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Chapter 24-2 [Aurora’s Journal: Nathaniel]

🕑 Added 2023-11-11 15:23:08 +0000 UTC

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Ullyr

Fixed in the final draft, thank you! Also responded to your comment above, but since it was under someone else's I'm not sure if it will alert you

Ullyr

Oh, for sure. Threat Acuity was pretty much just free Essence to toss in his pocket after selling it. Not really necessary for his build. In fact, the Academy wasn't necessary for him, he just despises his Family's and the Church's politics and wanted to be associated with some other organization instead of them. Could he have ascended from a young age with little to no backing? Sure, but he knew his Elder wouldn't allow it and would drag him back. Lone Wielders don't make it far.

Foundations seem like the one card class that is always going to be useful no matter what origin card you get and it’s the one class of cards everyone will always have so I can see some sense in leveling that instead of other cards but as the chapter mentions spending the essence to get those to level 6 without leveling any other cards even past level 2 does not seem like a smart decision.

Josh

What’s weird is he obviously had these foundation cards leveled well before he got his Origin card. He said it took a weeks and months after leveling the few to level 6 to get over the sickness or whatever. He’s only had his Origin card since the end ish of the first book. Can’t be more than a month or so I think. What would he have done if he got an Origin card that had nothing to do with Foundations but was like spell related or something?

Yeah, sleep reduction would be the obvious answer. It just seems ominous for the question marks like a potential cursed card. It could extend benefits to party members at higher levels like his luck card. Nathaniel’s build is like a brick house! He only has Luck and Tame Monster as utility and the rest are based off his Origin card and insane foundations. 40/52 cards 9/9 Foundations 30 Enhancements 1 summon (Tame Creature)

Josh

Just a heads up, the Dexterity foundation you have at level 6, but with the level 5 max essence count.

Mike Valentine

I'd probably choose Omniscience over Threat Acuity too.

Seems to be written as intended.

MPod

Revealing Gave 3rd effect last Wielder should be changed to opponent or similar

Stating the obvious I would assume it reduces the need for sleep. Given the rank of the card, I think it would be cool if it also gave some kind of enhancement that becomes more powerful the longer the person has gone without sleep until an eventual drop off if the person has gone too long (likely based on foundations and level of the insomnia card). At higher levels, this could then potentially make it so Nathaniel could go without sleep nearly indefinitely with a large buff. Just one idea that would go well with prolonged sustainability.

Thanks for the chapter! Anybody want to speculate on the effects of Insomnia card?


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