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Chapter 864 - Nevermore: Twin Emperor Identified

🕑 Added 2024-03-05 11:41:38 +0000 UTC

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Zach Newman

Thanks for the chapter

Endless Nature

Thanks for the chapter

Micah Molina

I remember at some point Villy talked about One-Step, about how many gods have a version of it. But was also, unaware of any one actually maxed it out to a divine level. At the time, I thought this was an open foreshadow that, if no one has, Jake would probably be the one to do it. Edit: you add that to what Arnold once thought about, you can't outrun the hunter. So Jake being the one to take One Step to new heights, fits his themed path.

Olof Karlsson

Thanks for the chapter!

Ty Cooper

I really wish Jake would mod out one step. I know he want to walk a path of purity with it but dang. Well hell I feel that way about a lot of the viper skills. Touch of the Hunter is going to be amazing. I get it with those as they offer a lot of good. Maybe that is one of the steps to godhood, make them your own or something.

Arden Burrell

I'm really ready for nevermore to be done. I honestly wish it ended when Jake got 105%. Especially this final level being multiple chapters. If it was one paragraph i woud be happy. Don't get me wrong, I like nevermore, but I'm ready to leave. Especially when I know zogath will have some amazing arc transition chapters.

Trevor Mergen

Thanks!

Bobby B

Zogarth is a genius. If he follows the Nevermore trend of stretching out details he could spend 3 books just catching up with everything that happened during Jake’s time in Nevermore. BRILLIANT $$$

Bobby B

I agree Palmer. While details ARE important, much will be lost or irrelevant in the greater multiverse. I believe there is a huge foundation for many more books outside of Nevermore. Granted a lot of great things happened for everyone involved in Nevermore that will definitely spice up everything to follow. It just seems strange that the next 3 books will be all Nevermore. Is what it is. TFTC

Silent Otter

I think the Temlat arc in particular has some of the most important and impactful influence on Jake's character growth that we've seen so far. It's kinda the first time he's had negative consequences to his actions that he hasn't 'overcome' or been able to explain away. Also, we know that while we may think everything that happens in Nevermore has no consequence outside of the dungeon, Jake has shown he holds a different ideology, at least somewhat. This is shown with what happened with Rick the Troll. Additionally, if we only ever got lore dumps regarding things that had a direct impact on the greater storyline, the story would end up feeling less well rounded and full (in my opinion). I think it also goes with Jake's personality to know random facts? All that is to say - Having extra info is almost never a bad thing in these stories. We are all just junkies starving for their fix. Zog is essentially forcibly edging us. What a bully.

Palmer Evans

There’s just certain things like spending half a chapter explaining Twinheaded Ogre lore that will probably never become relevant to the story after Nevermore. Laying the groundwork with lore, side characters, etc. is perfectly fine since that groundwork can be harvested down the line for a big payout, but a bunch of the substance of the Nevermore chapters seems to probably be fairly self contained. For instance, the investment into Temlat’s character. I do think your points on us being starved for other povs is true and I’m definitely looking forward to that, but I just think there’s been a hefty opportunity cost associated with the sheer length of Nevermore.

Captain the Red Beard

Complaints all the way down.

Ral

Plot twist it is a triplets head ogre!

TKOva

I don't think he'll kill EH but for sure it's going to ruin El hakkans rise to power by literally making it so his own people hate him for manipulating them.

Arkenian

I mean, don't be too impatient. This floor this week, cliff the rewards, and probably rewards and catchup with others/consolidation/God chats next two weeks, and then the next arc gets more serious

Cursadderr

Thanks for the chappy!

Cursadderr

Glad i wasnt the only one with this thought lol

Ty Cooper

I mean weapons and armor need so repairs or replacements. I would not think everyone would be decked out in good accessories like Jake and team.

Ty Cooper

I am going to laugh so hard if William steals the kill on Cheeto's planet. I know it won't happen but would be funny.

Ty Cooper

With grades come years.

Ty Cooper

I agree. I think Nevermore is a big foundation for what is to come. There is so much that Nevermore has given us so much to look forward too. Plus I think it will be much better on audible. It can seem daunting a chapter a day, because we love the story so much we want to keep reading. That means it's caught us.

Silent Otter

I think people are gonna be grateful for Nevermore in the end honestly. I think something that ruins a progression story is the MC growing too fast. Even if you use big time skips, it can devalue the struggle if every book advances a grade. I think the payoff after Nevermore is gonna be more than worth it. Not to mention that one thing the Nevermore arc has given us is a desire for ANY other points-of-view. Early Miranda chapters, for example, were much less interesting at the time. Whereas now, we could get a week of chapters that didn't even focus on Jake directly, and it'd be great. Personally, I'm in it for the long haul. And thinking that at some point this story is gonna end, does not make for happy thoughts. So I'll take whatever background lore or world building we get. And as others have pointed out, reading this piece-meal is really what makes it feel so long. Also, Zog posts a chapter EVERY DAY, other than weekends. Every. Day. I'll catch whatever he's throw'n to keep that pace.

Josh Hietpas

Severe time dilation so its only been a handful of years in the real world. Plus they are D, maybe C, grade at this point so they should be big chillin on years to live.

Johnny_B

Also C-grade hawks probably have a way longer livespan

Shannon Bryce

Time dilation in nevermore. 50 years isn't 50 years.

Scion

people complaining about others complaining about others complaing about others complaing.

Scion

time dialation, only been 3-5 years outside.

TKOva

I think the Cheeto fight is closer than we expect. Especially with what homeboy is doing on his planet that if we're honest is concerning that he's worried about the Karma on the planet being so fucked up. And we know that's EHs planet and we know that it's EHs bloodline fucking it up. And there will be a reckoning.

Jason Hardman

Cho'gal in another guise, although likely less dumb 😁

KenTX325

Yes, we have a lot of story lines and characters that are going nowhere till we get out of Nevermore. I miss Villy interactions, Sandy, and others. We have a prima war to plan, chosen stuff to do, places to visit. I think EH confrontation is way off. Needs to start thinking about B grade.

Chloe

I think some of us are more interested in the family stories that have kept going. And then the Artimis romance. Cheetoes are... 2ndary to me when other character updates and romance are available.

Chloe

50 years at Nevermore. And this mention of the Fort has me thinking... Just occurred to me how are Sylphie's parents? Jake's parents? Hawks don't live forever. And that got me wondering how about what happened to Jake's valley and the troll in the cave therein? Going to be a neat bit of catching up.

TKOva

Mm I honestly don't think so. Because even cheeto man knows he can't fight him straight up. He can barely keep up with the sword saint. But honestly I feel Jake isn't gonna fight cheeto. I think that's gonna end up being a rematch with the sword saint. No I think Jake is gonna have to contend with someone different overall. Maybe even the god himself. Weakened obviously. But I think Jake is gonna kick Mr ima make a story out of yous ass while the viper sits there sipping tea and watching the bloody good show happening.

CinnamonHawk263

Yeah pretty much, nevermore has been going for 200 plus chapters and as enjoyable as it has been we want see some more plot and finally see this arch come to close with the leader board.

Josh Hietpas

Thanks for the chapter! Great as always! One smol little thing, there are two “it”s in the last sentence of the third paragraph. No big deal, just thought i would let ya know so editing for the book down the line is easier. Again, thanks for the chapter g

Daermon

This is something I have been thinking about for a while. It is hard to understand the relative power levels of the “new universe”. I am guessing it is going to be something like a hard counter that makes that fight hard. Like in strait up combat Jake wins add in bloodlines and now Jake needs to grow in order to temper his mind.

TKOva

Honestly I feel the nevermore complaints stem from everyone wanting to see what Jake does to Cheeto Prime and his God. Because we know how Jake works. And will Jake be pushed to his extremes? Yea sure. But is Cheeto Boy on his level in combat? No fucking way not even close. If Jake uses his boost. Cheeto is so fucked. Even Valdemar couldn't beat him and he had no idea what it did. We barely do. But we know Jake will savor that fight for everything it's for.

TwistedVanity

Thank you

TKOva

Wrong type of Ork. But I understand the confusion.

Decibel790

The plot thickens. Tftc!

Comments are the place for people to post comments about their individual views on the content they pay for. Just live and let live, stop complaining about others so much.

Marcus Evenett

I 100% agree let the author tell their story it is their story after all. But I personally believe that all of nevermore is ultimately pointless. Other than the bits with the gods in it all nevermore has been is a fancy time skip.

Clark Price

Sayonf this every chapter isn't going to do anything. The gang is back together like people wanted and people still complain lol.

Captain the Red Beard

Tyftc!

Osamaru Ta

Plot twist, this floor actually makes all the rewards in the rest of Nevermore hahahahha

Osamaru Ta

I mean, that's true I guess. They're set dressing, essentially.

Xarow

They are NPC’s they will never make sense and produce weapons until they bury themselves XD

joel southard

Nice thank you for the chapter

KenTX325

A good last fight and some more levels is nice, but please don’t stretch this out. I think most of us are done with Nevermore.

Xarow

Thank you for a good chapter. Felt far more in touch with the story today. People need to stop moaning about Nevermore. If you have a problem, take a personal break and get a summery catch up later. Let the story be told as the author wants it not to match your attention span.

Mohammed Sheekh

trying to be as patient as possible, just please wrap this whole arc up zog please, if only I could warn my past self about this arc

Osamaru Ta

Why would the " weapon industry be in full swing" if there were so few people left to USE them?

Kevin M. Schwaller

love the subtle Ogre Magi cameo here😁👌🏻 tftc

John Balman

All that school work is paying off LoL

Chris

Hittin stuff is fun. Hah aha ha ha ha!

Matthias

tftc

BerciTheBeast

TFTC!

Yaldabaoth

WooooHoooo!? LessssGOOOOOOOO!?!?!

CinnamonHawk263

Yeah Zog is being a bit of a bastard by teasing the end a few chapters ago only to draw out this last floor.

JJB4345_80_815

Friendly possible edit: "Jake sure as hell wasn’t doing to stay back to experience it." I believe that the word "doing" is supposed to be "going"

JJB4345_80_815

Yes, thank you for the chappy, Zogarth!

Valhazstromoz

Makes me wish zog would introduce the orc race and their divine pantheon of WAAAAAAGH!!

Naotsugu97

Cheers!

Burkes

Kinda want this floor to be done with and wrap up Nevermore ngl.

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

The Dyslexic Cloud

tftc


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