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Chapter 952 - A Bright World

🕑 Added 2024-07-12 11:17:04 +0000 UTC

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Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Kconraw

Thx for the chapter

Korrasis

I miss Villy.

Luis

thank you

Athena

Click on the Membership tab on this page, then under Quick Links there is a link that will take you to the Discord server.

Shaibene

Jakes going to get the god to expose themselves as a heretic and the holy mother will kill them in an instant, removing all the elves blessings

Luis

Can someone give me the link for the primal hunter discord server please. (I installed discord today and don't know how everything works yet)

Jeff McCulley

Jake doesn’t do religious shit. He does, however, tell people they’re being idiots when they choose to get right in his face about it. Which these folks may well be about to do. If not…he’s got a Guardian to hunt. And Miranda to warn about idiots.

Mat

No way Jake is going to do some religious shit. It’s Prima guardians Hunting season

Rhysal

He should definitely leave them alive. If he kills them Yip and his chosen will use that in their narrative where as right now they all hate Yip and his chosen.

Clint

Having the whole world specialize in the light affinity seems like a great opportunity for Jake. Lots of high rarity light-affinity herbs!!

Rezkin

I know the feeling and am in the same boat

Demonshadow639

Is it wrong that I hope the later happens and he ends up having to do a planetary ritual of sacrifice. And kills all of those on the planet that worship the great bright one? Who is actually an evil god probably. Well that or he is a god from before the system due to faith energy and now he is elevated and thinks he is the top. That will be fun maybe Jake can even kill the god and get a huge bonus before anyone else in his universe???

Mr. Truthly

Kills the random god xD

Jordan Rogers

No I’ve run out of chapters😱

Kevin

Interesting idea about the unique lifeform. While a god wouldn’t get good records from 1 planet, the potential benefits from the people making it to higher grades makes the investment worth it.

Naotsugu97

When it’s presented as a directive from a “god” and perpetuated by a religion. The Catholic Church in the dark ages is a good example. In modern times research papers from the UN highlight the importance of education in regards sustainable development. The more religious a country the less access to education. I was just making a light hearted observation about the aberrant population referenced in the chapter. But evidently Catholics and people from Utah took offense.

Stuart Thwaites

I might be miss reading this but, do You think that getting rid of contraceptives would make people ignorant and poor?

Mat

No way Villy will be interested unless Jake perform a planetary sacrificial ritual and Jake won’t done that

Jj

Tftc

Jj

It makes sense though, right? Unless they have ties to other planets or a are aligned with God's that let them know the situation how would they know? What information they get from any source might be skewed or an outright lie anyways.

Hunter Thornton

This is only gonna end in 2 ways. 1 Ol Jake turns the entire planet into heretics, which will further his profession or 2 they all try to kill him when they find out he’s Villu’s chosen, which will prolly upset him a bit cause there doesn’t seem to b very many high level folks there. Honestly I hope Zo flips a coin for this

Josh Hietpas

“Hey jake, you know what will be really funny and interesting? Watch this.”

Josh Hietpas

Lmaooooo

Josh Hietpas

They would lose their minds if they found out his profession lmao. Not only is he a heretic, hes also the chosen of a different god, so to them, like double heretic… heretic squared? Thats 4x heretic. Very heretical.

John Looney

His profession could use some levels lmao

DirePants

*sigh* 🤦🏾‍♂️ can I block people on this app? I really have no patience for dumb people who know everything.

Vega

Will he turn an entire civilisation away from their god? That’s gotta count for some good Heretic points

Moontunnels

Modern science is the worst

Moontunnels

I love this series

Taylor

Jake “Oh great here I go genociding again”

Kyle Hunt

Interesting thought, however, unless it is a subordinate god to Eversmile, no. Jake would have seen through a false blessing tag in his identify. Also, if I remember correctly, Jake can sense blessings without identify, and he is very familiar with Eversmile's aura.

Kyle Hunt

I could see the sisters having their "little sis" give a warning to some fledgling god on their behalf if they found it too troublesome. She's kinda a big deal in the eyes of the sisters as, to them, she holds a near equivalent rank.

Kyle Hunt

A stopping point is the "end" of something, this stopped at the "beginning" of something... The practice of which can absolutely be called a "cliff-hanger." Zogarth does this in nearly every chapter, rarely ending a chapter at an "ending," and usually ending a chapter at a "beginning." It is a tool that works well for building anticipation and the like at the end of a week, or occasionally in the middle of the week. Zogarth overuses the tool, however. This isn't a slight, just a critique.

SmokeJam

Late Night High Thought: Could this be one of Eversmiles experiments?

Kyle Hunt

Technically, if he added a bit of Jake juice, he could potentially shoot an arrow that perpetually circled a planet, stopping for nothing and penetrating anything in its path.

SmokeJam

Or he just adjusts his Primordial Shroud and lets them see his Blessing.

Kyle Hunt

Probably didn't seem worth it. These are mortal affairs, and he knows Villy is busy with divine affairs. He may ask later out of curiosity, to get a real answer... However, the answer will probably be "Who?"

Ansordia

Typical of a mushroom hater...

Kyle Hunt

You're assuming this Great Bright One even knows about EH and Yip. Remember the 4th Desert Queen from the Endless Empire that tried to label Jake a heretic? Perhaps the Great Bright One is similarly unaware, or perhaps he/she simply doesn't care, because let's face it, Yip probably doesn't care either.

Kyle Hunt

Why would going to Nevermore prevent them from believing in the precepts of this Great Bright One? The existence of non-believers does not invalidate belief, whether that belief is true or false.

Gwiddion

It could perhaps be a unique lifeform that is able to bless people before godhood. As it gets stronger through it's following. I doubt any hod would proclaim himself creator of the system just for a few measly record's. But a d/c grade unique lifeform would gain a zon from sth like this.

Trevor Mergen

Thanks

DDHG

There couldn't be. Outside of some interesting ripple affects. There should be no way for a god to directly influence a planet before the system. Concepts and records may spread like with Artemis and the Pantheon of life, but just like that. A entire planet following one god before the system? Nah. That has to be post tutorials fuckery, and some balls on that god to claim he made the system.

Jake Atwood

Honestly think it would get him close to 300 or at that level cause that’s a lot of very devoted people and the amount of records he would get from it would be a lot too

Tommy

If the Bright Ones name is Lightbulb I will lose my shit 😂 Thanks for the chapter!

DirePants

Great. Another cult. IRL or not. I hate cults. They do make interesting plot points tho.

Naotsugu97

Don’t kid yourself. Any religious directive to do away with birth control does not take personal choice into consideration. Rather, it’s a way of keeping the masses ignorant and poor.

Historia Jinn

I don't think it'll be a problem at all, all Miranda gotta do is not badmouth there god and it'll probably be alright, unless they learn of Jakes heretical status of course, then it'll be big problem for Jake I'd imagine

TyranT-Rex

All the other system events transported them somewhere else and blocked the connection. I assumed he could still talk to Villy since they weren't transported and Jake didn't mention feeling Villys live stream go off.

John Durrett

The difference between a Religion and a Cult is a matter of Numbers. Once a cult reaches a sufficient size to defend itself from external attacks and hold its turf - Its a Religion. Same principle applies to when a collection of people is recognized as a Nation...their big enough to defend their turf against powerful adversaries.

John Durrett

Haven't heard Jake talk to Villy for a while now.

John Durrett

Or maybe their really family oriented, getting married and have kids.

SmokeJam

Their worship song is "You are my Flashlight"

SmokeJam

TFTC. Sounds like a proper well maintained small-god-project, love to see the little guys putting in the work too. Maybe we don't have to kill them but The Lightbulb gets recruited by the Viper.

Forrest

I can forsee Villy turning off a light

Jeff McCulley

I think that you need to take a closer look at those definitions. The one you’re referring to isn’t referring to a group worshipping a god. This one is more appropriate: “a relatively small group of people having religious beliefs or practices regarded by others as strange or sinister.” “Relatively small” meaning a mere single planet. Or however far they’ve managed to spread the influence, still relatively small compared to the multiverse.

Jeff McCulley

Miranda doesn’t deal with gods. Her patrons, maybe—as opposed to Villy—but not Miranda.

Stuart Thwaites

If you look at the definition, all religiousgroups are cults Cult: a system of religious veneration and devotion directed towards a particular figure or object. But yeah, definitely some indoctrination went on at this planet. The god is also asking for serious trouble. They're not just making an enemy of 1 divine faction but ALL divine factions. Every other god recognizes that there are other gods and that no matter how powerful they are, the system is above them in the pecking order

Gallagher.563

This is way too small a problem for Villy. I am not even sure this is a problem at the level of someone in S grade. This is like a Miranda level problem someone (C or B grade). A grades and beyond should be dealing with whole galaxies or at least Star Clusters.

joel southard

Nice thank you for the chapter

Gallagher.563

The dynamic of these planets knowing nothing or very little about the bigger Multiverse is fascinating.

James Faulkner

Great lol

Abhishek

Your insight astounds me. Salute

Dan

Jake's either about to give them a huge lesson in multiversal history, or he's gonna keep his mouth shut, kill the guardian, and move on so he can just get the reward and leave the education to Miranda later. I'm betting on the latter

Jeff McCulley

I kinda feel like maybe they were a god here before the System? Either that, or they were the sole Tutorial sponsor.

Jeff McCulley

So…just how many Profession levels does Jake get for turning an entire planet into heretics? Seems like that would a way to catch his lagging Profession up to his Class.

TyranT-Rex

To be fair, if Yip is openly challenging primodials, he would consider every other God a minor one. The Bright one might not have anything against Yip, as his path is about creating a story of a Hero. And both the Bright one and Yip can exist in that narrative. EH's bloodline can actively work to change these elves subject of worship to him. Seems that he doesn't want the elves to interact with EH because of that. But i do think this is a smaller God that is trying to set up something similar to the holy mother.

Arieh Sochaczevski

Thanks for the chapter! I can see Jake getting by with just keeping his mouth shut for now. I suspect that delegation will prove to be a larger problem. Maybe even a Villy problem.

Ivo Wißen

But he can make a deal with the wyrmgod

Ivo Wißen

Can he ask villy? It is a system event is the communication with god's limited like every other system event?

Andromeda Adams

Yes, that would be a problem. I can already see it lol.

DDHG

You know what. I can respect the hussle of this god, find a planet, get a hold of them quickly and lay claim to them before other gods can muddy the water. Make yourself out to be the beacon of light that will improve their lifestyle and monopolize it. Technically not a cult as the god of real, is it scummy? Yes. Will it be funny when the Viper bitches slaps their god for trying to have Jake killed for being a heretic? Yes. New Jake elf harem potential? Yes.

hachetnif

Yeah I'm already having terrible ideas about what's going on on this planet like whoever does not serve the bright one are hunted down by the drone inquisitors and so on.

Thewalterwhite

Villy should use Jake to flex on him a bit

Thewalterwhite

When they already think EH is a heretic, what will they think about Jake??

Jeff McCulley

I think the “problem” will be whether Hake can keep his mouth shut over the next few minutes. Otherwise he may need to use that “first privilege” of his ring.

Jeff McCulley

I’m not sure whether Jake’s going to have to ask Villy…or if Villy’s gonna pop in if his own accord, after hearing that!

Kuniku778

Would you like to hear about your lord and savior, the great and benevolent Bright One!

Mat

It’s all good until they want Jake to acknowledge the Great Bright One as a superior being

Jeff McCulley

You consider that a cliffhanger? It’s simply a stopping point.

Andromeda Adams

No, he already had an affinity with darkness. Which is how he got Shadow volt to begin with. Also because he had got those bracers of Umbra before that.

Aerlevsedi

I wish it was late March so we could have an April fools chapter where the great bright one is the first sage. Would be hilarious.

Ian

Wow, that was a while ago...wasn't that due to his Shadow Step being of Umbra, thus pushing him more towards a darkness affinity at the time?

Abhishek

These cliffhangers are getting ridiculous!!

Cordell Patrick

Depends on the size and if he can feel the target but possibly later on when his sphere can encompass a world then yes he could probably shoot an arrow around it

Phasmatic7

Thankies for the chapie zogie

Jerrid Klassen

Yeah back in book 2 I think he even had a weakness to light affinity against the stag if I remember right

Justin saldana

😂😂😂 Jake would find a cult of elves

Michael Lambus

Could Jake shoot an arrow around the world?

William WIlson

No they are in c grade. C grade starts at level 200

Rad

I always found “the difference between a religion and a cult is how many people and how much money are in them” to be a funny and typically accurate way to think about it. This “Great Bright One” is likely comparatively a cult in relation to the actual big religions in the multiverse.

William WIlson

The Order of the Malefic Viper is generally considered a cult.

One Winged Angel

Please tell me the cult of the bright one is led by a radioactive ghoul trying to go to the moon....

ItWasIDIO!!

Cultist to his has to be a Cultist his patron is an "Evil" Snake God this should be ok as long as Jake doesn't try to argue

Conclave

The amount of bullshit like "Creator of the System" make that outcome pretty possible lol

Conclave

Mmh. Jake will have to play the honesty card at some point, at least after he deal with the Guardian as I don't see a way were hidding his identity as the Chosen of the Danger Noodle end up good. As long as this bunch ends up being "The ennemy of my ennemy is my friend" everything should be alright. Especially when the Friend shows dominance

Olof Karlsson

Thanks for the chapter!

Seen Death

Tyfc! Im curious how this god plans to uphold the potential lies hes told his followers, atleast saying they created the system should be easilly disproven, unless they did infact make A system that kind of works with the actual system?

Drew

How much you want to bet this god is like...barely over the threshold from S-grade and freaks out when finding out who Jake is.

Mantiqore

yay you've chosen to follow one delusion over the other

JJB4345_80_815

Yes, thank you for the chappy Zogarth!

Ahmad Kiam

To be fair every organization is a delusional cult compared to Jake.

BubblyGhost

Technically every religion is a cult, but there's a difference between the delusional ones lol

TyranT-Rex

Oh man, I sure do hope that Jake doesn't do something heretical and mess up The Great Bright Ones faith farm.

Govir Drauka

TBF to cults, isn’t Miranda’s god a cult too? I feel like someone we know is referred to as in a cult.

TyranT-Rex

He'll probably ask Villy next chapter.

BB8ALREADY

I think they just aren't in C grade yet no?

Dolduck

Delusional. The word you're looking for is delusional

James mMcClellan

I feel jake is gonna ask Villy about the bright one and it either a bound god for the planet or the god gonna die for disrespecting all God essentially for being in the system and said God being cockyer the yip of yore. ( jake ask Villy ->most elves start screaming and fainting due to death of god)

Lizy Flore

Thanks for the chap ! I absolutely cannot wait for Jake to mess things up a little haha

Anime Problem

kaalveiten

lol get mormon'd

Andromeda Adams

Okay, that was a great chapter! You can almost hear Jake sighing at the end as he realized it was a cult. Considering Jake definitely can’t use light affinity well if at all. Will this guardian be a problem? Thank you for the chapter!

BumAssBumAss

The chosen of a snake cult complaining about a shiny cult.

Micah Molina

Lol, you know this is probably one of the few times someone can run a scam like that. If the God is trying to, that is. Like to a new universe an average god can actually preach to be beyond their means. "I am the creator of the multiverse". Lol, I imagine one might even do it to stave off boredom. Edit: also I'm surprised he didn't just ask Villy or had the event limited divine communications?

Clint

Or their world just didn't produce any standout talents... If they had the same number of monsters and pylons and such as a world with 1% of their population, level growth could have been much slower with opportunities harder to find.

Xarow

Ahh they are elves so maybe the Altmar Empire has a god called Great Bright One. Bright as in smart not light.

Dave

TFTC

Xarow

This god surely can’t be some minor one right? To openly stand in the way of Yip’s chosen is asking to have a visit… unless they are minor and feel sheltered enough by someone else powerful to do it… My first guess was someone connected to the Holy Church but does not quite make sense as they are supporting Elle right now.

Naotsugu97

The population number is probably bc contraceptives are banned by the “the bright one”!

D

There’s no way their god can prevent the wyrmgod from providing nevermore tokens so I am guessing they just don’t return and then taking the token became taboo

Eiv

And then weekend comes 🥲🥲 TYFTC

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

D

Nice

Namorat

I can't be second?

AfroMocha

Tftc

Kt-x

Thanks for the chapter!

Mr. Truthly

Yay a cult. This is totally not gonna end with jake having to murder a lot of people xD

Michael mann

Ooooooh this should be good! Jake’s about to make a “god” get real humble real quick

Zack Leach

I desperately want to see villy interact with the "great bright one"

Paulo Furlaneto

Tftc

visigoth

Great Bright One: Hands off, EH! This is my cult!

Numbzy

It's religious cult. I bet Jake does something heretical.

Decibel790

Hahaha. I can only imagine how these elves would react to villy.

Bryandbc01

Light cult

Jed

Well this is going to get interesting fast

Tilen Praprotnik

Thanks for the chapter

One Winged Angel

Dune Elf Planet in entirely white light.....ISSEN AL GAHIB!!!!

Abdulaziz ALRumaih

This should be cool

Mae

Tyfc

Ivan Majstorović

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