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Chapter 774

🕑 Added 2022-02-05 20:48:04 +0000 UTC

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Joel Sasmad

With what we've parked about the importance of the flow of heavenly energy and Rain memorizing the network it flow through does that mean that chi blocking could be a viable thing?

Thenais

best death scene i ever read ;)

Diplodicus

Just had to add, the powered up floof coming to Naraan's rescue is awesome! A really unique and somewhat whacky outcome that feels totally reasonable given the wonderful world you've built.

Diplodicus

Thanks for the chapter Ruff! Loved this one, really liked learning more about Naraan, and I love this perspective you have going with all the Natal Souls, it's really unique! Also personally I think you ended this chapter in a good spot, because although we all hate cliffhangers, it seems almost all Wuxia/Xanxia chapters end in a cliffhangers anyways 😆

Zarik0

Ah a part about Naaran, love it everytime it come, i love grumpy character like him :) particulary when its a character who revolve around somewhat long range, the little touch here and here on him appearing build its character and the part when he here so good with enough time in a story :P "je-ne-sais-quoi" grin :) "Honestly… it’s pretty much like a vascular system, a tangled interweaving of networks that stretch all throughout the body, though I note more than one… blockage, I suppose, or inefficiency along the path, somewhere I feel the flow would be better served if a path were opened or connected." Meridien and acupuncture point blocked and impurities, cultivator style :) really like that its seem like the prehistoric era of Cultivation xianxian style xD the before of it, the moment they begin to learn or more the typping point of it who gonna change and regule all of this and disseminate a general knowledge and how to do it, feeling of prehistoric era of it on the setting of the story, that so new :) "Well… At least now I know why he doesn’t like me. Not because I’m not likable, but because Naaran doesn’t like anyone." Sniff Did the infos of the Natal soul encounter get auto transferred to the Prime? This point is not clear (all time transfert? only one way? to Prime? done passively like a sublink they have linking them all to Prime with a weave of line or etc? need active and conscious effort? and all that) its seem they need to do it consciously as "update" if that the case maybe add a line somewhere when Prime come update him that he update him too with his infos and the reflexion/revelation he have see on the circulation thing and Peak expert and all that, seem fairly important data point "wherein we see an encore of the Lord of Thunder’s performance as he unleashes yet another surge of voltage into his foe." Maybe add "..." on encore or something like "wherein we see an "encore" of the Lord of Thunder’s performance" it comme a bit abrupt and not marked so i stumbled when reading it and do a double/triple take Lei Gong is so badass, Jedi lightning lightsaber :P "None of which includes putting their trust in Legate Falling Rain, which is why three Natal Souls assigned here are standing around and twiddling their thumbs like the idiots they are. “Executive Orders,” I Send, and they all to attention before realizing it’s just another Natal Soul." The picture i get xDD priceless "A suicidal attack, but one all three Aspirants are happy to deliver" Woo did he just really send three people to their absolutely sure death consciously with a order? damm that a escalation vs before "Yet know this, Kharuul does, the biggest heckin’ chonker of a quin I’ve ever met, and more importantly, Naaran’s loyal mount and companion. Who would’ve thunk it? Naaran is a floof lover, just like me." XDDDDDDD you killed me This chapter take the cake out in many way, loved it :)


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