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Chapter 1032 - Primal Hunter vs Celestial Child (9)
🕑 Added 2024-12-02 12:14:30 +0000 UTCJake’s Pride of the Malefic Viper pressed Ell’Hakan as he managed to force the nahoom back by unleashing a blast of arcane mana, and using that opening, Jake rapidly charged and loosed an Arcane Powershot.
More flesh and blood were torn off as Ell’Hakan was sent spinning, but he stabilized in mid-air, only to unleash a crescent wave of starlight that tore apart the tower Jake had quickly dodged behind.
Nocking another arrow, Jake barely stepped down in time to teleport away as a beam of moonlight struck where he had just been standing, giving him just enough time to shoot another arrow.
A flash of sunlight from above sent another laser of pure fiery destruction down, the energy mixing with the moonlight as Jake felt the attempt to slow down his movements once more, but with Pride, he managed to resist and avoid the beam.
The heat still singed him, and it put Jake in a bad position as Ell’Hakan used his movement skill to close in again. Jake was forced to take a nasty cut to avoid lethal damage, his movements not as fast as he would like to as even if Pride allowed him to avoid much of the double domain’s effect, he wasn’t entirely immune.
Still, Jake got in a good hit in return, stabbing Ell’Hakan in the chest and tearing out another piece of flesh. By now, the nahoom barely looked like a nahoom anymore. Most of the skin and flesh on his chest had been sheared away little by little, only to be replaced by starlight. He also only had a single leg left, with even that being partly replaced with the same celestial energy.
It was evident he was out of vital energy to regenerate his actual physical body and that he was just doing stopgaps to keep himself moving. The limits of Willpower truly shocked Jake, as he wasn’t sure if anyone else could have kept going in the current state that Ell’Hakan was in.
Jake would compare the current Ell’Hakan to a leaking faucet... no, a faucet that was filled with holes while still being turned on. Usually, this faucet would be connected to a water tank – the soul and his resource pools – and needless to say, having the faucet be this fucked up would empty it out pretty damn quickly.
However, Ell’Hakan kept himself going by constantly filling up his water tank. He’d effectively placed a waterfall of faith energy right above his water tank, pouring in energy constantly to keep him going.
Even as Jake began to poke holes in the tank itself, making it leak all over the place, Ell’Hakan kept filling it up constantly. The waterfall just kept pouring... and while he, in his extreme delusion, believed he would survive once it stopped, Jake was certain of the opposite.
The moment he ran out of his constant torrential supply of faith energy, his water tank would empty within seconds, resulting in his death. Of course, there was one more way to kill him before that happened... to destroy enough of the water tank to make its structural integrity break down entirely.
With the cracks showing even on his physical body, Jake knew the nahoom wasn’t far off from collapse. The Willpower of Ell’Hakan was not only actively controlling the waterfall pouring in faith energy, but the duct tape making the current water tank not fragment and break, and at some point, the nahoom would simply not be able to keep up anymore.
Of course, Jake couldn’t say his own body was in a good state, either. He’d been under the constant exposure of domains for most of this fight, slowly whittling away at his resource pools as he had to fight it off. Not to mention the fact he had to replace his scales many times over, had to keep Presence active for much of the fight, and all the hits he’d taken to avoid more serious ones.
It all added up, and contrary to Ell’Hakan, Jake didn’t have an endless supply of energy... not that he would want to enter a state similar to Ell’Hakan’s, as the second he’d done so, he was already a dead man walking. His soul had taken damage beyond repair a long time ago, and he was realistically just waiting for death right now.
Jake’s own soul was also already pretty damn strained, having kept Arcane Awakening fully active for a while now. His skin was slowly peeling from the overflowing arcane energy running through his body, and his internals had taken some damage from both the arcane energy and celestial energy battling inside of him. He hadn’t lost any limbs yet, true, but only because he’d avoided those kinds of injuries at all costs to avoid a decrease in combat ability. Due to the current state of Ell’Hakan, trading blows simply wasn’t worth it most of the time, so even if Jake could bisect Ell’Hakan in trade for an arm, he wouldn’t do it.
That was the case despite all the chances Ell’Hakan gave Jake to do so, and even when they clashed once more, and Jake got a great chance to cut off the nahoom’s one remaining limb, he refused as he didn’t wanna risk losing his hand in return. Instead, he just landed a light stab before getting away, avoiding taking an injury himself.
“You fight with fear,” the Celestial Child said, giving pursuit. “Why? Do you not trust in your own will and desire to live like I do? Where there is will, there is a way. I believe, no, I know my soul is one with the stars and that I am eternal no matter what happens to any of my vessels. You cannot kill me... but it appears as if you believe I can kill you. That’s why this isn’t a battle you can win. You don’t believe in yourself enough.”
Jake ignored him entirely, as quite frankly, responding was a fool’s errand. What was the saying again? Never argue with delusional people because they’ll drag you down to their level and beat you with just how bloody out of touch with reality they are? Okay, Jake definitely got that one wrong, but the point still stood.
Besides, Jake needed to focus all he could on the fight, as he planned on walking away from it alive, unlike the looney he was facing.
As another half a minute passed, Ell’Hakan’s state only got worse and worse, only with Jake landing what few blows he could. No, the real cause of damage was the poison in the nahoom’s body, rotting away what little flesh he had left, resulting in nearly the entire remaining leg now also being made of starlight.
Soon, only a bit of his upper chest and head would remain flesh and blood, the rest nothing but energy. This extreme soul damage would naturally result in Ell’Hakan dying, but to Jake’s surprise, the deteriorating state of Ell’Hakan’s soul integrity also led to something else before that happened...
Because, right as the two of them clashed again, Jake felt something react. Ell’Hakan also clearly noticed as the two of them made distance from each other. Right then, the entire Void Sphere Dimension also began to shake violently as tears in reality disrupted space itself as the shortcomings of the item Arnold had created in a few months now showed themselves. Then again, perhaps it was unfair to put anything on Arnold as it was questionable how many items for C-grades could handle what was happening.
“You...” the Celestial Child said, staring at Jake as space shuddered all around him.
Jake just answered with a light smile and a shrug. “It’s your fault that the connection became too unstable.”
Because it looks like even the system considers you close to already dead, Jake added mentally as he saw the notification explaining what was happening.
Divine Bargain of the Malefic Viper successfully completed.
It was only a guess, but Jake assumed that with Ell’Hakan’s deteriorating state, his connection to the Planetary Pylon had indeed become too damaged, allowing the Divine Bargain to go through pretty quickly. At least it was faster than Jake expected it to be if he was being completely honest.
Which did make him ask two things... first of all, what was his reward for the Divine Bargain?
And secondly... what was happening to the planet as a result of the bargain?
--
Moments ago, the Planetary Pylon was pulsing, struggling, as it fought off the snakes wrapped around it as they only got tighter and tighter. Then, suddenly, a green glow appeared as the eyes of the snakes opened all at once, a hiss sounding out that sent a subtle wave of energy pulsing out from the Planetary Core before fading away slowly.
In the wake of this fading light, the snakes were gone... along with the entire Planetary Pylon that appeared as if it had just been whisked out of existence entirely.
Only a second passed before the entire core room began to shake, the walls cracking before crumbling, with the entire thing collapsing in upon itself, making the core room no more. This destruction only began to spread as soon everyone would know what happened to a planet that had it’s Planetary Pylon taken away in the most literal sense of the word.
--
“What the hell do you need a random Planetary Pylon for? What’s more, with it separated from its planet...” Duskleaf asked as he stared up at the Planetary Pylon that was already cracking and breaking apart. Having been disconnected from the planet, it would soon crumble to dust, making it entirely useless.
“Hey, be nice,” the Viper said with crossed arms in a faux offended tone. “This was a gift from my dear Chosen. One that he expects something in return for, sure, making it a bit more transactional than I would have liked, but isn’t it only polite to always give gifts in return when receiving one? Also, more than anything, it’s the thought that counts, and I can only appreciate the thought behind this one.”
Duskleaf frowned as he realized. “Wait... if Jake gave it to you... and considering the aura of the Pylon... did he?”
“That’s right,” Vilastromoz said, wiping a tear from his eye. “I’m just so proud. Jake finally destroyed his very first planet... oh, how they grow up so fast.”
--
As the Void Sphere Dimension was soon approaching collapse, two things happened at once. Firstly, right after Jake thought about what he would get for the Divine Bargain, a small item appeared right in front of him. He didn’t even have time to Identify it before it simply disappeared and entered his storage.
Probably for the best, too, as Ell’Hakan charged at him right then, trident held high. The moon and sunlight got refracted by the tears in space, but Jake and the nahoom were unaffected even as the world around them was seemingly falling apart. Jake was pressured back, going on the defensive, and soon enough, the entire Void Sphere Dimension shattered like a mirror.
The two of them returned to the real world immediately, where it was quickly made clear why the poor Void Sphere Dimension had been destabilized. Right as they appeared back in reality, Jake had to dodge to the side as a torrent of lava erupted from below, enveloping Ell’Hakan as a geyser of lava several kilometers tall shot up from a fissure in the ground below.
After the Void Sphere Dimension had been broken, they’d also returned to the desert they originally entered it from, but that desert had now rapidly changed. Massive earthquakes powerful enough to move entire continents had opened up fissures in the ground for all the sand to fall down, lava spat up in different places, and the sky was filled with thunderstorms as even the atmosphere was rapidly unraveling.
“You have broken my world,” the Celestial Child said, his voice cold. “For that, I shall break you in kind.”
The nahoom’s power suddenly intensified even more as a newfound stream of faith energy fueled him. For a second, Jake was confused about where it came from, but he soon understood.
Not everyone had sacrificed themselves the first time around, but now that the world was ending, they, too, had given their lives to help support their god.
His increased level of power instantly put pressure on Jake as he was repeatedly forced back. The nahoom had no regard for defense anymore – not that he had a lot to begin with – and his increased speed made him even more dangerous as he tried to end Jake’s life then and there.
Jake thought quickly as he dove into one of the newly opened fissures in the ground, barely avoiding a spout of lava and rock fragments being thrown up. Ell’Hakan gave chase, sending a large crescent wave of starlight forth that tore the sides of the fissure apart and opened a path through the lava spouts.
Focusing on his Sphere of Perception and danger sense, Jake purposefully dove toward an area where the entire side of the fissure was cracking and falling apart. Right as Ell’Hakan reached Jake again, he turned around and blocked, the shockwave from their clash sending Jake flying back while also breaking the already cracked rocks apart right beside them.
A mountain-sized slab of rock instantly tumbled down on Ell’Hakan, giving Jake a moment to retreat further as he, this time, took to the sky. An explosion behind him let him know that Ell’Hakan was hot on his trail. Jake looked up and saw the thunderclouds hanging far lower than usual, and the layers of the sky had already fallen apart as the energy of the planet was rampant.
Constant thunderbolts with enough power to injure even Jake struck down on the ground, creating massive craters all around, as it felt like the entire planet was trying to exert whatever energy it had left. The chaotic environment made simply existing there a hazard... or, in Jake’s case, an opportunity.
As Ell’Hakan approached again, Jake purposefully flew to where he felt a sense of danger. Ell’Hakan reached him right as Jake dodged out of the way of a lightning bolt that instead struck the nahoom, blasting him down toward the ground.
A beam of light shot up toward Jake from the newly created crater, a smoking Ell’Hakan flying up a moment later. Jake kept retreating, making use of the environment whenever he could to strike at Ell’Hakan while avoiding taking too much damage himself.
However, even if Jake had an environmental advantage, Ell’Hakan still managed to get in his fair share of attacks. One of his legs was nearly severed as he was stabbed by the trident right as it exploded, Jake barely hanging on to the limb because of the bones.
The collapse of the world also only accelerated, happening far more swiftly than Jake could have ever expected. As the fissures grew, entire landmasses were raised due to the shifting plates, the stone not made for such rapid change as it cracked and broke apart, entire country-sized slabs of rock breaking apart down the middle, only making the destruction worse as their split caused pressure elsewhere, accelerating the collapse.
Jake and Ell’Hakan were approaching one of these massive slabs of raised land that looked like a giant wall stretching as far as the eye could see. The two of them exchanged several blows before Jake dodged out of the way, making Ell’Hakan’s trident release a blast of energy into the giant slab of raised rock.
Within this rock, a large magma chamber resided, and as the land had been compressed as it was raised, the magma had been under extreme pressure... right as a trident stabbed a hole into the chamber, making the entire thing expand outwards.
An explosion of magma and stone erupted from the side of the mountain, covering Jake and Ell’Hakan in the liquid molten rock in an instant. The magma itself couldn’t do any damage to either of them, but what it did do was blind them momentarily.
Ell’Hakan quickly reacted as he swept away the lava as best he could, glimpsing Jake, who was coming straight for him. Without any hesitation, the nahoom stabbed through the lava and found purchase as he struck Jake right in his chest, piercing the heart.
For a brief moment, an expression of pleasant surprise flashed across Ell’Hakan’s face before quickly vanishing as the Jake he’d just stabbed dissolved into black smoke right as an Arcane Powershot pierced through the smoke and struck the unprepared Ell’Hakan straight in the neck.
The power of the attack, combined with the poison having rotted much of the neck already, resulted in a head flying into the air as Ell’Hakan was decapitated by the arrow. Jake didn’t celebrate, though, as even with the head gone, there was no notification.
What he saw instead was the nahoom stumbling back for a single step... only for a new head of pure energy to appear. However, right as it did, Ell’Hakan’s entire body looked like it flickered as if he was losing his form. Cracks began to visibly grow as he mimicked his planet by rapidly approaching collapse.
Yet, even in this state... the delusion persisted. The form of Ell’Hakan appeared to stabilize for a moment as he regarded Jake.
“This vessel is nearing its end... and so is my world. Both shall be buried here, and this part of the galaxy shall become a memorial, but do not forget my promise. You shall be buried alongside this vessel and planet both.”
Jake knew with certainty whatever was about to come as the Celestial Child’s final attack. One that would consume whatever he had left, alongside all the remaining faith energy.
Preparing himself, Jake took a defensive stance as Ell’Hakan raised his trident toward the sky. Lighting was still striking all around him, the shaking of the world from the planet’s collapse deafening... yet as he raised that trident, the world seemed to relax.
Far above, the sun and twin moons began to glow brighter than before... and then they moved. The two moons began to slowly move in front of the sun, a blanket of darkness falling over the world as they did so, and Jake’s eyes opened wide as he felt that what was about to come wasn’t something he was confident in surviving. This realization came right as the Celestial Child spoke what would more likely than not be the last word at least one of them would hear:
“Eclipse.”
Comments
Anamolii
I love Villy here lol
Trumangolorian
Tyftc
sphamandla ndlovu
This reminds me of goku and frieze in planet nameek
Olof Karlsson
Thanks for the chapter!
Joshua Little
Thanks for the chapter.
Matteo
Can I just say that as a geologist the breakup of the planet was actually really well written and decently factual. I don't know how much research you put into this, but it's by far one of the better descriptions of abrupt plate tectonic movements and mantle/core interactions I've read. 10/10, geologist approved.
Michael Butler
That is why I waited until the chapter name changed so I was not consumed by what happened next.
Chloe
They do grow up so fast. Come on Jake... kill this guy already. It's been 9 chapters. Tyftc
Admorias
It’s so fitting that Jake’s first planetary destruction was EH’s shitty planet.
Asher Mack
Not sure what you’re asking but Villy (not clone) essentially molted his dragon form which is what yip lost to and fused with and which was then absorbed by Villy, just after putting a tiny piece aside for Jake to have.
Hussein Zenki
ain’t no way villy crying im dead 😂
Kasey Lindenmayer
Villy’s character always has me cracking up 😂
Kasey Lindenmayer
I thought it was a molt of his clone with more records?
ABTelford
My too! I laughed so hard!! 😂
William WIlson
No he used eternal shadow
The Dregs
“That’s right,” Vilastromoz said, wiping a tear from his eye. “I’m just so proud. Jake finally destroyed his very first planet... oh, how they grow up so fast.” I loved this so much. Had me dying laughing. I love Villy.
Jacob Feliciano
The man who is so monstrously powerful he allows himself to be sealed in Sandy's stomach(totally willingly)
Russell Bennett
You would enjoy this series far more if you read it in chunks, instead of reading it day by day. It's a different experience having it completed versus small digestions ss it's been released chapter by chapter. Your impatience is basically asking the author to write a more summarized and less quality book due to your impatience for a quality story.
Russell Bennett
I think you have to put it into context that this confrontation has been building for a really long time. I personally think ten+ chapters is a very reasonable amount in the big picture of things. I think what bothers people the most, is that they're reading it as they come out hence far more impatience than if you had the full completed book in front of you and can enjoy it better. I think most people that make comments need to consider the difference between having a finished book and reading it day-by-day as it's released in pieces.
Chase Burton
Thanks for the chapter!
Tim
Can EH be looted? Should be good stuff for Jake and friends.
Noah Mclelland
I don't think so, all transcendent skills have some cost to it, either it's not the system causing the cooldown but that the cooldown is the price, or its not a transcendent skill at all.
Anthony Smith
This was the holy churches plan the holy time. To fill the void and gain a quick bit of ground in the milky way while El Hakan dies. They want to have a presence with Jake being there. Maybe even a controlling presence with their numbers.
Davey876
Tom? Did I miss something?
Asher Mack
10 chapters of this fight means at least 1% of the entirety of primal hunter is Jake fighting an orange scrapped star-trek alien extra lookin ass delusional cult leader
Asher Mack
I doubt zoggy will go more than 10 chapters with this one
Asher Mack
On a multiversal scale, he might actually be like a yellow belt with 2 stripes in karate terms. Perhaps even an orange belt.
Asher Mack
Yep pretty sure you right
Tyler S.
I feel that just as the false god, EH wont be as easy to kill and ive forgotten which have yet to be upgraded but maybe another pride upgrade with better combination to touch/poison to devour the dillusion for good
Exodus Uno
It stops other people from interfering, not energies. Also faith energy is weird and bends the rules so it could be because of that
Ty Cooper
Rereading the Villy part i totally believe it is the piece of Yip of Yor. He said it was only nice to give a gift of his own. He planned on gifting that to him already. Also I think next chapter will have moment upgrade form the eclipse attack.
Exodus Uno
Faith powers be wild, no wonder God's like having believers
Justin Moen
Oh, does he heavily revise chapters as time goes on? I am new to Patreon. I thought they were small changes like grammar etc?
Ty Cooper
That was my guess
Lonnie
I don't think so, Jacob tried to get el hakkan to come church's territory and live there. He declined. The church will wash their hands of him because power trumps all
J W
The audiobook definitely helps make the nevermore era more enjoyable.
Brian
Under appreciated thought, you may be on to something here.
brjenness
Oh ... did we forget to tell you? The fight ended 4 chapters ago. The last few have been jake looting the planet.
brjenness
I agree, but I didn't read it day by day.
AfroMocha
I could see eternal shadow getting an upgrade not sure what path it would go down. For me it would have to sure up a part that is lacking in the skill. Maybe the clone not turning to smoke right after it gets hit. Multiple shadows seems kinda lame... Ooooh the black Smoke gaining a poison aspect like touch?
Anna Esswein
The only hope I have is that Jake uses eternal hunger and stabs him so the sword can devour his soul. Like I can’t see someone being able to bring EH back if jakes sword eats his soul since that messes with the sword.
ElijahRS
Honestly, just imagine his influence over Earth right now… Ell’Hakan’s bloodline doesn’t seem to evolve with each Grade as far as we know, and Jake’s does… yet Jake felt the influence that Ell’Hakan’s aura had when he was next to the Planetary Pylon. Jake’s Aura kept beasts away from Haven, but it also builds resistance to auras over time, so imagine the entire planet slowly being desensitized to Godly auras, of course this would most likely only be effective on the current younger generation since they would be exposed to this for a decade before ever truly picking their main path or potentially getting a blessing. Yeah when Jake becomes a God, Earth is gonna be pumping out talented people left and right (may or not be heretic-blessed).
Ira White
You say that with Zog sitting with all the Uno skip, reverse, draw 2 and 4 cards and you forgetting to say Uno with your one card left lol.
Exodus Uno
Could've been the piece of yip of yore he saved for jake
Exodus Uno
I personally thought he'd use it to make a pylon for his primordial planet since in the yip of yore fight it was said that nobody had ever claimed primordial-4 cause they never felt like it. So having him finally claim it and turn it into a pylon too would be huge even for a god
Gwiddion
If every fight would be thump it would kill the enjoyment in my opinion as why would there be a need to improve just challenge anything higher than yourself and forcefully trigger a thump.
Gwiddion
Yes please a full breakdown how the strike teams performed for the next 4 days and in the Friday chapter we get a tiny resume from the final attack but the conclusion will be on Monday so we get peak cliffing.
Exodus Uno
AGREED, maybe more villy scenes on the aftermath of his fight and the deal. Maybe he can use pieces of the broken pylon to make one for his primordial planet since it hasn't been claimed? That would probably be a big buff to anyone who claims it
Exodus Uno
He has been using gaze throughout the other chapters, it just hasn't been doing much as they're really close to each other in strength
Ira White
Once it's in book form and you can read it with out it feeling like Zog is purposely edging the audience for his own amusement. The fight will feel just right. It's just the trade off of reading it before the book is released.
Sargon Yami
Moment of the primal hunter is rechnically a transcendence skill but it is not classed as such because it is linked with his bloodline. It just randomly slows time down for no reason the only reason it has a cooldown is that the sxstem does not like that.
Seamus Harley
Probably Jacob, wouldn't rule out ever smile being a prick but considering the lengths he went to repay the viper for screwing with Jake in the tutorial, I doubt it. Valdemar is interesting, when Val and ever smile were talking, he said he had to watch recordings of Jake in the tutorial. I assumed the viper made him for some reason, but maybe it was Val who wanted it, food for thought anyway
Ira White
Of the gods who'd be interested in order of likelihood. 1 holy mother 2 eversmile 3 valdamar That being said I don't think it's the gods. I agree that it's Jacob he was around anyways and due to the likelihood that his way off planet was destroyed due to him not leaving before Jake's shinnagins he probably needs a ride and is just waiting for Jake to get done lol.
Ira White
I think villy gave him a beer. A beer that will probably heal him in multiple ways but a beer none the less
Ira White
10 to 1 villy just gave him a beer
Hunter
Villy, we are all proud of Jake. He’s finally got his first planetary sacrifice under his belt.
Hunter
Jake has used it a couple times throughout the fight but non of his finishers have done much. I appreciate that tho. We have seen Jake steam role basically everyone he’s faced up with, so it’s good to see a drawn out conflict.
Hunter
Yeah Zogarth was really cooking this chapter with his descriptions.
Matthew Lemon
All Jakes gotta say is Womp Womp cuz he dgaf 😂
CaptainFlowers
I really liked this section of the fight. It's far less 'he stabbed and Jake dodged' and teleports behind him stuff that was happening earlier. All the magma and fissures this chapter really made a thing I wasn't truly enjoying into something better.
Jelani Willock
holy hell this is giving the end of words of radiance vibes this is so sick
Mike
Or instead of 2 the third party is the guy who picked up the heart and he fuses them together. With how much Jake keeps saying he is going to die. He just isn't going to die. I at least won't be surprised if he does not truly die.
Beastman@26
Frieza “see 5 minutes seems like a long time while a planet is dieing”
Mike
I have reread nevermore 3 times now and will continue to as the audiobooks come out. It is actually peak content when re read. There is legit so much info dumped that if it was shorter people would complain it was just an infodump. Anyone who had issues with Nevermore as it came out should jump back to the start of the arc and read it front to back. Amazing stuff!
Mike
I think it may be the third party that picked up the desolate childs heart
Mike
But it went thru a skill, if the system is involved it may have altered it to be a suitable gift for him. Some good ol system fuckery
Mike
This is my fear, that he will somehow live on. Maybe the mysterious third party is the guy that picked up the desolation heart and will plant it into EH forming a new being? Idk but I just don't just EH dying because everyone wants him to die so much
Mike
Yes and no, I think villys fight was the perfect length because he was legitimately that much stronger than yip, most of the build up was just getting him to commit and use the void sphere. While with Jake and EH they are a lot closer in power level and with the extra Yip records and the upgrade to him being fully delusional he is extinguishing his life to kill Jake. While fully believing himself unkillable.
Mike
Based on the text it seems like it quickly becomes less useful once removed from its planet. So it may be more useful if he got like the whole planet with the pylon
Mike
I didn't even think about this, it was stated early that the system purposely limits him by giving him that skill so maybe he will unlock the time ability even more
Allan
It is like asking an s-grade to make a potion with herbs f-grades uses. Sure he can make something good if you considering the rarity of the base ingredient. But it’s not going to be in anyway useful.
Mike
I think the problem that was stated early on is any understanding he gains would be too intrinsically tied to his bloodline to form a transcendence. I do think we will possibly see another malfic skill upgrade though. Maybe something with eternal shadow but I feel like it will be a bit still till that skill is improved
Brian Small
I have this head canon that because of what he was dealing with, Villy wasn’t really paying attention to Jake until the pop up asking where he wanted the planetary pylon. Also, the Holy Church is NOT going to be happy with Jake for Cheetos death.
Burkes
That was because EH was too stunned by the arrows aura to notice
deednam
Nah if EH was b grade this wouldnt be a fight, jake would just be dead
Jose Reyna
TFTC
brjenness
confirmed...Tom is the first sage
T
Gaze was used, but I don't believe it had noticeable effect: "Right as he began moving, Jake used Primal Gaze, but it didn’t even look like Ell’Hakan noticed as Eternal Hunger’s curse energy flooded the area right before it hit him." (Part 5 of the fight)
Jordan Mazza
I think he's been taking too much damage to effectively build up his hunting momentum. For Mark, I think Ellhakans entire body being made up of pretty much sun and moon and faith energy is dispensing any energy building up from Jake's mark. As for Gaze idk, he could probably just unleash a couple repetitive soul attacks to speed up his destruction
brjenness
I also see it as a place to send less than elites to find their way. one loyal b grade is worth more than 1000 slaves...especially if they earn it instead of being fed. elites can also benefit from getting ass whippings from less fortunate peeps who earned their way
Ty Cooper
He is already digesting yip or he might have eaten it
Azayrian105
I think a lot of the issue came with the fact that this series is coming out weekly but being able to binge it all in one go it is honestly a good time.
Ty Cooper
Lol you cold. I can appreciate that.
Azayrian105
This is cool as shit. TFTC
AfroMocha
Not necessarily. From what Yip of Yor said he gained his transcendence in the middle of a trying event that had him.go up against his rival at the time. As to the bloodline I may be off there as I misremembered how that works exactly. what I meant to say was bloodline evoking a skill of Jake's or him cratingbir gaining a transcendent skill. I said gain due to the payment the viper sent.
Arieh Sochaczevski
Jordan left a ton of material for Sanderson to base the books on. The final chapter was all Jordan. The fight was probably a mix of the two.
Alucard
neither his bloodline evolves when he goes up a grade and him gaining transcendence would be complete BS.
TyranT-Rex
Yeah I honestly think something like that is what's going to happen. As Jake got stronger, the area that he influences increases. First was just Haven, then earth, soon it'll be the Milky Way. The amount of talent and records on earth is going to make it a highly sought-after place to get stronger.
kingofshibainu
Jake hasn't used any of his finishers in a while. No hunting momentum, no Mark, no gaze, etc. Is he wary of the watcher or does he just think it's not necessary since Elkie is a dead nahoom glowing?
AfroMocha
So question at large fellow readers. What do you think he is gonna evelove. His bloodline or create his first transcendence?
Jordan Rogers
This is meant as a not so subtle hint to leave the complainers in suspense
Jordan Rogers
Zogarth I’m not saying we need an intermission, but what is miyamoto and Miranda up to?
John Durrett
Jake’s palette is closed with that desolation planetary core piece. Villy had to use the transcendental skill to save Jake and sealed it up in the process
J W
Shit I raced home everyday to watch dbz even when namek just wouldn't explode. The only difference now is I wake up to the continuing antics of the dying celestial child.
Tammy Walizer
Zogarth always 'over' explains the logic behind all of Jake's skills and upgrades. I usually skim through it but he sure has thoroughly worked through how his system works.
Lizy Flore
Honestly I had a good laugh imagining that… and frankly, I don’t think this future is so far-fetched. Think about the characters, especially those from Earth. If they manage to make it to godhood (or even S-grade) imagine how their Records might influence the place. I wouldn’t be surprised if the 93rd universe becomes a place known for its powerful records and that lot of future geniuses would come there simply to profit from them.
Nate Slusher
I cannot take it anymore. Neeeeeed Jake to win and be done 😂
brjenness
the totally irrelevant future I see. the milky way becoming a training ground for future elites. prep school for the major factions that don't piss Jake or villy off. the home of the Arnold research institute of void engineering. the verdant lagoon of witchy voodoo Valhalla tournament of champions heretic augur career development center sandies school of confectionary delights and space travel sword saint academy of fighting and diplomacy
Sargon Yami
Soon the story of the sage will continue and after that we will follow the true paragon of the 93rd universe, he who was eaten the myth the legend Tom.
Justin Moen
Love that planetary sacrifice is prob gonna be the thing that pushes him to over 300 in profession so he can finally visit the sage!
Justin Moen
Villy would refuse. It’s a huge record boost for Jake to lay claim and mark himself in the multiverse. Plus villy gets records from chosen. So no real incentive. He’d rather Jake get stronger faster and reach his own level asap so they can compete/fight/push each other. Villy also wants to see all the new things Jake’s existence brings and amplifying his records will only make it even better. Villy is quite happy with his finders fee
Justin Moen
I enjoyed nevermore! But I will say, my first read through was rushed bcuz I am in anticipation for so much more to come after nevermore. Second read through, since it was more calm pace, I enjoyed it even more. Gotta have the “God” mentality and patience in order to ascend.. js lol. Zig gave us a bit of that boring stuff to highlight how long of a time period is passing by and the commitment required to be pinnacle tier
SmokeJam
With all these cliffhangers I might name my son Clifford. Epic chapter though, thanks for the short Viper interim, that was beautiful.
Johannes Sauer
Are you worried the mc will hit Tier 30 God too quickly ? :). Realisticaly the author will just stop or super accelerate the story whenever he doesn't want to write anymore. The Story won't run out of possible progression ever at the current pace
Devillelouch
I am actually happy this is a no thump fight. The fight makes sense with being just a showcase of his C grade human side. I think it could use a wings(for hunting) and scales(and resist domains) side grade upgrade in 4 and 8 ish. I would like to see a moment and hunting momentum upgrade on kill and it would be an excellent fight. I was so confident this would be a bloodline vs bloodline fight, but it is a Jake vs EH fight which is good in owns way. That means his bloodline fight will be someone stronger: Fallen King, Valdemar, ...
IFL
Reincarnation skill 2.0 incoming!
Kaizen Androck
you mean what Brandon Sanderson did? Wasn't he the one who did that climax battle mega-num opus in Wheel of Time?
Niko Tainui
Wooooow
Marcos Cardozo
I completely agree, very well put.
Marcos Cardozo
I skipped so much of Nevermore. I couldn't care less about the generic adventures with the generic NPCs tbh. The Minaga parts were golden though, one of the best characters in the series.
Marcos Cardozo
Sometimes less is more. This fight feels a little dragged out at this point. It's ~3k*9 = ~27k words, which is a lot. At this point I'm more interested in Villy-Jake's reunion than the fight itself. FWIW, Villy's fight felt like the correct length, with the right amount of 'oh no' moments and turnarounds.
TheRealRoadie
Counterattack against who lol he killed all the god that sided with yip
Lonnie
Yeah, I'm sure Zog will allude to goings on later and leave it as a cliff hanger
greg belokopitsky
We needed something so Jake's Moment of the primal hunter can evolve!
Sean
My guess is The First Sage (through the system). He wanted to help out his future buddy Jake and give him a proper fight
Sevrion
So when you do this fight in the book, you need to do what Robert Jordan did for the last battle, and just combine all of them in one super chapter. 😁 It would be fun.
brjenness
he could lick it. you know he wants to.
kingofshibainu
After hundreds of chapters, having a fight be too quick would be bad pacing. This is a dramatic pay off for a self destructive villain duo and I like it. Also love the brief Villy being a proud sugar momma moment.
Nick O'Gara
Probably the poison equivalent of pepto-bismol for his pallet
Dragon
Villy probably gave Jake whatever he made out of yip of yore for him, did it say it was a scale?
Arieh Sochaczevski
Thanks for the chapter! I’m surprised Villy can’t make more out of the pylon. It’s a lot of power and records, and he’s an alchemist. Even if it’s not an ideal situation, and even if it’s weak compared to his level of power, it shouldn’t be useless.
KenTX325
Very interested in the activities of the Viper at this time. Would imagine he is leading a counter attack. He also needs to publicly address Jake’s heretic actions. Also, what is happening to his friends at the order? We will have a lot going on after this fight.
Shaibene
Why would any of you want the primal Hunter to be over quicker? I want Stretched out fights, intermissions, cut aways, other POVs, skill Explanations, the more Primal Hunter material the better in my eyes
brjenness
think about the long lasting impact of a world disappearing after it's leader messed with Jake while the universe is still locked down. makes you think twice about crossing the malefic order of the primal hunter
SinCinnamon
False Godslayer*
Gurracreek
Bottle of beer for sure
karamitros paparizas
can you argue the more evil snake god point ,I feel zogarths humor is peak when he writes villy dialog
Im So Dunn
so good man
kaden richards
bruh shut up this is peak
karamitros paparizas
God damn can we please end the fight it's been 9 chapters already,I want more neighbourly evil snake god and less cheeto fuck
Cheshirerogue
Gah!!! I knew it was coming but still fell off the cliffhanger
Borbino the great
This would be hysterical
doctordirt
Prolly, good guess for sure. Makes his "too transactional" remark make more sense because he was already going to give it to jake.
Tsorov
Nah, that needs time, and he doesn't have a lot of that
Damian Karis
Baby’s first genocide!
Harbby
Yeah, and at the start of this fight I think Jake said EH was around 303
Klown Keidra
I'd be surprised if Jake could do anything with it. An Item that is above Godking level probably would not even be able to be eaten by Palate.
Phasmatic7
Thankies zogie
Matthew Lemon
Hes a proper weirdo always lurking 😂. What if Eversmiles true form is Roz from Monsters Inc
Trevor Mergen
Thanks!
Alexander C Hyde
Jake knew with certainty whatever was about to come (was)as the Celestial Child’s final attack.
Micah B Graves
Good stuff! I'm really enjoying this fight!
Numbzy
That would be a good one. We've been due a Moment upgrade for a while. I kind of wish we upgrade the soul skill from this, but after the fact. Like belief in a skill is enough to force an upgrade.
Anna Esswein
I have a feeling that if EH doesn’t reveal or have a flashback on what YoY told him, that EH will somehow be back in the future.
Mat
Talking about the ring, why didn’t EH use his when thought that maybe he could recover if he got away from Jake? I mean he would have been teleported to the Prima vessel which is basically indestructible for a C-grade.
Cam
Such a great line!! We’re so proud!!
Andromeda Adams
I bet what Villy gave him in return helps him now. Or he uses some Jake juice.. Tyftc! Excited for tomorrow!
GheerBox
Thanks for the chapter! Lighting was still striking all around him, the shaking of the world from the planet’s collapse deafening... yet as he raised that trident, the world seemed to relax. Lighting = Lightning
Inneedofducks
Dbz ahh fight
Seamus Harley
Add in some origin energy and bloodline shenanigans. I bet moving a world wonder would give a few records, lol
Seiryus
No, he stopped Moment from activating because he could still escape using Eternal Shadow. Moment of the Primal Hunter hasn't been activated yet, and like a lot of other people here, I think we might get an upgrade next chapter.
Lonnie
The cutaway with Villy and Duskleaf was perfect! "My little chosen destroyed his first world" So funny. Dusklesf plays the straight man so well. I can't wait for Jake to get back to the order and stumble into one of the support group meetings. I'm glad the Cheeto is done
Nathaniel Ownbey
Doubt it the prima is a universal wonder like nevermore it probably will never leave the 23rd universe
NovaZero
I want you to picture Jake coming up to a child and pinching their nose between his index and middle finger with his thumb sticking out between them. "Got your nose!" Definitely what this is.
AfroMocha
Could be a red herring to make you think it's gonna be important later but that knowledge he's not supposed to have could have been what helped him push the boundaries to become his half false god state he's in now
Seiryus
I doubt he is literally moving the sun and moons, just that projection he uses as part of his attacks. Jake is inside his domain though, so he sees the "animation" of that happening.
AfroMocha
Be grade is 350 isn't it? The monster on the moon was be grade at 356 or something like that right? The minaga clone was also peak c grade at 349
Alexander C Hyde
Besides, Jake needed to focus all he could on the fight, as he planned on walking away from it alive, unlike the (loony)looney he was facing.
AfroMocha
People had a problem with nevermore? Some parts kinda dragged on but I enjoyed the experience
Lawrence Dillon
Im always going to say ever smile
AfroMocha
So did Villy give Jake the scale?
joel southard
Nice thank you for the chapter
NovaZero
Or used as an ingredient. Done with this cheese though ugh
Rewdan
Thanks Zogarth worth the wait over the weekend
NovaZero
And Divine Champion as he is double dipping into the Chosen AND Heretic
NovaZero
Or godslayer.
SilverSentry
There's another sentence with the same issue "...Jake and Ell’Hakan were approaching one of these massive slaps of raised land"
Zogarth
Fix
Harbby
Jake still keeps referring to him as only a C grade still, which is why he's so flabbergasted by EH moving moons and suns.
Zogarth
Fix
Zogarth
Fix
SilverSentry
It almost sounds like the fallen king has been corrupted by desolation and could be thr next bad guy? I'd have to read that chapter again, but something was active on that planet iirc.
Zogarth
Fix
Mohammed Sheekh
Zog knows when stretching an outcome can be beneficial or negative for him, Nevermore arc for example, public opinion really ruffled his feathers then
Spencer Miller
Eh, it kinda makes sense. EH basically did a planetary sacrificial ritual for all that faith energy, and we’ve only heard stories about the power involved. Plus? EH is B-grade, right? An early B-grade with a bloodline-empowered mythical skill for effectively infinite willpower and use of faith energy, which is itself essentially fueled by the faith equivalent of a planetary sacrificial ritual, all used without the reserved ess necessary for self-preservation? This just barely fits within the magic system as it has been constructed. Barely. Side note: I predict an imminent upgrade to Mythical for Moment of the Primal Hunter.
Valhazstromoz
This is literally Goku vs Frieza on namek with it collapsing around them
Seamus Harley
Funny thought: what if Jake uses his skill to gift the seat of the exalted prima world wonder to villy down the line.
Martino Zanchi
Dude there's an entire chapter dedicated to some guys seeing an arrow falling on their head
Spencer Miller
Feels like an opportune moment for Moment of the Primal Hunter to upgrade to Mythical, huh? Jake’s Bloodline needs to show this upstart Bloodline who’s boss, after all.
Seamus Harley
Any guess who Jake saw observing the fight near the beginning and what will come from it. Jacob maybe?
Ray Light
It's probably because the momentum breaks down a bit every time he is hit. And since he is on that backfoot and even nearly lost his leg... I'd say he doesn't have anything to activate
Cody
“Usually, this faucet would be connected to a water tank – the soul and his resource polls – and needless to say, having the faucet be this fucked up would empty it out pretty damn quickly.” Polls -> pools Tyftc! Awesome fight sequence so far, can’t wait to see the benefits Jake gets from absorbing those Yip records.
Nexas Aurelias
Yeah but those weren't really people anymore.
Ray Light
Might add the word "Yet" to that statement. Moment of the Primal Hunter will likely be activated in the next chapter
Ray Light
Or he will spill the beans of how the Viper might do the very same thing to Jake (Fattening him up)
Mrburns93
He did save a piece just for Jake so I absolutely believe that's what came through
J W
Remember guy namek was going to explode for a solid 2 weeks but it was only 20 mins. Zog can still milk this for another end of week cliffie
Justin Moen
Man man man… such an over drawn fight. Love the series so much but this doesn’t feel like the best work especially with all the build up waiting for this. A LOT of needless wasted paragraphs explaining what passive skills are working, how they’re working, why it’s important etc etc. just feels like a lot of needless information or at the very least, over explained. Like we understand Jake’s powers quite a bit and I feel like most of this fight was skill explanation. Feels like Jake isn’t even really getting “pushed” like it’s a life and death battle. All Jake learned so far was too concentrate his pride to a smaller radius which is something I feel like he should’ve already known but never needed to do, not a grand epiphany. Love the idea of the fight, love the twist of el dick head now becoming his delusion. But I’m bored of this fight. I’m not excited anymore, biting nails waiting for the next chapter. I’m placing internal bets with myself “is this gonna the the final ch of fight?” Either the intensity/scale of the fight needs an increase or the fluff text needs heavy revising… just my humble opinion and current feelings while reading. I’ve seen similar convo’s on Reddit and after initially defending, I’m leaning towards agreeing now… sorry zogarth, kinda let down but the fight thus far mainly bcuz it feels like it should be over. Jake is just running a zombie train on el dick head and has brief moments where he experience more danger than expected. Feels like a check box kinda fight. Fold clothes, check Sacrifice the pylon to villy, check Fight “pinnacle tier rival who just usurped pinnacle tier god” introduced in like book 5, check Hmm, wonder what cool thing villy will give me??
Ray Light
What about instead of: Bonus experience given from defeating an enemy of a higher level; "You have defeated an enemy who has transcended their true form. Bonus experience awarded"?
Tommy
Jakey got a tonne of built up Momentum by now. Plus his bloodline hasn’t felt the need to assert dominance quite yet. TFTC!
Ty Cooper
Lol with a note attached" "cheers mate"
Tommy
I just want him to be dead. Nothing more annoying than antagonists wh are defeated but then keep reappearing. EH needs to be completely obliterated!
Saynightknight
He already used it once already a couple chapters ago if I remember correctly. Though I am sure some more has built up by now.
Jack Dawson
He used it with the eternal hunger arrow, I don't think he's built up enough for a significant blow and he doesn't really have any other finishers to empower with it
Navdeep Kumar
I think it's just some poisoned bear... 😂
Dallin S
I’m pretty sure it said he just caused mass destruction. I would have to reread though.
Ray Light
Title unlocked [Breaker of Divine Delusions]; Title unlocked [Usurper's Bane]; Achievement unlocked [Destroy a Planetary Pylon]; Title unlocked [Worldbreaker] etc. etc.
KipBR
I really hope that doesn't happen, because then there would be 2 false gods floating around somewhere to be dealt with. Make the child of loss the next villain, figure out another new bad guy for after that.
Ty Cooper
Hopefully a last second upgrade
Martino Zanchi
Well I believe the point of that is that they were all fucked in the head by EH
Ty Cooper
Yeah one final upgrade would be nice.
Ray Light
He killed millions to lure EH out though...
Harbby
This is like playing with the kid who always makes up new rules so he can't lose in a game. I always hated that kid
David Proctor
The human sacrifice for faith was a nice trick to let Jake wipe out a planet without killing anyone
Ty Cooper
Think Villy sent Jake the remnant of Yip for him to eat after the battle?
A. B. Edwards
One thing I fear is Ell'Hakan becoming a false God like the Child of Loss. That would be... worrying.
David Proctor
Bet this is mentioned in a few chapters after Jake survives and upgrades some ability as something he didn't think of as he just scratched the back of his head. Probably by Miranda lol
Mat
With the whole records of bargain should be balance, I doubt that something from a transmutation of a god can be balanced by the planetary pylon. Especially when the said pylon has no use
Martino Zanchi
I meant by number of chapters
Seamus Harley
The elemental he killed in book 3 over the course 10ish hours with arrow of the ambitious hunter from 100s of miles away? Not sure you count that as a fight tbh
C0bra$
Thank u for the story
TKOva
Naw it wasn't deadly enough.
Mat
Leaving a guy who already came back from death’s door to perform another miracle?
kiewitz
It's the second time Jake has a duel on a collapsing world and it's so cool, in moments like this and the sword saint fight I am reminded why I love this style of writing so much
Seamus Harley
I hope EH is truly done with after this but I am wondering if he is truly done. When EH usurped Yip, he got a bunch of memories with lots of knowledge he said he shouldn't have yet. I feel that will come up again later
Mat
A severed head of EH lying around?!Looks like someone will be brought back from the dead using Yggdrasil leaf.
Harold Bukoski
"...oh, how they grow up so fast.” - I couldn't stop laughing. That was absolutely great! TFTC
Andy Swearingen
It doesn't "reset" it just builds up slower
Mohammed Sheekh
Do you guys find it weird how jakes bloodline deemed it unnecessary to get involved?
Fatkage
TFTC
Aidan Bolten
You have strength of will I’ll never have
David W. Baijense
Nice
Momongama
The momentum resets if he's hit, I think
Mohammed Sheekh
Has to be something of equal quality to a planetary pylon, a beer that is planetary pylon sized quality would probably kill jake lol
Andy Swearingen
I'm hoping it fixes pallet but at the same time it'd be cool to see what insights into desolation Jake would get if it isn't fixed till B grade
Kristopher Hanson
Well bloodlines literally do that.
JJB4345_80_815
Yes, thank you for the chappy Zogarth! (And even after holding back a week and a half so I could binge the fight, I still find myself on the sad side of a cliffhanger! Oh, the horror 😱😅 ) :-D
Mat
Is it not a matter of concepts being in powered by faith?
Mat
The same way the Holy Mother and pantheon receive faith from those in all 93 universes. Void spheres creates a separate dimension that does stop one from receiving faith or power ups from other concepts.
Felix Venter
Didn't he use the primal moment ages ago to set up the eternal hunger arrow thingy?
Ender419
I agree but either a six pack or a keg of poison-infused ice cold beer.
IFL
Why not both? He's an alchemist who likes beer, I bet he coulda found a way to brew up a yip-ball-beer (only comes small batch I'm afraid)
A. B. Edwards
Amazing chapter. Hope Moment gets an upgrade here. And also, good on you Jake for taking your first world. Here's a beer to you from all of us for many more to come.
A. B. Edwards
I would guess its because this was not a true Void Sphere, more a cobbled together cheap imitation. It could replicate what the real thing could do but not perfectly.
Abdulaziz ALRumaih
Jake lost his planetary virginity How wholesome
Lucky Luke
Hm why is Jake not using the built up momentum?
Exaiter
Ooooh shit yeah forgot bout the ring. Unless zoggie pulls some "to much disturbance in the force shit" for ring to activate. Doubt that though
Martino Zanchi
Is this the longest fight in the series? It sure is the one with the highest number. Dunno about before this nomenclature convention. Nice chapter.
Ray Light
More like his ring, if he escapes
Phillip Hazlett
Pretty sure he sent him the records that he had set aside after turning yip into the alchemy ingredients
Ray Light
EH did most of the "human" sacrifice though! Jake just gave the planet a final push.
Bastian
Next one is very likely the last one, without spoilering to much someone used his final special move. There is probably nothing more hidden
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Tyftc!
Ray Light
Likely! Good observation😁
KenTX325
It feels like EH is breaking the rules of this universe. Moving moons and stars after reincarnation in C grade? After losing control of the planet? Also, I’m very interested in the activities of the Viper post fight. He is probably busy.
Ray Light
My guess is that the skill EH uses is pretty much a Transcendent skill and thus works outside the System rules.
Michael mann
“…blast of energy into the giant slap of raised rock.” I think this should be “slab” not “slap”
Ray Light
Slap should be slab
Elijah Reitmeier
Here comes moment of the primal hunter! Tftc
William WIlson
Nah villy gave him the ball of scales from the whole Yip deal.
Rui
it's either the ball thing, or, assuming Villy is watching the fight, something to help him survive the attack (might also be the ball thing for that purpose i guess).
NoctisMi
Well there is still the final? Episode tomorrow, everything is possible
Borbino the great
Cockroachsandra would be proud
Borbino the great
I mean Jake just has to use the ring he’s got and tp out no big deal
Salguod
Might want to revisit this paragraph: Jake and Ell’Hakan were approaching one of these massive slaps of raised land that looked like a giant wall stretching as far as the wall could see. The two of them exchanged several blows before Jake dodged out of the way, making Ell’Hakan’s trident release a blast of energy into the giant slap of raised rock.
Abriel Blauer
Just one thing I am not sure to understand And I apologize if it was explained before While in the Void Sphere, nothing from the outside was supposed to influence those who were inside the Void Sphere So, how was EH able to receive the energy from the nahoom who sacrified themselve? Shouldn't the energy generated outside the Void Sphere unable to reach inside of it? That part leave me confused...
NoctisMi
Would be cool if killing the Celestial Child gives some cool title with stat bonuses. Like "Celestial Slayer" I mean he theoretically killed a deity at this point or something close to it because of all the faith bs and etc. But I can also see the system not acknowledge that as a true Celestial/Deity? Anyway, nice chappy!
Gad
The reward is 1000% a beer
Seamus Harley
Maybe his reward for the core was the piece of yip of yore that the viper saved for him.
Joseph Coonelly
"Jake and Ell’Hakan were approaching one of these massive slaps of raised land that looked like a giant wall stretching as far as the wall could see" Slaps - slabs Far as the wall could see - far as the eye could see "blast of energy into the giant slap of raised rock" Slap - slab Thx for the chapter!
itsdlow
Jake’s made Villy one proud Danger Noodle today!
Mitchell Calhoun
Nah I’m guessing it’s that ball thing that Villy took from Yip
Dave
Planetary Sacrifice Is Completed!!
TyranT-Rex
Seems like tomorrow will be the last fight chapter, so you're almost there.
Despair
Great chapter :) , waiting for the finale tomorrow :)
Cory Sauls
Such a good fight! Thank you for the chapter!
Exaiter
Soo, Jake gonna use his juice to escape now i guess?
Unlisted Pokémon Hudson
Guess my guess was wrong Orange Fuck doesn’t die from an overdose of Jake juice
Jonah Rivera
Feels like a DBZ episode of Goku fighting Frieza on planet Namek.....planet exploding and everything, all we need now is Jake screaming for 20 mins and golden hair Thank you for the chapter
M Conroy
Thfc
Exaiter
far as the wall could see. The two of them exchanged. The wall could see, the eyes could see i guess.
Phoenixdrop
Oh boy here it comes people also there has to be some kind of title for destroying a planet in C-grade heck you could probably still get it in early B-grade I also imagine there being a title for destroying a star or solar system
A Flashy BR
Spicy
Kt-x
Loved this chapter! Villy is so proud! 🥲😁
Clint
Tftc. Fun reading this alongside book 11. Glad to see one last big attack from the already-dead EH. Hoping it triggers some good progress.
Matthias
Tftc
Andy Swearingen
I knew eclipse was coming! TFTC
Sailesh Kumar Kumar
TFTC
shawn B
Oooh, how’s he gonna get out of this?!
Randall Jones
Tftc
Darshar Griffonmane
I so bet that Villy sent him back a beer, singular. And we almost have to be coming up on a Primal Moment right? Fantastic chapter!
Lizy Flore
Badass 👀 next turn is Jake’s
doob
Ecwipth
Roy Cheung
This gives me Goku Vs Frieza on Namek vibes
Frost1005
Tftc
John
TFTC “Usually, this faucet would be connected to a water tank – the soul and his resource polls – “ Resource pools “As the fissures grew, entire landmasses were raised due to the shifting plates, the stone not made for such rapid change as he cracked and broke apart, “ It cracked and broke “Jake and Ell’Hakan were approaching one of these massive slaps of raised” Slabs of raised “land that looked like a giant wall stretching as far as the wall could see. “ Eye could see “Ell’Hakan’s trident release a blast of energy into the giant slap of raised rock.” Slab of raised rock
BlackRazaras
Thanks for the chapter
Sean
It's been rough waiting for all these chapters to finish up so I can read it all at once -_- I just keep opening the chapters hoping I can find some kind of signal that this chapter will be the last one in the fight.
Straat Junon
Tyfc
Straat Junon
What a cockroach
Paulo Furlaneto
TFTC
doob
Pog
Drana :D
Thanks for the chapter
Shafan Knight
TFTC!
Nihad Həşimovv
I am here!!
Frédéric Cantin
Tyftc
Connor
Thanks for the chapter
I Solis
Thanks!
Tyler Krogh
First here!
