Patrefans
aesirproductions from patreon
aesirproductions patreon

Chapter 27 [Forgotten Memories]

🕑 Added 2023-12-10 07:19:33 +0000 UTC

Comments

Evan Courson

“How is it that everyone else know about that?” Aurora tsked. -> “How is it that everyone else knew about that?” Aurora asked.

nome cognome

They have been removed for the amazon release.

Bryan

Where do I find the first 20 chapters?

MPod

Any time

“A soft hand caressed my forehead, and I looked up to see a concerned Kasamira observing me.” We know Rowan has a strong desire to have a family this time around. I’ll be curious to see what kind of relationship develops between Kas and Rowan given the two of them can relate to each other in ways that I imagine very few other people can relate to. Plus, we’ve already seen some other party members show an attraction to one another.

Mike Valentine

When Rowan introduces David he mentions the inability to shake his head as a result of sustaining the healing wave. A moment earlier, also while sustaining HW "I shook my head and answered..." regarding Francis. (Also, I love Francis. Heeza a good boy)

The Lost Pages

Ooh what a fabulous start. I do hope Kas fully joins the party.

nome cognome

Oh ok, makes sense

Zachary Blevins

Great chapter I was pretty sure she was going to be a pillar And the emblems, is a leaf not a heart that’s interesting Simply can’t wait for the next few chapters

Ullyr

Me too! :O

Ullyr

You'd normally be right! But, "What happens to you?" is correct in this particular case, since it hasn't actually happened yet, and nothing is currently happening. The sentence is referring to 'What happens in the future to change you?'. Time travel changes word tense in this case, lol.

Ullyr

Thanks, buddy, fixed in the final draft

MPod

gaping whole in reality - > gaping hole* in reality

Ethan Barrow

Thanks for the chapter! I hope he can save her from her original fate.

nome cognome

What happens to you? I thought as I straightened up and gently removed her hand, smiling to show that I was fine. Shouldn't it be either "what is happening to you?" Or "what happened to you?"

QKelpFace

Tftc!

Josh

Great chapter. Kas seems like an interesting character. Excited to see more of her in the future.


More Creators