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Chapter 816 - Nevermore: Nearly Halfway

🕑 Added 2023-12-27 11:50:28 +0000 UTC

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I truly hope you clear the fat on everything Nevermore before releasing on Amazon. The gladiator "arc" was such a waste of time. It should have been, maybe a tenth the amount of words it was. The rest is turning out similar. I'm saying this in the interest of your books being of quality, not of you maintaining a monthly income on wordy chapters though.

Matt Spratte

Thanks for the chapter Zogarth! I really appreciate how hard you work and how amazingly consistent you are! Just canceled my DOF patreon and will be focusing on Primal hunter! Cheers

kiwi

Nah, I'd say we're a solid 10% of the way through

Mat

Are we also nearly halfway into the Nevermore C-grade arc?

Olof Karlsson

Thanks for the chapter!

Will Murry

Nah

Mownmbasa

A fun one to be sure! The Grimoire sets up an interesting twist if someone finds it while Jake is still active even more so by someone who doesn't know he is Heretic! Or better yet the one that gets the Grimoire discovers there is a way to be blessed and Heretic at the same time. Imagine someone like Kratos with his hate for Gods to get something like this and then kill the Gods while being blessed by them!

Tyler S.

If they stick to the 2 years per he should be in his 7-8th year with one more C.D. to go

Tyler S.

But they really arnt, some things have been skipped yes and a name change but its still the same story. When moving from one media to another some details need to be altered to better fit the artistic narrative. So sorry you dont like it but hope you at least give it a little longer before writing it off

Aegir

I know this important for powerups, but god DAMN this is most boring crafting arc of them all. Even the bullshit in Sandy's Stomach and then Curse Crafting eteral hunger were more interesting. This is pure filler and idk how author doesnt feel bad filling chapters with nonsense, must be good $$$

sylvan sommerville

Awesome chapter. But… has anyone seen the webtoon and how there fucking shit up on a huge level like what the fuck is that. The only thing good is the art but the story is just used as a rough outline and they changed it all.

RedFaux

Several decades in universe. I'm not sure how many chapters

john henderson

I can picture it now, they're waiting on him but he actually got there just before them, Sylphie notices him and to the others seems to randomly vanish, but really she just becomes cloaked by Jake and a part of the prank.

joel southard

Nice

Oliver J. H.

Same, I like Jake because he enjoys the challenge. Sometimes that means killing, but when it doesnt its not needed and Jake doesn't seek it.

Bobby B

Good chapter. Progress is appreciated.

Thomas Laptain

I think it's in part a range thing there. I can't remember quite what his range was said to be when it last upgraded, but iirc he can't currently continuously see the maximum detection range, as his mind can't deal with the sheer quantity of data from having that quality of perception over such a large area, so the constant sphere is relatively small compared to the pulses, meaning that his sight could probably often give better continuous sensory input than his sphere for the purposes of archery. Also, another thought I just had, even in situations where he could use his sphere for shooting, unless there is a disadvantage to him using sight as well as the sphere, I'd imagine he might as well use the sphere only for navigation and both sphere and sight for targeting, as more senses on the target is probably not a bad thing.

Daniel

For a skill upgrade path I am surprised his arrows dont work with his sphere. He should get to the point he can shoot backwards and with his ability to see everything guide the arrow to hit home. Since concepts and energy matter more then physics as long as the arrow retains a significant amount of power he should be able to land extreme long distance killshots around all obstacles.

How long has he been in the challenge dungeons at this point?

Ral

He can have a soul poison that makes it hard for them to suppresse their aura and increasea their aggression. Then this is where he copies the consepts from the cauldron skill (he learned the concepts himself with the help of memory legacy teachings) and puts those consepts into his soul attack. His soul attack makes himself vulnerable/bare to them attacking him. So he invites them into his soul and eats/dominates/suppresses them. The only things stopping Jake from doing this is; rank, he may need to be a or s grade; usefulness, it may turn out to only work on super weak things; or finally system fuckery stops it.

austin kutz

He'd need to form a cauldron around them and that's a non-combat skill. It's likely that they'd need to be subdued before he did something like that. I wonder if he could find a way to turn souls into origin energy though. That would be a great way for him to get around his limitations. Sacrifice souls to himself to boost his power, very heretic chosen. In the far future (after he's become a god) he might be able to project the concept of a cauldron around someone using his ocular skill and devour their soul that way but I suspect that would be something he wouldn't be able to do against people stronger than him since they'd just use their will to disturb the concept of the cauldron and prevent it from forming.

ABTelford

I enjoyed the chapter, especially the end where I thought he was going to assassinate the king but instead blew up the roof. 😀. Fun surprise - love seeing Jake be more of a goofball than a bad guy. lol!

ABTelford

Friendly edit: when Jake steals the apple…you had an auto correct error. It’s written “able” instead of “apple”. Gotta love the nonsensical “corrections” it throws out there sometimes. 🥴 😄

ABTelford

Friendly Edits: 4th paragraph after creation of Grimoire: last sentence: “…who KNEW and, honestly, who CARED. Jake being the first was only a good thing for him.” (Keeping the narrative in past tense. I’ve noticed occasional slips into present tense throughout your books. Do you want me to point them out in these comments? I’m happy to edit/read for them but I don’t wanna ruin your happy scrolling, ya know?)

ABTelford

friendly edits: paragraph 8: 2nd to last sentence - ”…which meant rarer paths got BETTER versions.”

ABTelford

Friendly edits: paragraph 5, 2nd sentence - “There existED several…”

ThatOneDamnWeeb

Thanks for the chapter

kingofshibainu

If Jake doesn't use his new stealth skill to prank the sword saint and fallen king when the party meets back up, I'll be very disappointed. Sylphie of course will know he's there because of the wind.

ForTheAfro

Next upgrade (much later most likely) is absolutely gonna include his bloodline in someway and become “Unseen Primal Hunter” or “Stealth of the Primal Hunter” and upgrade to mythical. It’s primed to be part of his Paths self named skills later

Ral

And Jake can feel his poison in his victims. He can also have a clash of souls with his eyes. If Jake compined the three could he take control of other people's souls, or 'consume' them into his soul-space just like that cure of eternal hunger.

Ral

One of Jake's skills allows him to temporarily make a cauldron apart of his soul-space for crafting.

Anthony

If his teleport while in stealth was achieved using stable arcane mana, what would happen if he flipped it and used destructive mana? Could/Would he be the epicenter of a WMD type of attack?

Ansordia

True true, but my piggy bank money doesn't allow increase in my intake 😭, but fret not Zogarth is back!

Hayden Leech

That’s because you’re not using enough.

Ansordia

And my addiction resume... Good the meth was doing me no good

Micah Molina

Great chapter! Hope everyone is having a good holiday! Interesting btw, if these dungeons are indeed images as Jake suspects, then the line about the Kingdom remembering Jake's antics centuries to come have no meaning? Lol curiouser and curiouser

thomas johnson

Can you imagine the failed attempts though lol. Having a royal banquet and Jake appears with a blazing arrow pointed at the king. “Oops. sorry about the interruption.” lol. He did 5 other times so the news must have been going around.

brennon Petersen

Tftc!

S.w.

Mana manipulation expansion - to be able to ‘touch’ things within his sphere of perception! For instance, he could move the lock to the gate even though it’s not visually available but it is in his sphere. This would ultimately upgrade and align with his sphere of ‘authority’ he used with Valdemar.

Andrew P

His movement skill still gets nerves if he's in combat as he hasn't incorporated his arcane affinity into it

Tommy

TFTC Zog!

Tommy

“Seducing a god whilst in C-grade” a how-to book by Jake Thayne

Tim Bartlett

spying on villy isnt a skill so much as an inherent ability, but i would love to see him work on his energy. and while he cant submit a true soul he could use a soul in a creation as long as it was destroyed enogh not to be a "true soul" anymore, so that could be an interesting path

mitchell kaiser

Great chapter! Hope you had a good Christmas!

_mori

Pantheons that rely on faith would probably see it as a threat like you said, but considering who/where it’s coming from, and the fact that Villy hasn’t smote Jake just yet, they may be curious as to how it can affect a budding talent. Maybe a way to let talents keep blessings but not have their Patron God’s records overshadow their own? Even if they see it as a threat, some may also try to weaponize the class, maybe through subterfuge and religious espionage. If a series of blessed start defecting, or if a chosen betrays their patron I don’t think it’d affect a pantheon all too well.

JJB4345_80_815

Fun chapter and a splendid way to finish it! So, what's next for Jake? Core Manipulation? Soul Ritualism (which can he even do when he can't submit anything with a Truesoul?) How much Jake juice does he have in the tank? Can he/should he use his "spy on Villy" skill? What about working on his Arcane energy like the benevolent Monk/soulfist daolord mentioned in the Colosseum of Mortals?

Irakli Jishkariani

Naah, I think nevermore will keep it hidden. Whether jake gets to keep it or not I don't know

BerciTheBeast

TFTC! Good chappie <3

_mori

If he was in the crafting room, they wouldn’t have been able to see anything, and I doubt Jake would’ve advertised that he’s a heretic, so he may not have brought it out in the open until he met with Nevermore again.

Phillip Hazlett

I don't think any gods see it as in recent chapters they've talk about rooms being sealed off from their sight and only the bound God nevermore actually sees what is happening in the crafting rooms.

NoctisMi

I expected Jake to Upgrade the skill to Mythical. Until the point there he won't get seen even after firing his full power shot and would be called [Never-seen Arcane Hunter's Stealth (Mythical)]. Wouldn't mind if that skill get demoted later when he reaches B Grade but for C Grade it schould be a Mythical skill to show the architect.

NoctisMi

Nobody can see the grimoir. Because Jake does everything inside the white room there nobody can look inside. And the system god won't disclose anything either

Zogarth

Fix

Tyler S.

Like that isnt some kind of video game move many of us havent pulled 😆😆

Zogarth

Fix

Zogarth

Fix

JJB4345_80_815

Also when Jake goes to the Medieval festival and steals a fruit from the cart, I believe "able" was supposed to be "apple" Edit: Looks like Adam Grant beat me to the punch in sniffing this out...

Joseph Dizdar

Apprentice would be number 5, so 5 more things. So far he had the conversation, the curse boosting poison, and now his new skill and the grimoire he just made.

Adam

I'm curious how much of the Gods in the audience can see about the Grimoir. That's either a threat to a few like the holy church who keep a firm grip on their followers or something worth investigating to Eversmile as that would make some interesting karmic bonds. Or maybe it's just thrown onto the Wyrmgods Hoard and never seen again.

JJB4345_80_815

Yes, thank you for the chappy Zogarth!

Namorat

The moment he had the able in hand - apple

Namorat

Weeks turned to months as soon nine entire months had passed - and soon probably?

Isaac Bbrhudejdgeve

Great chapter I'm exited to see his new skill in action. Also you used getter when I'm sure you meant better.

Namorat

draw magic circles or something likle that - like

Namorat

was class orprofession - space

Namorat

which meant rarer Paths got getter versions. - better

Joseph Coonelly

"Also, it had to be emphasized it was class orprofession. " (Missed space: or profession. ) "The moment he had the able in hand, it was affected by his stable arcane barrier, too, promptly disappearing." (able - apple) Thanks for the chapter!! Loving your work Zogarth!

Decibel790

Ohhhh dear. I can't imagine the kinds of shenanigans Jake will get up to with this, haha. Thanks for the chapter!

Adam

" as he even grabbed a fruit from one of the many stalls and tossed a few coins of the local currency into the till. The moment he had the able in " Think you meant apple?

Gavin

He made a legendary skill. That's insane. Absolutely massive. So he is going to submit his apprentice so he has to make 3 more things?

Hayden Leech

What a dick! Just floats in, breaks their castle then fucks off? Bruh

Mats

which meant rarer Paths got getter versions (Better)

Ivan Majstorović

Tyftc

HARITH

tftc

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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