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Chapter 840 - Nevermore: Infinite Loop Agent

🕑 Added 2024-01-31 11:47:58 +0000 UTC

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Juozapas

I really like this dungeon stuff, but understand how some can be annoyed by slow progress

Hunter Thornton

The primal spymaster

TwistedVanity

Hmmm. You are an awesome writer. But this seems like a very complicated scenario. I shall be interested to see how this slots in with the challenge dungeon dynamics. I'd also like too see how a few other characters fail miserably with this one. Such as sylphie. I like how the challenge dungeons are doing different things inside the main dungeon. And am loving Minga Another request I'd like to see yip of yores chosen fall flat on his face in some dungeons. He may be an elite but he is an elite of stories. Even if he changes the outcome with his powers to then win. He makes people believe lies, then that belief makes thoses lies true. He is s schemer, a con artist a liar, a trickster. His vile cunning alone should make him contender. Show him cheating, but don't make him awesome please. To be fair he shouldn't be able to cheat Nethermore so maybe show his patreon cheating on his behalf to change loses to wins? Just a hopeful suggestion.

Rezkin

Lol, this will be hilarious!

Olof Karlsson

Thanks for the chapter!

Jared

Tell us what you really think jeez

austin kutz

Pretty sure he isn't actually getting paid for this though

Chaotic Chaos

Good chapter

Aegir

The crafting dungeon was worse, at least this is mildly entertaining even it is completely low effort garbage filler.

Thenais

currently playing elminage original. “You merely adopted the grind, I was born in it, molded by it,”

ABTelford

I too am hoping for some actual plot development. I can’t wait for Nevermore to end too. Some chapters have been fun but 80% has been…very skip able.

Chris

Yup

Chris

March…man hope not. Hope it’s done tomorrow.

Naotsugu97

Oh please oh please oh please!

Mohammed Sheekh

exactly, nevermore is just another tournament of power in dragon ball super :/

Bryandbc01

I assume by March at the maximum we will be done with this challenge dungeon, and probably be finished with nevermore.

Seen Death

I wish i could skip comments as proficiently as you skip chapters

Cody C

God this is like book 3 of just nevermore with almost no substance or plot. Kinda wild im just kinda skipping around to arcs that seem interesting

hachetnif

I went back and read some of the past chapters and it was good But I still feel that there's a lot of stuff in nevermore that will not matter but I stop thinking it of primal Hunter and just decided that I will not look ahead and think about the future of Jake and what will happen at the end arc when he beats that good for nothing other chosen and it will start off the grand chosen wars

MilkTheShark

"but no not worry, that is no requirement" -> but do not worry, that is no requirement

Abhishek

I need to see the results of nevvermore quick!! Also want to get back to the main arc lol

Will Murry

Ok maybe I didn't call it

Ral

Tftc

kiwi

this was funny

Luke Scheffe

Love nevermore, looking forwards to seeing more of it.

Hodge Wasson

In book format it would necessitate heavy editing just due to the nature of consumption. I think one book with more in-between the challenge dungeons would be better for book format. More needs to be retread in episodic publication, so it would probably read more smoothly as a novel.

Yaldabaoth

Lessss Gooooooo!? These are amazing breaks between studying and papers!! Ty ty ty! 😊

Ben Heystek

Honestly the story is great and I love all of this backstory and the factions jake is dealing with now. To read how jake reacts to these people is amusing and interesting as the story unfolds tftc and keep up the great work

Yaldabaoth

🎼🎵Infinite agent Jaaake!🎵🎼 🤣🤘🤘 LeessssssGoooooooo!?!?

Yaldabaoth

I was thinking the same shit! Lmao! 🤣🤣🤣🤣 This is fecking great!? 😭🤣🤣

Ben Heystek

Honestly I'm loving the story seeing how Jake being jake in this situation and all the challenge dungeons. You are doing amazing work keep it up. Looking forward to the next chapter to see how the story unfolds and who maybe the shadowy figure of this organization

JJB4345_80_815

I think that there's several issues coming into play combining together leading to the dissatisfaction. One, if Jake dies here things get reset - no big deal and therefore no lack of danger and also the perception of no real growth associated with that lack of danger. Another is that there's been a bunch of questions that have gone unanswered and the long slog through chapters where it's hard to see the light at the end of the tunnel somewhat. We've all been waiting to know how Jake is doing compared to Ell'hakan and if Jake's going to do unprecedented things in Nevermore but have had to wait for months and over a year for some of these questions to be answered. I get it, it's hard and not fun. And maybe the most crucial issue is the lack of side character development. That's extremely hard to do when Jake is solo dungeoning for this long. People are begging for Jake to be back and interacting with the other characters because anyone that he gets close to in these challenge dungeons just gets erased/reused for the next challenger. I didn't get why some people were so crazy over Temlat and wanted him to continue past the House of the Architect but now I kinda get how these challenge dungeons are really just interaction desserts (edit: deserts - sandy places not sweet treats) and the thirst for genuine connection is real. My favorite challenge dungeon was Minaga's Labyrinth BECAUSE of the banter between characters that are going to last post Nevermore. While I understand and even partially agree that these are all issues with the current storyline (& hope that they aren't recurring issues henceforth), it's still Zogarth's story and we are all just here for the ride. It's his genius that shapes the story and he has a proven track record of delivering the goods. I really want those questions answered but I trust Zogarth's process in telling his story.

Namorat

Please continue writing the story you want to share with the world.

Valhazstromoz

Villy's watching in the background with a tear in his eye as he watches lil jakey play these fools for ssssssssssuckerssss lmfaoooo

Kael

Great reference 😂

Tyler S.

He will back just far enough away with his loot to watch the dumpster firetrucks to crash and burn

Tyler S.

Minor typo in.. "I understand you no not share our conviction, but no not worry, that is no requirement."... (No not worry -> do not) Thanks for a fun chapter and reminding us that its sometimes the small jobs in-between that bring in the bling.

Jeff McCulley

Also: “way was the right to do.” …the right thing to do.

Govir Drauka

Oh shit, it’s PETE! (People for the Ethical Treatment of Elementals).

Zogarth

fix

Zogarth

fix

Tyler S.

Would you perfer this arc softly broken between books and challenges or a long book to just get through it all? I have felt that Zogs books are fairly short for his story arc breaks, and would much love a long 120+ chaptered books for all of Nevermore/challenge dungeons

Joshua Tamayo

Infinite loop agent made me smile

JJB4345_80_815

Happy for the chappy, Zogarth!

Sam Rosenberg

Really great chapter. I am enjoying this

Jeff McCulley

“…the Baron and Duke ensured him…” Assured

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

Jonathan

”I do indeed. I am indeed and a shadowy organization that have been semi-threatening me has been Mentioned how it was a big family, It mentioned

boopsie malone

Agreed, I inhaled the entire series in a couple of weeks! I started to worry midway through the labyrinth, though. And then there was another labyrinth. And now Jake's a postman in pretend world. Hopefully Zog wraps Nevermore up soon and Jake can get back to arcs that matter.

donvitogonzalle

Yep this challenge Dungeon is even more boring than the house of architect. I cannot get invested in the story because I already know that whatever happens has 0 relevance for the plot

Den

For a fistful of Nevermore Points

Decibel790

Pfffffft; poor Jake, always gotta keep up the hustle. Tftc!

Ty Cooper

I feel Nevermore as a whole will be so much better in Audible.

Ty Cooper

Lol he let's the lie detector go through just so he can tell them he doesn't care.

Joanna Newhard

"I am a Courier in order to be challenged and to gain as much recognition as possible as I grow my reputation and rank as a Courier." This sentence reads as if something is missing. Consider rephrasing it and maybe adding a comma too.

Kaibutsu

Keep grinding! I find it funny how easy it is to judge someone else. Because tbh what's the difference between consuming sentient elemental and just killing them or other sentient creature for experience? The method is different sure but the outcome the same - they stop existing.

Tucker Glick

And this is where Jake runs off with rewards from both factions

Gavin

This was really funny 😂

Rolf

Thank you for the chapter! A word missing in "in any way was the right to do" -> "in any way was the right thing to do"?

Wolven

It’s been almost 200 chapters of nevermore, I don’t think the sentiment will change in book form.

Colonel Doloryas

Love the story, but please make nevermore end, it's lasted far too long.

Hodge Wasson

This marks 101 chapters of challenge dungeon plot. Interested to see where this specific one goes, but faaar more interested in seeing the final combined rewards and the crew joined up again to progress further through Nevermore.

Matthias

Tftc

Sammot

You should remember that this is going to be in book form, where people will binge read it all while we are reading it chapter by chapter. If you could binge this all at once it would probably feel way better paced.

joel southard

Nice thank you for the chapter

Frederik

"not knowing the other party had the exact some idea." I think it would be same and not some tftc

bauspar

Second. Its just Nevermore in general tbh.

Pip Mitchell

Tftc! Minor amend, pre-elemental = pro-elemental

Mr. Truthly

Infiite loop agent achievement.

Goncalo Silva Santos

Zogarth, I love you and I love primal hunter, but this arc is getting quite boring at this point. I find myself skipping the entire chapter. We know there will be no substantial story progression until we get close to the dungeon ending, this just feels like filler. Just my 2 cents

Farmingaround

Tftc!

Detrox

Nice!

Steven Myer

First!


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