-23 23:54:38 +0000 UTC

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Zarik0

"Dastan Zhandos. He should be leading this retinue, not half-rat Hangman Jorani of Sanshu. Shaking off this "uncharacteristic" bout of self-contempt" Feel off no? no specter normaly no? so cant influence people here if it what is implied (seem so), they dont come near Rain or the Uniter get a new trick here we dont know? or he use his "reserve" of "really controlled specter" to go all in and can expect some big lost if rain is awake and suck a lot of them in this battle "Most of the time, it was sheer coincidence that kept his head attached to his neck, like the time he almost slipped and dropped down to one knee to stabilize and ended up avoiding a thrust he hadn’t seen coming" "Proof positive that dear Mum above was looking out for him" Ah xD i find most plausible its more the Monk and maybe a Divinity who make some "slip" on him or on other so he fine by "coincidence" :P and so they are looking for him ;P "limitless access to freshwater from the Azure Sea. Here, he could drink to his heart’s content" So did the Azure sea is not a salty sea and is a fresh water sea? and they can drink it? (that will be cool and so we get a strange ecology with what monster/animal we have see in this sea already) i dont remember at all if it is the case (fresh water sea) and we get mention on it before in previous chapter The multiple duel one after another and all that feel a little forced here, i expected they gang up on peak expert everytime they can (can kill one in 1 seconde if a good ambush time and multiple one gang up suddenly instead of all staying in concealment, seem more vital to take the opportunity everytime) Might add some line here and here to really show other concealed peak expert block other in some way (undercurrent move or directly by being visible and seeing each other in the eyes and not moving) so the "duel" between two Peak expert who reveal themselve one by one can only be and is not interrupted by others ganging up on one of them and finishing one in 1 sec and get a big advantage if the opportunity appear I want mooree :P this is good xD the tension is big with what is coming :)

Senio Holland

I'd appreciate at least a token effort to get the names correct :)

Didn't Baatar said that Naaran is only average Peake expert, when Rain woke up from the self induced coma. Naaran tried to knock out Lily and Rain stoped him. Baatar pov includes that evaluation didn't it?,🤔

Thenais

Sending orders to Bulat, Ravil, Siyar, and everyone else with a Spiritual Rifle to take the shot as soon as they could [...] Luckily, Jorani was one to fight honourably, indeed XD

Diplodicus

Great chapter Ruff! If I didn't have to wait for each one I would tell you to drag this battle out as long as possible, but I can't wait for the climactic end that is coming...

NeWorlDark

I'm gonna be honest watching martial experts unexpectedly getting shot in face has been my highlight for the last 2 chapters

Allastin

“Well, fuck” Only two words and yet it is one of the most relatable phrase ever


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