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Chapter 955 - Equal Contributors
🕑 Added 2024-07-17 11:07:46 +0000 UTCAll’s well that ends well. At least, Jake thought so after he had expertly politicked his way into convincing the other World Leader to release the Prima Guardian. What’s more, it turns out the elven World Leader was way more decent than Jake had initially expected.
It hadn’t taken much convincing to make the guy agree to activate the Prima Guardian, not after he knew Jake’s identity. In the words of the elf, if Jake couldn’t beat the Prima Guardian as the top-ranking person on the Nevermore Leaderboard, then they wouldn’t have stood a chance either way and would have faced total annihilation.
There was one minor issue, though.
”The Prima Vessel struck down on the other side of the planet from the capital, and while we have populated much of this world and have some forward bases, there is still a vast area of wilderness between the nearest teleportation circle and the Vessel,” the elven World Leader explained.
”How long do you reckon it will take to reach it?” Jake questioned.
”With my speed, around half a day. We could also try and find a space mage to make things faster, but I doubt I would want to. I know that the Primas made use of those with the space affinity among them to reach out defensive positions faster, but I’m not sure if bringing along a third person would be wise,” the elf said, shaking his head.
”Why not?” Jake asked. If they could get there faster, that would just be great.
”It would risk exposing things,” the elf said as he seemed to think for a while. ”This may seem presumptuous, but would it be fine if the story after this becomes that the two of us faced the Prima Guardian together?”
”Will we face it together?” Jake questioned. ”Not gonna lie, I feel like you would be more of a liability than any kind of help. In fact, I’m positively certain you would cause more harm than good.”
No way Lone Hunter would work if he did actually fight with the guy, even if he was a lot weaker. Also, while Jake said the elf felt about as strong as Reika, he questioned how good the guy would actually be at fighting if he had just been the spiritual leader for his planet this entire time. He definitely specialized in a Path revolving around being the Voice of the One rather than a fighter.
”That’s a bit insulting but probably also true,” the elf sighed. ”My point is that should you just kill the Prima Guardian alone, there will be many questions, while if I say we killed it together, there will be far fewer who raise any issues. I want to keep it entirely ambiguous who contributed the most, allowing everyone here to believe I was the one who did the most, while anyone else who hears about it will naturally know I was just a tag-along required to release the boss.”
”We can talk about that on the way,” Jake said, not outright rejecting the idea as he did want to ask some more questions about this entire planet, and seeing as they had quite a few hours of traveling through the wilderness together, he reckoned there would be plenty of time for that.
”Very well,” the elven World Leader nodded. ”By the way, I noticed I never introduced myself. Name’s Kindroth, Son of Kindrothar… yes, my father didn’t have a lot of imagination when it came to names. Ah, but please avoid using my name when around others. No one has actually called me by it ever since I got the title of Voice of the One.”
”I guess you already know, but my full name’s Jake Thayne, no idea where the Thayne comes from,” Jake also reintroduced himself. ”Now, how do you want to approach going out there, oh Voice of the One?”
Kindroth smiled a bit at Jake’s mocking tone as he got down and stood beside Jake. ”Again, I must act presumptuously and make it look like we’re walking out there as equals. If not, it will just cause undue trouble I don’t think either of us want.”
”I genuinely don’t care,” Jake shrugged, the elf looking relieved at the answer. ”I do care a little how you will introduce me, though. Because there’s no way I’m going to let you tell everyone I’m some agent sent by the Great Bright One. Oh, and also, I already told that council of yours I don’t follow a god, so that may cause some problems.”
”Is that because you don’t want others to know you are the Chosen?” Kindroth questioned, surprised.
”At the time, I wanted to avoid it,” Jake shrugged. ”I get the feeling they wouldn’t have allowed me to see you had I introduced myself as the Chosen of the Malefic Viper.”
”True, they would have likely tried to evacuate a very willing me to some safehouse while trying to make you leave the planet… something I don’t imagine would have ended well for them, seeing as you need me to free the Prima Guardian and you don’t strike me as the sort who would have just left,” Kindroth nodded. ”But if you are fine with people knowing now, let me formally introduce you. As for what you said to the council… well, you don’t exactly follow the Malefic Viper, now do you? You instead embody his will and act as his mortal representative. Merely saying you follow the Malefic One doesn’t do such a vital role justice, so you never lied in the slightest.”
Jake looked at the elf a bit and saw him flash a familiar smile he had seen Miranda with several times. The guy really was good at lying and twisting the truth, which shouldn’t be that surprising considering what he had accomplished on the planet.
With a plan of sorts, the two of them walked back through the hallway of light, and as they passed the different rooms with light elementals inside, Kindroth held out his hands as each elemental turned into a beam that light that shot toward him and formed a small rune upon landing on his body. The elf obviously noticed Jake’s interested gaze as he explained:
”I am able to absorb and use light elementals, and quite honestly, I’m pretty useless without them,” he said with a wry smile. ”It does fit me pretty well thematically, though. Summoning a light elemental as the voice of someone called the Great Bright One is very convincing.”
Jake didn’t comment but just nodded as they soon reached the exit of the mountain. Outside, the entire escort group, mercenaries, and guards waited. When the gate swung open, and they all saw the Voice of the One, they all instantly fell to their knees, with even the mercenaries acting overly respectful.
”We greet the Voice of the One,” the two guards said in unison.
”At ease,” Kindroth said as he raised a hand and he turned to look at Jake. ”This man and I are on our way to release the Prima Guardian now and slay it.”
His words were incredibly direct, earning him many confused gazes as one of the mercenaries stepped forward. ”Excuse me, but weren’t you recruiting us to help face the Guardian?”
Kindroth looked at the mercenary and nodded. ”That is true. However, things have changed. I would welcome you all to continue helping against the Primas, but the Prima Guardian shall be handled by the two of us.”
”I don’t mean to question you, but I have heard these Prima Guardians are not to be underestimated…” the mercenary said, and Jake detected some genuine worry from the guy. Jake wasn’t sure if it was because he was a decent guy who wanted to warn another person or that he realized shit would hit the fan if the Voice of the One went and got himself killed, but it didn’t matter either way.
”Your worry is entirely needless. This is the will of the Great Bright One, and besides, I do not go alone,” the Voice of the One said, looking back to Jake. ”Introductions may be late, but allow me to anyway: This man is the Chosen of the Malefic One, the pinnacle of our Era. With him at my side, what do I have to fear?”
Jake saw Kindroth give him a subtle wink, and Jake instantly understood. His aura flared as the mercenary stumbled back in fright along with the escort group and guards. The guards even seemed to take a defensive stance but didn’t go further than that as the Voice of the One spoke.
”I believe there shall be no further objections? Good. Now we shall be off; there is no reason to delay needlessly,” the elf said, turning to leave.
Jake just gave them all a nod as he followed, deciding to not say or do anything that could disturb whatever ploy the elf was cooking up.
None of them dared say anything, though they definitely looked like they wanted to, as Jake and the Voice of the One headed toward the capital city, flying at a steady pace. Once there, Kindroth had them stop by the Council Estate to explain their plans, and all of the council members were shocked when they learned who Jake really was. Any kind of worry that Jake could be a danger was also shut down by the Voice of the One, allowing the two of them to leave quickly and really showing how much damn influence the elf had. Even if he didn’t officially lead the planet, it was clear his word was law, and if he told them to jump, the only question they would ask was how high.
A few teleports later, they finally reached a forward base wherefrom they would head into the wilderness. Every person they met on the way there bowed in reverence toward Kindroth, with the elf responding with kind words every time without missing a beat.
However, once they were out of the cities and made their way a bit into the wilderness, the elf let out a huge sigh. ”How do you keep up with it?”
”What?” Jake asked.
”Being more of a figurehead than a person,” Kindroth said. ”It’s exhausting. The constant expectations of perfection and flawless modicum in any situation, the fact anyone believes anything you say is pure fact and won’t even argue back or advise you on anything even when what you say is dumb as fuck… for a while, I thought it was great, but now all it does is tire me out. You know, that’s one of the reasons I was keen on having a council and rarely get involved with anything they do. I’m sure they can govern way better than I can, and I can just act like some benevolent semi-divine existence without them questioning anything.”
”If it’s any consolation, going by how things are here, they definitely can rule the planet better than you as a council,” Jake shrugged. ”As for your question… I kind of don’t feel like that? It’s probably because you are a public figure, while I remain very much private. Those I do choose to interact with on a regular basis I view more as equals, with them also treating me as a person.”
”Sounds nice,” Kindroth said with a dry smile. ”You’re the first person I’ve had a normal conversation with where I don’t have to pretend for… well, ever since Nevermore. I went there with a group organized with input from my Patron, so I could act pretty normal there. Now that I’m back here, though…”
As the two of them continued their journey, they continued having small talk. Jake was also surprised at how casually the elf had quickly begun to treat Jake, as he was also used to people acting weird once they knew he was the Chosen of the Malefic Viper. Perhaps it was because he had been socially starved, or just that he was so used to never being viewed as beneath anyone, so he wasn’t really thinking about it, but the elf seemed more than happy to treat Jake as an equal.
Another positive thing about the Elven World Leader was his speed, which genuinely impressed Jake. As a light magic user, Jake had expected him to be pretty fast, but he surpassed expectations and could keep up with Jake pretty damn well. The fact Jake still couldn’t summon his wings did slow him down a little, but just using One Step and flying normally, Jake was still pretty damn speedy.
Jake and Kindroth did encounter a few Primas on the way, but Jake easily handled them one after another. They were all pretty damn weak, and based on Jake’s estimates, he didn’t even think the Prima Guardian would be stronger on this planet than on Olliandra’s. It would probably be dependent on how many Primas had died.
There was one time when they were attacked by four Primas at once that Jake let Kindroth handle one of them on his own, and as expected… he kinda sucked in combat. His offensive power basically came down to summoning light elementals and basic magic attacks, and that was about it.
On the defensive side, he was pretty fucking good, though. The Primas couldn’t even try to catch him, and Jake understood why the guy hadn’t seemed worried about getting killed by the Prima Guardian before Jake could help. He was a man fully specialized in conning the populace and being really good at running away.
As Kindroth had said, it ended up taking them about half a day to reach the Prima Vessel. Once there, the two of them briefly discussed their approach before Jake headed up into the sky as the elf entered the Vessel.
The plan was simple: Jake would go stealth and prepare his strongest attack far up in the sky, while Kindroth would go trigger the Prima Guardian and then quickly run out of the Vessel, never once attacking or directly engaging the Guardian with the hope this wouldn’t interfere with Lone Hunter.
It was indeed a simple plan, thought up by a simple hunter who soon stopped once he was above a few layers of clouds as he got ready. He proceeded to make his Protean Arrow, specializing it to kill flesh and blood lifeforms as practically every Prima they had seen was one, and he even put on his best Heartrot Poison to really ensure it would be a real killer.
Nocking the Protean Arrow, Jake held nothing back as he began charging his attack with Arcane Awakening fully activated. The arcane energies revolved around him while Arcane Powershot built up power, and just then, a beam of light flew out of the Prima Vessel.
A moment later, another figure followed. The Prima Guardian that appeared reminded Jake a bit of a lamia, actually, with a squid-like bottom and a kind of more humanoid top section, though it was still a bit away from actually looking like an elf or human. Not that its appearance was that important, considering Jake nor anyone else wouldn’t be looking at it for long.
Kindroth, as the target of the Prima Guardian, kept dodging away as it chased him, having turned himself into a living beam of light. Jake took his time to fully charge the attack, as the elf really didn’t look like he was in any danger. On a side note here… Lone Hunter was still active, though Jake really didn’t have much time to consider if it really should be.
A dozen or so seconds passed with the Prima Guardian trying to chase down Kindroth, until Jake felt his body reach its limits. With a final deep breath, Jake released the string as the attack descended, parting the clouds in its wake as it left a trail of destructive energies.
To make sure he would hit, he naturally also made sure to use a Primal Gaze on the Guardian as it froze up, stopping its chase. Kindroth barely had time to materialize to see Jake’s arrow strike true.
Perhaps it was because the Prima Guardian didn’t have any time to adapt and improve, or maybe it was its slightly lower level… but this time around, Jake didn’t end up needing any follow-up arrows. The attack hit the Prima Guardian right on top of its head, blowing it apart entirely before continuing through its body, destroying it from within as more than eighty percent of its body mass was destroyed with that one arrow – its surviving flesh infected with Heartrot Poison.
It was pretty satisfying seeing Kindroth gawk in awe as Jake got his notification.
You have slain [Honored Prima Guardian – lvl 315]– Bonus experience earned for killing an enemy above your level
Satisfied, Jake descended toward the elven World Leader. As he did… Jake actually felt a bit nervous that the elf would start to act weird, as he had enjoyed their more casual interactions over the last day or so. However, that proved to not be a problem. Right when Jake got close, the elf exclaimed loudly.
”You are fucking overpowered, you know that right? Damn, now it makes sense why the final message I got from my Patron was to not piss you off; you’re more dangerous than this entire bloody Prima Invasion.”
Jake couldn’t help but smile as he shot back. ”And yet we were somehow equal contributors to the outcome of this fight.”
”I know, right? How nice of me to give you credit despite doing most of the work,” the elf smirked, staring at the huge crater left behind by the remnant energy of Jake’s arrow after it had destroyed the supposedly planet-threatening Prima Guardian.
Comments
Joshua Little
Thanks for the chapter.
Ender419
I agree. He would be a great ally and most importantly a member of the galactic council once Jake is made the administrator.
Nexas Aurelias
I like this guys I hope he sticks around
Alex
Vesperia is really slow. It took them almost two weeks to reach the prima guardian. :) Jake is doing one a day or sth.
Alex
I like him. Also they seem like morally decent people in general. With some powerleveling theyll be great. Im fine with the cult-y stuff. Theyre not jerks about it. And it did help them keep people alive during the integration and prevent civil war. Seems totally worth it to me. And most of all, I love that he is able to treat Jake as a regular person. Thats super super rare.
Adam Birch
I know this planet isn't that strong but with their massive population and relatively well-preserved infrastructure I feel like they would probably be a solid ally.
Daniel Smith
That would be so good
LongMickeyRicky
Can 79 not also be a lot of countries ?
Lonnie Sizemore
Aww Jake makes a confriend 😄 I don't think his god will talk with the viper much as they're holy church affiliated.
Shaibene
Pretty sure, Jake just hasn't visited him again yet, he didn't dissappear he simply hasnt shown up in the story again
Dragon
Our real world earth has 195 so idk what your talking about
Dalton Brooke
Please let the great bright one be a version of Minaga!! 😂
Azayrian105
And he didn’t even get a level for it.
SqrlyGrly
Dude, pretty sure Villy killed him
TyranT-Rex
I think that's what will end up happening. EH is focusing on the top worlds and we know he lost some people in his fight. Its possible he is losing even more. The Earth folks are helping all the little worlds that EH basically abandoned. Going to make it difficult to shit talk Jake when so many leaders have positive things to say about him and its not because his bloodline messed with their emotions.
Kyle Hunt
Don't forget the old dude who studied his arcane affinity and then disappeared. I really want to know who abducted him.
Kyle Hunt
He's got nearly his entire planet eating out of his hand, and he isn't doing anything malicious with that power. He'd be a good fit, and the fact that he doesn't show reverence for Jake would be a something Jake would want in his council members.
Kyle Hunt
Honestly I was expecting it to be an elemental prima and Jake's protean arrow to have done nothing. Lol.
LongMickeyRicky
To be fair, 79 countries is a lot of countries
Michael Crowder
Thank you as always for the chapter! my favorite part of the day is when you post the next chapter!
Inv7ctus
I have a hunch this guy is going to become a useful contributor, and someone whose assistance Miranda will appreciate greatly. Also, he's kinda fun.
Walter Kimberly
I absolutely love those small throw ins about people saying there Patron told them not to piss off Jake. Tyftc
Andrew P
It'll be interesting to see how el'hakan tries to spin Jake's actions as evil. If the earth people save far more worlds than the alliance and ask for nothing in return, it should be great pr
Burkes
W elf bro
J W
Oh yeah I forgot about the sweet new dungeon. Can't wait to see what the twisted imp makes out of that.
Precursor
its more like he made a back up plan in case things don't go the way he wants though it won't stop Jake
J W
He already dumped the ruling responsibility onto the council. What he needs is to somehow convince them all that the great bright one needs him to venture into the wider cosmos to help spread the word.
Stuart Davis
I hope this guy comes back. He’s fun.
Kevin Watson
let me be the Voice of All when i say, keep this guy around
Phoenix
Taking time to explore the galaxy while helping others and showcasing Jake and his friends is fantastic! Nice reset before things get stabby with Ell'Hakan. Did Ell'Hakan have second thoughts about his patron? He had some internal dialogue many chapters back where he appeared to lack confidence in either his patron or what he was doing for his patron.
KenTX325
Maybe he will come visit the new dungeon.
Frédéric Cantin
Thx for the chapter
Jelani Willock
Izil, I gotchu
FastBilliam
Maybe the son could be Hafkindroth, like the strongman Halfthor? Hmmm…
joel southard
Nice thank you for the chapter
DDHG
All like that Jake has made another true buddy and companion. I think this is the thing that will be the fall of the Orange fuck. Jake actually having friends and not mindless drone who worship you. Yadda yadda, the power of friendship. But, what will happen if Ell'Hakan powers slip or stop working due to being over taxed, or Jake's aura influence happen. He will be alone and without any assistance.
DeamoniumDraco
Needs to be public so everyone can just gawk at them
DeamoniumDraco
True. And even if they are "weak", doing well in the event will give more than enough records to make up for it
DeamoniumDraco
Straight up tells Jake he is a larger menace and danger than a System event 😂
Mat
At the very least this guy needs an embassy in Haven to escape the “cult”
Mownmbasa
I'm getting the strange feeling that Jake is well on his way to make the whole Altamar empire best buddies! Meira, Artemis, Kindroth, the elf girl who wanted to buy back Meira (for the life of me can't remember the name). Why do i get the distinct feeling Jake is about to make another Pinnacle god a friend? I approve of this message!
SmokeJam
About that Lone Hunter skill working: I think as none of the two considered Kindroth as an attacking party, not even he himself, the skill should definitely work. If the elf had used any other skill than an escape skill, Lone Hunter would've probably not activated
kingofshibainu
Ok, I like this Elf. Kindroth for new drinking buddy!
Dan
Lmao I like this guy, he's pretty chill once he ditches the "voice of one" crap. Looking forward to the role he plays in the Earth Alliance
Rhett Russell
Tftc
Seen Death
While he seems to be a fine guy, i doubt hed be a good fit for the council (in the normal sense) because he basically pulls a jake and has everyone else govern his stuff for him haha Hes not great with combat but maybe he would be a good figurehead for unity, maybe using his massive population spread rumors (but it might be more accurate to call them truths) about ellchonken Just having them not be on ell's side is a boon
Jacob
I like this guy. This guy is to Jake what Jake is to the Viper
Alysyn
…and we have a new bestie on the list!
Lynderyn
Am I the only one who thinks if Jake becomes the ‘owner’ of the galaxy, then this elf may end up on the ruling council for the sole reason he didn’t protest about Jake’s plan but still appears to have a brain and spine when needed.
Xhaare
New drinking buddy?
Tristan
You know what I like this elf I kinda hope he sticks around in the story
William WIlson
I kinda want to know what Ell’Hakan has been doing. That being said we have to remember that at the end of this chapter we are maybe 3 days into the event. My thoughts are that while Jake's done a bunch others haven't really done as much. Like I think Jake has done all this in the same time it took for Sylphie vespy and the king to finish off the other world.
William WIlson
Yes I can see that.
Sacchito22
I could see him and Miranda getting along famously though.
Brandon Racca
Got to say that Kindroth is probably one of my favorite recent side characters.
Kt-x
Thanks for the chapter 🙂
Phasmatic7
Thankies for the chapie zogie
Stuart Thwaites
And her string of curses ,aimed at Jake, between each meeting.
SinCinnamon
I really, really want à Miranda chapters a some point to see her dealing with all those saved planetary leaders.
SinCinnamon
I feel like he will get along too well with Miranda. Could be a strong ally in their Galaxy.
Mrburns93
I was worried this voice would be a major twatwaffle that Jake would have to put in his place, but I think Jake may have found a friend.
Exaiter
I like this guy. Hope they stay friends
liquid_helix
Nice work Zog
William WIlson
I don't think kindroth will ask Miranda to help but might take a number from Jake and become more private. I also doubt Miranda would accept the offer considering it doesn't align with her path. Her path is aligned to Jake's path. However I could see Miranda teaching someone for him. I just think kindroth will become far more private maybe making some excuse that the bright one wants him to be in seclusion more, while sneaking off to earth for beers with Jake.
Trevor Mergen
Thanks!
Dustin
Yup. Wouldn't mind seeing a buddy cop jaunt through the multiverse. They could probably have a lot of fun.
ItWasIDIO!!
Gonna bastardize some sayings from a favorite show hope someone gets it *Looks Jake in eyes* "I'm a Dirty Priest" also "Age of the Priest Jake age of the Priest"
A Flashy BR
New friend hellllll yeah
Lazy Tyrant
This guy is going to meet Miranda and then try to come up with a plan to ally with them in a way where he can dump all the responsibilities on her hahaha
Lazy Tyrant
Honestly I can almost see this guy trying to offload a ton of his duties onto Miranda lol
Jj
That elf is a fun character. I can see them becoming allies at some point. Or maybe Yip's chosen tries to take over the planet because he allowed Jake to assist him? Thoroughly enjoying the progress of the story. Thank you for the chapter!
John E
Lol love the world leader, hope we see a little more of him on the future!
Noah Jackson
Love the world leader and tyftc!
Tommy
Holy shit I just typed pretty much the same comment on the guy, and I didn’t even see your comment! Must be true, he IS a chill dude
Tommy
Fair play this Kindroth seems like a pretty chill dude
RonGAR
LOL Looks like Jake made a new friend. I see an alliance in the future. Or at the very least a pen pal who Kindroth can speak normally with. LOLOL Clearly he needs it. He is starving for 'normalcy'. He has conned himself into a box of self-isolation and propriety. I bet he can't even get laid without a massive ceremony. LOL
Elliote Elanor
This is awesome, defenetly better interaction then expected
Michael
This elf is gonna be great friends with earth
DirePants
I like this dude. I like em a lot lol he’s super chill and open and I like that he’s a not groveling slime ball. Just a guy who lied to everyone for their own safety that came with some benefits and an unwanted responsibility. I wonder what the outcome will be if this planet pledges itself to Jake. Will they be told the truth or will that hurt Kin’s path? 🤔 I’d imagine the answer is yes to both. I also wonder how damaged are the paths of the citizens themselves? All pledging themselves to lies. Not telling them the truth would still limit them because they’ll never grow if the don’t experience the rest of the multiverse right? As always very good chapter with new possibilities for the future. I really need to take note of how Zog does this.
Lay Nkay
I think I like this new guy.
Avi Singh
Didn’t think I would end up liking the World Leader for this place but he turned out to be quite refreshing. Definitely hope he shows up again, even if it is diplomatic stuff with Miranda.
Olof Karlsson
Thanks for the chapter!
Andromeda Adams
I know a lot of others have said it but I love Kindroth. His joking at the end was hilarious. Made me think of Caleb. I hope Jake and Kindroth become friends. TYFTC!
Chewbacchus
When talking about the primas and defensive positions, should it be '[our] defensive positions' instead of '(out)'?
Chewbacchus
Tftc!
Namorat
As so many others have already expressed: great job with the elf. He is an enjoyable character I wouldn't mind spending more time with.
Junon
I like this guy haha. Hopefully we see him again at some far future point when it makes sense story wise.
JSC
My favorite line… Damn, now it makes sense why the final message I got from my Patron was to not piss you off. 😂
TKOva
Also Light based Deity with an elemental background. I think they're gonna have one of each element. And now Jake will be called captain planet.
TKOva
Agreed, also him and Miranda are going to be frenemies I can fucking feel it.
John Balman
LoL fun new character wonder if we will see more of him in the future LoL
Michael Kawesa
I think he’s doing it for the rewards at the end. Not for the challenge this time around.
Ty Cooper
That's great. I was wondering when Jake would one shot a prima guardian. Ha as much a Jake is hating politicking, he is rocking that sh*t.
Alex Salamanca
This guy's pretty chill, Jake made a friend
Stevean Bozek
Jake has made a true friend on this trip. I thought he'd be an obnoxious ass but nope, truly a good guy under all the bullshit
Ethan Alexander
This elf seems like a pretty chill dude
Reno
This is pretty sweet. I like how down to earth this guy seems to be. I wonder if he'll eventually run off and give the planet to Villy's order, to be done with all the fake bullshit. He will be tempted.
Brandon Turner
Damn it I like this guy
Arieh Sochaczevski
Far older than the internet, even if you count the oldest military precursors.
Harbby
Tftc! I like this elf dude.
Cory Sauls
The ending was humorous. TFTC
Moontunnels
I hope the Prima event collect achievements and we get a chapter to read all of Jakes
Jackson Seals
Not gonna lie, I like this dude. Hope a particular writer isn’t too vindictive
James mMcClellan
Rather than cliche it's an old saying that is probably older than the internet.
Paulo Furlaneto
Tftc
Mack
So far so good— both planets he’s been to to kill the prima guardian were interesting and potential allies
Nathan Sanchez
"Each elemental turned into a beam that light that shot toward him" -> "that light" probably sounds better as "of light"
James mMcClellan
TFTC. I think everyone need a good con artist friend, I feel this is gonna become a bridge to future events for kindroth or maybe his god working as a middle man to keep things neutral between the Holly church or just get some info from.
Conclave
Thanks for the chapter. Yeah Kindroth is definitly a cool dude, especially considering he didnt just shat himself knowing Jake's power after witnessing it. Jake always appreciated people that talks to him like he's just one dude. No reverence or disrespect and honestly from a long time it just has been his draconic friend on Villy's planet and Sandy that ever act normally with him from the very start. He should enjoy that guy's company
Frederik
a Potential Pantheon member for sure
Katiyos
I Hope WE See this Guy noe in a regular Basis, they got a nice sinergy
Matthias
Tftc
Tilen Praprotnik
Thanks for the chapter
Arieh Sochaczevski
Thanks for the chapter! It’s nice to see Jake making a new friend. “Jake saw the guy give a subtle wink[…]” Which guy? The Voice? The mercenary? Also: “[…]if he told them to jump, the only question they would ask was how high.” This is a huge cliche. I know you’ve been comfortable with those elsewhere, but it might be worth saying this in a different way.
Tyler S.
To be expected it wasnt much of a hunt lol
Dave Powell
Excellent
Tyler S.
Would be a great addition to the upcoming galactic council
Ryan Ulrich
I wonder how long Jake will hunt Primas considering there are only a handful that will offer any kind of challenge.
JJB4345_80_815
Yes, Thank you for the chappy Zogarth! Also, just wondering if Kindroth's grandfather was named Kindrothoror? Maybe if Kindroth has a son he can call him Kindro? I'm liking this elf! 🤣
Eiv
I like this elf. Hope to see more of him. TYFTC!!!
Rick Delallata
*Radio beeps* Tactical nuke inbound!
Justin Buro
Love Kindroth, definitely pivotal character material. Even if he's not a big player, I'd definitely like to see more of him on a regular basis, like how often we see The King or Miranda
Decibel790
Ngl I'm enjoying kindroth. He's a conman but his heart seems to be in the right place, and he sounds like he's got a decent sense of humor too.
Clint
Tftc. One-shot a Prima Guardian. Check.
Bruce Sheplan
Jake is so OP i love it 😂
TyranT-Rex
Zog you do a great job with your characters. I'm really liking this elf. It will be nice for Jake to have a non earth person that treats him like a normal person.
Jordan Rogers
Nice of Kindroth to share a little bit of his exalted glory with Jake like that.
Jana
One Shotting a Prima Guardian was something I was looking forward to and I’m very glad we even got an appreciative Audience.
Naotsugu97
TFTC.
BlackRazaras
Thanks for the chapter
JJMand
That elf is actually a pretty guy, I can definitely see him contacting Miranda to establish relations with earth, and by extension, with Jake.
SmokeJam
Gotta say, I like this Kindroth dude
deus vault
Tftc
BumAssBumAss
Thanks for the chapter
C0bra$
Thank u
Owen Kaz
K.0!
Xarroworth
Tftc zog!
Michael Jewell
Tyftc!
