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Chapter 24-4 [Aurora’s Journal: Locke]

🕑 Added 2023-11-26 19:07:02 +0000 UTC

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Ullyr

She's sharp. All of Rowan's companions have good heads on their shoulders. Aurora even had some brief thoughts about it at Rowan's house in book 1 but was disoriented and too tense/distracted to really think on it. Over the course of some months, though? She, for sure, would have put together a few theories.

Ullyr

Yeah, these were a pain in the ass to write and took longer than necessary because of how dull they were. Luckily from now on they will just be copy and paste aside from adding new Cards from purchases/drops and altering existing Cards slightly from Levelling/Promoting. If you read/have read other litrpg that announce skill lists every other chapter or more, this series will never be like that. The full Deck layout--other than this scene, where they are discussing it/Aurora is writing everything down--is only meant to be placed at the end of every book, or potentially also after an interlude during a particularly long installment like book 1 was. They are meant to be 'skippable' for those who wish to do so, but also available for those who wish to scroll back and see what certain skills do during fights :)

Yshua

The stat block/status chapters are rough going. They are highly repetitive, and the interesting bits (If any) do not stand out. I don’t get a sense of the implications of a build from all this, would rather see a sentence like “Locke also had a full suite of stat-enhancing buff cards. With his current level and investment the buffs were modest, but they lasted long enough to be impactful and could be cast again as soon as they expired.”

The Lost Pages

I find it fascinating that Aurora has picked up Rowan's oddities to such a level. And she's not exactly wrong in her assumptions.


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