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Chapter 1122 - Ree-Covered
🕑 Added 2025-04-24 11:22:23 +0000 UTC“We’ll arrive shortly,” the god said as she looked at the hawk that was roosting on top of her bed, having gathered all the bedding to make a small nest.
“Ree!” Sylphie responded happily before flapping her wings and flying up.
“I want to bring attention to the fact that our late arrival is primarily because you insisted on taking detours,” the god sighed, as she wondered why she had even taken this job... well, alright, she knew why she had taken it. Escorting the Sylphian Hawk had been a sought-after assignment, in part because it was expected to be incredibly easy, but primarily because it would help them form better relations with the leadership of the Pantheon of Life.
Potnia had taken on this task also because of the Chosen of the Malefic Viper. She had risen to godhood only three eras ago and had been the Chosen of Artemis before her ascension to godhood. After becoming a god, she had remained close with Artemis, which was also why she found the current situation quite... puzzling.
Things had changed after Artemis went to Nevermore just a few years ago. When Potnia heard that her former Patron was busy visiting the Chosen of the Malefic Viper and spending quite a lot of time with him, Potnia at first theorized that Artemis was trying to strengthen the relationships between the Order and the Pantheon of Life, which would make some sense. Artemis was a hunter goddess, after all, and the Chosen of the Malefic One was also a hunter specializing in archery, so if she could color his Path just a little and help him, it could be great for the relationship between the two Primordial factions.
However, as the days progressed, and when she briefly met Artemis after she had gone to visit the Chosen... Potnia had begun to believe that what Artemis was hoping to nurture wasn’t the relationship between two factions, but two people. Namely, herself and the Chosen.
What’s more, Artemis didn’t deny this at all, which only confused Potnia further. Artemis had the reputation she did for a reason, but now she was suddenly interested in getting close to a mere C-grade mortal. An impressive one, sure, but still just a mortal who some would argue had barely begun his Path.
Potnia didn’t have to guts to interrogate Artemis directly, so when the mission to escort the Sylphian Hawk was presented, Potnia saw it as a great opportunity to get to learn more about what was going on from the person she and others considered closest to the Chosen.
With a Path that revolved around rearing and fighting alongside beasts, Potnia was the ideal candidate, and with her power at the Fifth Circle of Divinity, she was neither too strong nor too weak to serve as a proper escort.
The place they were visiting was led by a Sylph at the Seventh Circle of Divinity, so if someone too powerful had served as escort, the Sylphs would likely have found themselves pressured, while if someone who had only just become a god came along, it could be viewed as disrespectful... even if Sylphs weren’t known to care about that sort of thing.
Anyhow, Potnia had run into some problems with her plan of learning things from the Sylphian Hawk. Maybe she had gotten too content, but Potnia usually had a really easy time convincing any and all mortal animals to tell her whatever she wanted to know. Her Path made them innately trust her and view her as a safe person, but none of that had shown any effect on the Sylphian Hawk... at least not in the way Potnia had wanted it to.
The only effect it had seemingly had was to make the hawk more comfortable, asking Potnia and their entire flight crew to make random stops whenever the “wind whispered” about something interesting in the vicinity. Granted, these minor excursions had all been fruitful for the hawk, but that didn’t mean it hadn’t delayed their arrival by a lot.
Luckily, the journey was at its end now as Potnia walked with the happy hawk out to the deck of the flying ship. On a side note, yes, they could have used teleportation, but opted for a more scenic route so the hawk could see more of the Great Planet.
Arriving on the deck, the massive pillar of wind was visible in the distance. The tornado stretched upwards into the sky, where it was swallowed by a wormhole connected directly to the Vortex Pinnacle, a World Wonder Potnia didn’t dare visit due to how dangerous it was.
Around this tornado, sky islands had been constructed, and they all floated around, turning with the tornado, albeit at far lower speeds. The remnant energies from the World Wonder leaking through the wormhole made this blessed land for any creature walking a Path using the wind affinity, and even at this distance, the hawk could feel it.
“Ree!” she screeched gleefully while flapping her wings, making Potnia smile.
“Our presence has already been noticed,” she said. “I will retreat to the background and allow Miss Sylphie to handle matters from here on out.”
“Ree,” the bird agreed, while also politely thanking Potnia for her work, making the goddess smile even more.
“Just call for me if you need me for anything,” Potnia said as she teleported to a hidden room within the flying vessel. Chances were, she would stay there until Sylphie wanted to leave again. Not that Potnia complained. This was exactly why escort work was considered a simple job. Unless things went really wrong, one wouldn’t really have to do anything, and even in cases of conflict, diplomacy was nearly always the solution, as no one wanted to make an unnecessary conflict with a god simply due to the actions of a mortal.
Potnia had also briefly conversed with the Sylph goddess who ruled this communion of Sylphs, and things shouldn't go wrong. In fact, upon realizing who and what Sylphie was, this Sylph goddess even expressed personal interest in meeting with the hawk, which partly shared a name with their race. Especially upon realizing she was blessed by Stormild, the sole elemental Primordial and the greatest god in existence to most elementals.
Still, Potnia had to keep an eye out as half a dozen S-grade Sylphs soon surrounded the ship, all looking curiously at the small green hawk that sat perched on the railing. The wind blew around the ship, and a form of communication Potnia could not understand took place between the wind elementals and the part-elemental bird.
Some nervousness did worm its way into Potnia’s mind when a full minute passed with no one moving, but just then, Sylphie let out a loud screech and flapped her wings, the many Sylphs responding by also transforming into shapes of birds as they flew down, and together, they all took off and headed towards the largest of the sky islands floating around the tornado.
I wish you luck in your endeavors, Potnia thought to herself, still a bit miffed that she’d failed to learn much about what was truly going on between Artemis and the Chosen of the Malefic Viper, though she did have her theories.
A lot of theories... including those that, if she weren’t a god, would definitely have been considered heretical to even think about.
Much less writing them down.
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Jake stretched, his entire body cracking after having meditated for too long. Jumping up and down on his toes while shadow boxing a little, Jake confirmed he was back to a pretty acceptable state. He wasn’t quite fully healed yet, but the wonders of natural recovery had certainly done their job.
Helped along a little by Meditate, sure, but all Meditate really did was speed up natural recovery. Granted, Jake did speed it up a lot more than usual, as despite his lack of skill upgrades, he had improved the skill continuedly while studying the tome left by the First Sage. It had definitely saved him a few days of sitting on his ass.
“Good now?” the little Warpsnatcher asked curiously as it watched Jake jump around.
“Definitely getting there,” Jake answered politely to the critter that had allowed him to stay in its home during these roughly two weeks of recovery. Feeling a lot better, Jake also finally had the confidence to ask some questions he had been wondering about, now that he no longer had to be overly worried about the beast turning aggressive or kicking him out.
“Can I know why you decided to save me?” Jake asked a question that had been burning in his mind for a fortnight. Sure, Jake had given the Warpsnatcher a single core from a Rainbowfeather Songbird, but watching the pile of cores the beast had already collected, it was just one among thousands now.
The Warpsnatcher looked at Jake for a few moments before answering. “Hunter nice. I help Hunter. Hunter help me.”
Jake frowned, not entirely sure what the creature was getting at. Noticing his confusion, the Warpsnatcher held up its palms as a large orb of magic appeared. “Hunter from big world.”
The orb floated upwards as the cat-like porcupine creature summoned a tiny orb. “Me from small world.”
Realization struck Jake as he realized what the creature was getting at. “You want to leave this planet?”
“Leave!” the Warpsnatcher started clapping its palms happily, confirming Jake had guessed right... which put him in a bit of a debacle... because according to the rules, Jake couldn’t help the Warpsnatcher with that.
One of the rules of the Hunting Grounds was that one was not allowed to bring any monsters outside the planet unless given express permission. This even included the regular hunting targets, much less the endangered species. The Warpsnatcher was mega-endangered and definitely not something that could just be smuggled out.
Jake did understand why the creature wanted to leave, though. From what the Rainbowfeather Sovereign said, some of the older B-grades appeared aware that this was just a Hunting Ground with limited growth potential for all those living on the planet. They could all grow to high-tier C-grade relatively quickly, but evolving to B-grade was incredibly difficult, while going even further than that was borderline impossible.
Records on a single planet were simply too limited. Killing hunters was one way to inject new Records into a B-grade’s Path, but the best way would naturally be to leave the planet behind entirely and explore the multiverse.
Chances were the Warpsnatcher knew this too, and from the aura and abilities displayed by the little beast, Jake was confident it was a high-tier variant. The kind that had a harder time evolving than other monsters, likely resulting in a B-grade evolution being borderline impossible if it remained on the planet.
Jake found himself deep in thought and didn’t even notice when the Warpsnatcher began poking him to get his attention. Back in reality, Jake looked down at the critter as it stared up at him with its large cat-like eyes. “You help?”
Taking a deep breath, Jake nodded. “I’ll do what I can.”
He couldn’t make any more promises than that, and luckily, the Warpsnatcher seemed happy with his reply as it danced around a little before searching through a pile of fruit and taking out one, which it promptly offered to Jake.
Taking the weird purple fruit, Jake nodded politely as he ate the thing. It had a strong chocolate flavor. With a few happy jumps, the Warpsnatcher left the cavern again, leaving Jake to sit down for his final meditation session before it was time to get topside again.
Jake really had to hand it to his intuition. Going to the Warpsnatcher’s hideout had been a brilliant move. The only other place safer had to be the outpost, and Jake honestly preferred this cavern as he didn’t even have to consider other people potentially being around.
Around a day and a half later, the Warpsnatcher returned once more with a few new pieces of loot. Jake watched it unpack and sort its findings before he spoke up.
“I’m all good now, so I’ll leave,” Jake said, catching the attention of the beast.
It turned around and scanned him from top to bottom. After a second, it tilted its head and spoke in its tiny voice, this time perhaps even sounding a bit nervous. “Come find again?”
“I promise I will,” Jake said in a reaffirming voice, making the Warpsnatcher happy.
“Me help you go top!”
Clapping its hands, the fur on the little beast started to shimmer as if it was about to disappear again. A silver light began filling the cavern, enveloping Jake as he felt something pull at him slightly. Feeling no sense of danger, he trusted the Warpsnatcher and didn’t resist as the world around him began turning weird and blurry.
All colors disappeared, and for a second, everything looked... off. It was as if he could see the outline of everything, like reality was just an in-progress sketch. The only solid things were the trees far above, which all looked like solid white masses. However, before Jake could properly commit what he saw to memory, he found himself standing in the jungle once more, the Warpsnatcher beside him, looking a bit tired.
“You big!” it exclaimed, sitting down.
“Are you calling me fat?” Jake asked, acting all offended.
“No! Big!” the Warpsnatcher corrected him, clearly not getting the joke. The creature looked in thought for a while before seemingly finding the word. “Heavy! You heavy!”
Jake was about to make another joke as it clicked. The Warpsnatcher wasn’t talking about Jake’s physical form, but his metaphysical one. In other words, he had a “heavy” soul.
Teleporting stronger people was harder than teleporting weaker ones. It took more energy, effort, and the teleporter had to be more complex. In many ways, it wasn’t inaccurate to say that stronger people were “heavier” to transport than weaker ones. Jake, with his Anomalous Soul and power that he had proven capable of taking down B-grades, was definitely one of the “heaviest” C-grades around.
What the Warpsnatcher did wasn’t strictly teleporting, but affecting stronger people with any kind of magic was just harder. That was also why healers were pretty much useless when it came to treating those significantly stronger than themselves, and having a support member in the party with roughly equal power to everyone else was a requirement for the true top parties of the multiverse.
“I apologize for my heaviness,” Jake said with a slight smile, the Warpsnatcher taking his apology at face value.
“It okay! You go!” the Warpsnatcher said as it raised its two paws above its head. “Fight!”
Jake chuckled and shook his head as he walked off, raising a hand to wave goodbye to the Warpsnatcher that mimicked his movement, waving him goodbye. Once Jake was a suitable distance away, he slowly shifted his own position within the paradigm of Perception, disappearing from sight.
Once Unseen Hunter was active, Jake took to the air to orient himself and properly determine his distance from the Grand Lake. His escape had taken him pretty far, and it would take him about an hour and a half to reach the massive lake once more.
Over the last two weeks and a bit, his Hunter’s Mark had also naturally faded from the Rainbowfeather Sovereign, and he could confirm that the B-grade hadn’t left its Area since getting there. Seeing as the Sovereign couldn’t have known Jake had a mark on it, he assumed the bird wouldn’t interfere in what would come next.
Starting his preparations for the hunt, Jake traveled to the Grand Lake, and during the following two days, he scouted the many islands to try to get an idea of what he was dealing with. Using Pulse and stealth, Jake looked for the nine B-grades on his shit-list, and once he found one, he left a Hunter’s Mark on it.
A part of him had feared that the B-grades would be smart and stick together after hearing his threat before leaving, but it seemed that the B-grades were as afraid of each other as they were of Jake. Rather than sticking together, they all stayed in the inner circles of their islands, surrounded by peak C-grades of their kin.
While that was annoying, Jake learned the Simivita had definitely been one of the most populous species. Additionally, before, Jake still wanted to improve his archery and learn his own limits.
Now... now, Jake didn’t care about that. All he cared about was showing these B-grades just how royally they had fucked up by ruining Jake’s fight.
Floating far up in the air, Jake held out Eternal Hunger as the malleable weapon warped, taking on the shape of a spear-like arrow, energy surging as Jake remained hidden with Unseen Hunter.
Far below, deep inside the jungle, surrounded by kin it believed offered it safety, a B-grade relaxed, unaware that its pissed-off grudge-fueled reaper was readying his metaphorical scythe.
Comments
Chloe
REE!!!!! Tyftc
Moosh
I absolutely love the warpsnatcher
DrDankness
Pshhhhhhhhhhhhawwww Potnia making fanfics of her previous patron and Jake angrily setting up a big ass bomb of an eternal hunger arrow is peak chapter material.
Trumangolorian
Fanfics!!!!!!!! The smuty kinda lolol. Tyftc
Greg Alverson
I have a feeling the solution is going to involve Jake juice, if it evolves then the pantheon of life will need to find it a new planet as a B grade
Néstor Rocha
Bwahahaha! Potnia is writing Jake x Artemis RPF fanfics! This is pure gold! Also, I really hope that out of pure spite Jake upgrades Powershot and one-hit-kills if not this, then at least one of the B-grades. I mean, a fully powered up shot made with Eternal Hunger from surprise? One of them, at least whichever has the smallest defences, is gonna die in one hit.
TimeDrawsNigh
continuedly -> continually
Alexander C Hyde
“Leave!” the Warpsnatcher started clapping its palms happily, confirming Jake had guessed right... which put him in a bit of a (debacle)... because according to the rules, Jake couldn’t help the Warpsnatcher with that. (Is debacle correct here?)
Sonny Herman
Hahaha i like what you went with for the chapter name
Kurai Kami Sedrick
ZOGARTH!!! LET THE WARPSNATCHER COMEBACK TO EARTH WITH JAKE AND BE A RECURRING ANIMAL FRIEND, AND MY LIFE IS YOURS!!! Lmao I love her
ABTelford
😃 I LOVE this chpt title! Lol!
Phil Ritter
Found a typo: Potnia didn’t have to guts to interrogate Artemis directly. to -> the
Phil Ritter
With how much everyone me included loves the warpsnatcher I really hope he will become a recurring character. Little bugger is way too cute to discard within a few chapters
Azayrian105
Just so people in the future know and who might be confused at all of the other comments. The original title of this chapter was asking the comments to share their ideas for the title as Zogarth couldn’t think of one.
Corvid
Afterwords he's sitting in detention with Nature's Attendant writing on a blackboard "I will not drop orbital bombardments on a wildlife preserve just got a got an owie" 500 times
Corvid
It absolutely is
Michael Ferguson
It is perfection 💖😍
solomon pagan
So let's just get this out there *writing them down* is this god writing fanfic headcanon of jake and Artemis
PWeygandt
If the little guy gets the Jake Juice upgrade and goes back to Earth, maybe this is how we get a Wyrmgod blessing, due to the connection caused by the space magic
Morgan LF
I like the new title! LOL
Joshua Little
Thanks for the chapter.
Michael Ferguson
WE RIOT!!🔥🔥🔥
Michael Ferguson
A tornado is such a good hiding place! Every sylph knows!
Drew
Obviously not. She's C-grade; they were S-grades. They just shifted to match her.
brjenness
Let's ask the real question...who is going to end up blessing sonic?
brjenness
Zog starts part two of the series: Primal Zookeeper
brjenness
Did sylphie use her authority to turn sylphs into birds?
TyranT-Rex
Well she still doesn't want to be rude to Silphie. She knows how close sylf and Jake are and Jake is close to her former Patron and was invited to the Pantheon of life by the second in command. Nothing to gain being rude. I mean we saw the sword saint flirt with a Ancient Vampire God a few chapters back. So this interaction isn't too crazy.
John Durrett
Tyftc. Looking forward to Ree having a great time and Jake shaking a leg
John Durrett
Can’t snatch this
John Durrett
He Ain’t Heavy, He’s My Brother
Xien
… and so it begins…#whoopthata$$
TyranT-Rex
Yeah I thought he would do a bit more prepping to make a protean arrow first, but he's going straight into it lol
Kristopher Hanson
Elementals and... Fruit?
bioticisbasic
Tyftc! I love the funky little warpsnatcher
Andrew Lavoie
His goals just keep getting more and more ridiculous
ShaunB
"Detours and Grudges"
NSaaby
Titel change: "Are you calling me fat!"
Ryan Linus
Wouldn’t it be cool if everything up to this point in the series is just preface for the real MC’s origin story: Warpsnatcher
Alec Petherbridge
Thanks for the chapter
Richard Loveless
I bet Jake gets his goal of killing a creature one grade above his in a single shot during this rampage.
joel southard
Thank you for the chapter
Lonnie
I like the title change!
Tanner
Doesn't feel like filler at all.... feels like a setup chapter to me.
VenL.C.
🗣️ “F’ em up Jake!”
Stevean Bozek
Hah, and that stupid rainbow bird thought he was a spiteful revenge enthusiast. Don't fuck with Jake's hunt
Ender419
I second this title due to the triple entendre you have defined.
Brian Woods
Heavy Soul, it's misleading but accurate.
Nick Elliott
I'm looking forward to after this little arc when we get one of our beloved "exposition dumps" in the form of Ydd and Nai'tch being interrupted to be informed that all of the B grade life on planet LV-426 has ceased to exist. Including Nessie under the lakes. Ydd confirms she detects a disturbance in the force. And after ruling out outside attack, B grades escaping the planet and confirming only C grade hunters were recorded planet side. We get "wait a minute, what planet did Artemis say she sent the Chosen?" "but it cannot be him, there were over 20 B grades on that planet and he was barely level 300"
Dave
New title is amusing
NovaZero
Heavy. Howzzat
Jeryd Greer
Tftc! I’m excited for the next 8 (my bet) chapters as we say goodbye to 9 B-grades and a break period for the Sovereign rematch
DDHG
B-Grades “ha foolish C grade. We are superior to you. Now excuse us all while we sit and scratch or bum fully unprepared for the slaughter and death that will descend to us. Heh. C grades” Angry boy Jake *Drops the equivalent of a poisonous nuke on B grades*
C0bra$
Thank u for the story
Eric Rios
Thanks for the read. Great as always.
Eric Rios
Title " A Heavy Warp " or " Warping fates "
Steven Tuttle
Whispers & Revenge
Thenais
The hunter strikes back
Dim
Title suggestion: "Why You Should Eat Your Vegetables" :)
Sprightly Ebbie
Title suggestion: Whispers & Reaper Whispers referring to Sylphie’s wind excursions and Reaper referring to Jake coming to get his lick back 😊
Tim Campbell
Fruitful Relationships would be tough to beat!
Robert Paulson
A filler chapter
Sylphie
REE!!
Rewdan
Big Wind Little Warp
Gbee
Chapter names, 1. Making Friends 2. Fruitful Relationships
Zach Newman
The warpsnatcher request
SUBLIME SMITER
"Transporters- Lite, Heavy, and Grateful."
Gabe Stankiewicz
Thank you thank you thank you for the chapter!! Also, the little adorable warpsnatcher is one of the best monsters in this series, with the exception of the beasts that Jake had directly affected with his Jake juice 😂
PatienceHoney
Chapter title suggestion: Heretical Wonderings While Wandering and Plights of Threatened and Endangered Species
Zogarth
Already used that.
Zogarth
Fix
ToadSage
Anything bad happens to warpsnatcher and we riot 🔥🔥🔥
Zogarth
Sadly, there cannot be "swear words" in titles due to RR rules and whatnot.
The lord of chaos
The B-Grade purge
Rick Lehmann
All I can hear is: “The Game” by Motörhead playing. Especially after hearing it in Rogue Heroes.
Jackie
"Heavy Jake" lol
Ty Cooper
Ooooh! Catchy
Ty Cooper
I like the "ree-covered" or "ree and recovery". ree-covery maybe
Shane
Grudge-Fueled Reaper seems a good title.
JSC
Title suggestion: Do I look fat in this mask ?
Shaun McNally
Animal Pals and a Pissed off Hunter
McMuffin
Fear the Reaper
brjenness
you know, sylphie is going to do something that freaks out that god
Jordan
Title idea: "Shit List"
Razeel Nightfall
Title ideas: Sylphie is light as the wind, Jake is heavy as rock.
Steven L
I would called the chapter prelude to the hunt, big game hunter.
Will R
Best chapter name!
Tristan Lewis
I love this little guy so much
Jason Bates
Ree-parations complete
Eric Shivak
Ree-visit and Heavy Souls
Brian Schutt
Edit-One of the rules of the Hunting Grounds was that one was now allowed to bring any monsters —now should be “not”. I think.
Michael Ferguson
I feel like I got two chapters today. Very nice!
Tim Cochran
Titles of similar theme: Ree and Recovery Ree-venge Ree-covered Ree-quest Ree-connosaince
Navdeep Kumar
What about "Illusion of safety" for the title
Michael Ferguson
This is a good one too.
Bookreader97
Idea name: Slyphs & scythes
Gijs van der Vegt
Title Idea: Winds of Change
Michael Ferguson
DO IT!
Michael Ferguson
This is a good one.
Michael Ferguson
I like this one
Michael Ferguson
You could make this two chapters. Theories on the Wind- Recovered
Ty Cooper
Woo! Hoping to see his first one shot of a b-grade. Also wonder if they will let him take the warpkitty? So it is already a high tier variant which makes it extra special already. Would they let it go? Even if Jake gave it a primal origin something to make it like minaga special.
Pokediv
Reeeee!
John
This is a good one!
Matt B
Title idea: meeting new friends and seeking new enemies
Tori Wolfe
Recent chapter title ideas- Making connections and gathering information.
Steven Myer
Breath of the Wild 😀
Steven Myer
Sylphie's Big Big Day
David
How about for a title, A Ree on the Wind!
Thenais
Shubby and fatty
islandcastle11
Fat Hunter lol
Phillip
Edit - he had improved the skill continuedly - he had improved the skill continuously
Eden
Jake is fat
Jules Deathwish
I'm getting Dobby vibes from the teleporting Care Bear. Master give Dobby a sock?!
Cajun Terror
On tonights episode of top gear, a bird makes some friends, Jake gets called fat, and an alligator man finds out.
ABTelford
Title suggestion: unexpected questions. And again thanks for the chapter!
brjenness
title: zoggy crumbles under pressure from fans and keeps sonic the hedge cat around
bloodsoup
Title suggestion - big soul little grudge.
Pretzel Warrior
Even with out his connections he at least said he would try and that means alot coming from Jake he dosent really follow the rules alot lol
ButterflEye
“Winded and refreshed”
female person type thing
why not Bob?
Miss Rena
Oh, I like this one. LOL
Miss Rena
"Windy day with friends and enemies/targets" would be my suggestion. Thanks for the chapter. I love Sylphie!
Rahsheem Reid
I can definitely see the warpsnacher going to the “big world” upon request by Jake.
female person type thing
chapter title "Are you calling me fat"
Rahsheem Reid
Yep one shotting a B grade is going to happen. I think someone called it last chap.
Dan
"Fear the Reaper" -title suggestion, if you wanna get a lil edgy with it while also referencing a solid song
IntenseSushi
+1 for fat hunter or heavy hunter
Corvid
Ohhh boy, you know Jake's a bit upset when he goes right to the "I killed a pseudo god with this arrow right after I ripped the core out of his home planet and killed them all" form. Also, my title suggestion is "Bestest Bird Sylphie Meets Big Wind and friends"
Mats
Title name - Pissed-off grudge-fueled reaper.
Definitely (Not) a Necromancer
Recommendation: Godly suspicions 1
Zeroxith
Title recommendation: Fat Hunter
SilentWrath
Title Suggestion - "Calm Before the Storm" or something like that, considering Jake is gonna go on a slaughter spree
Oldfaithful
"Magical Sylphs & Where To Find Them" and yes that is a reference.
Phoenixdrop
Ah I believe we may be getting our B-grade one shot kill sooner than anticipated now JAKE TAKE UP THE CALL OF ALL ARCHERS WITH A SKILL MAKING THEIR ARROWS STRONGER THE FARTHER THEY FLY AND START THE ORBITAL BOMBARDMENT
LongMickeyRicky
Are we gonna use jake juice on the warpsnatcher when it evolves to b-grade ?
Indevan Jones
No he used it to kill elhakan
dash w
Thanks for the chappy
mpop
”Sow the wind…” and the next one being ”…reap the whirlwind” is a really good suggestion
Spencer Miller
Title suggestion: Friends in New Places
Canis
Rumination and Revenge
Spencer Miller
I wonder if it would be let out if it evolved into a unique variant. Or maybe evolve into something capable of leaving itself, given its abilities.
Clint
Ooh. Is this the first time Jake will have used Eternal Hunger as an arrow??
Skchoad
Title suggest: Wind speaks while arrow reaps.
Spencer Jefferson
Just to spin off of yours: Theories and Fan Fics
Rodney
A righteous hunt begins. is my suggestion
Eduron
Chap Name: The Rest bevor the Revenge
Fyrtue
My recommendation is "Seizing Opportunities" -Potnia (tried to) seize the opportunity to get closer to Sylphie/Jake -Sylphie did seize every windy opportunity that came up. -Warpsnatcher seized an opportunity to try and get off the planet -Jake seized the opportunity to rest then open big on the fools that interrupted his fight.
Comeback Kid
"Unspilled Tea and Big Boned Souls"
Patrick Burzio
My submission for chapter title: REE and the Reaper
Drew
Chapter title idea: "A Weighty Promise" (to the Warpsnatcher)
daniel gager
Gusts, gods, and time to gank
Syf0
All is fair in love and war
Abdulaziz ALRumaih
Gotta catch em all
Lo-Fi
Title ideas: Friends with Benefits. A triple entendre as it kind of hints at Jake x Artemis, Jake being helped out by the Warpsnatcher, and Slyphie being essentially allowed to do whatever she wanted due to her relationship with Jake and Stormild
SinCinnamon
New beastie friend! Sylphie best bird! TFTC!
SunStar
It’s a shame that your average random Hunter wouldn’t know anyone with the authority to authorize and arrange the move of a Warpsnatcher to a place of better opportunity. If only it had met someone with connections. That luck of that little thing.
Jason Hardman
New Friends and Old Enemies
Jordan Rogers
Title “heavy burden” or “Fat friends are heavy burdens”
Joshua Garland
When he’s facing the crocodile a good chapter name would be “big swamp puppy”
Zuuuuuri
Jake gets his naming sense from zogarth
Anders Jensen
Chapter suggestion: "Taking Flight"
Dougie Mitchell
Warpy should definitely team up with Sandy for some adventures and Jake can give him a little juice at his next evolution👍
Burkes
I caught that too. I was like “Ackshually ☝️🤓”
Daniel Wells
"Hungry Reaper"
Carver Conway
The fat soul hunter embarks again
Burkes
Settling (not so) old scores is good title i think
Sean Casey
"Heretical thoughts"
J Q
Anomalous animals, friends and foes.
Person
Chapter name ideas "Friends past and future"
scarredrazor
I vote we call the chapter "Steve"
Derrick Blacketter
Easy chapter name. "Are You Calling Me Fat?"
Daniel Brian
Chapter title 'Friends in strange places'
Keldra
"and things should go wrong." Probably "not go wrong"...
Taylor
Rizz god jake
Cody K
"...the Chosen of the Malefic One was also an archer." Not "also a Hunter." The distinction is very important and speaks of ignorance. She should probably do a bit more research on jake before trying to figure out what is happening between him and Artemis. One will answer the other.
Southern Celt
Sylphs and Scythes
Cory S.
Title possibility. “The Wind and The Reaper”
Taylor
Why the hawk cross the road.
Daniel Jackson-Woods
Jake is about to commit more war crimes but he is 100% justified in wiping out entire species in an area due to the bs caused by their leaders being pansies and trying to Gank a stronger opponent while he's in the middle of a fight
Tr0LLach
"Passing Wind"
Flurry
"Hunting down romance and B grades"
Leviathan
"Windy Greetings and Shit List"
Matthew Smith
Curious George & Crocodile Leather
Despair
Just keep it short "recovery", or if you really want to not make it a single word do "escort and recovery"
Xander
TFTC :) Possible chapter title: "Back on the path" Since both Sylphie and Jake have been sidelined for a bit sightseeing or recovering and now are back to pushing their progress. Slightly more edgy "Reap the Whirlwind" or maybe "Sow the wind..." leading to "reap the whirlwind" as a subsequent title since the phrase means along the lines of "fuck about and find out" :) Kinda rude of Jake to eat the fruit and use the warpsnatchers home without even leaving a core as a thank you, especially since he should have a pile of tat to give away considering how much of a loot goblin he is. Jake juice a core give it to the warpsnatcher and transplant it to a larger world within the pantheon maybe? Suggested edits: "Potnia didn’t have *to* guts to interrogate" should be "the" "who ruled this communion of Sylphs, and things should ** go wrong." missing word "one was *now* allowed to bring any monsters" should be "not"
Tilen Praprotnik
Thanks for the chapter
Walter Kimberly
Title idea: Sylphian escort & Shit list scouting
Laurent Jerry
Chapter : free bird
Jrn
"Gone with the wind"
JJB4345_80_815
Chapter: You Heavy! Thank you for the chappy Zogarth!
Grant Anderson
First, TFTC! My suggestion for a chapter title is "Windy Birds and Metaphorical Scythes"
EagleBat
Title suggestion: Rees, Recovery & Revenge
Michael Kawesa
“Pissed off, grudge fuelled reaper!”… I love that 😊
Was geht sie dass an
Happy Hunt Jake! Hopefully he will bend the rules like always to his comfort and get this great buddy outside :)
The Tallest Tree
I'd laugh if the chapter was called something like: Sylphie's Counterintelligence Operation, where she inadvertently gets the Goddess to spill her own secrets while trying to suss out hot gossip on Artemis. Then the goddess stands there dumbfounded while Sylphie screeches 'all according to keikaku' and the S-tier Sylphs screech back 'sasuga Sylphie-Sama'... or something and the Elemental goddess strokes her feathers and says 'not bad young padawan, the wind is strong in you'. Hmm, good idea or fevered nonsense, can't tell.
Aaron Knox
You should name it Kill Jake volume I. Make the revenge tour a play on movies
Jake Rands
The Pissed-Off Grudge-Fueled Reaper
Aaditya Ravindran
Title suggestion: if the order of the two sections could be reversed, "Smugglers and Pitstops" sounds good
Blutako
This
Rick Delallata
Chapter name huh? Hmm how about "Musings of Gods and Preparations of Mortals?
Tom
I really like this one, clever
eatingpitza314
The god escorting Silphie felt a bit off. All of the other world building has been that gods do not defer to mortals and Jake is an exception all the gods that have served him have been doing to serve Villy. But this god doesn't really know Villy or the rest and wants information. I can easily imagine the god helping out but not being as submissive as she is now the Silphy. This is just my personal opinion and I might have missed something though. This isn't a suggestion for chapter title btw.
denym123
Tftc, as a title suggestion: parting with a heavy soul
Shadowessence
Ree ree ree ree ree! Lol No probably "Detour before round the 2nd round"
Blutako
It should be called fat soul
Abriel Blauer
Title suggestion (by Queen) "You're my best friend" & "Another one bites the dust"
Jack Dawson
Chapy McChapterface
Tom
“pissed-off grudge-fueled reaper”
Elijah Reitmeier
Tftc! Maybe ‘Heavy Hunter’ for the chapters name?
Loststar7
TFTC “Im not fat im just big souled”
The Uub
He ain't heavy, he's my brother
James Evans
REE!!! Hunts begin
Jasu
”Heavy issues”
Christoph
Worst case you can always call it Ree!
Baged
"Kinship & friendship"
James coe
Flights of fancy and fuck ups
Jim Erwin
Silly title suggestion "Not saying your ass looks big in those pants, but..."
fruit dragon
Sylhp's just want to have fun
Justin Lucier
Winds and Warpsnatchers
Randall Jones
Gusty suspicions and the wronged hunter returns
James Lucas
"readying his metaphorical scythe" There's your title...
BumAssBumAss
Title could be like "natural and unatural bonds".
Morgan LF
Thanks for the chapter! Title suggestions: "A Hunting We Will Go!" Or "Sylph Business"
Nathan J
"The Reaper Cometh" "Healthy Meditation" "And another cute animal friend" "A friendly relationship" (duel reference to Jake/Artemis, Jake/teleport animal)
Michael mann
“Arriving and Returning”
Chad
Maybe - "The Wonders of Natural Recovery" for the title?
Indevan Jones
Tyfc It's too early and all I could think was Chp name suggestion: Windy Winds & Friends
Tom
Differences in Understanding (God doesn’t get silphie, Jake can understand random wildlife for no reason)
Temlat
TYFC How about “Sylph introductions & An escape pact”
Chris yingling
I say call the chapter awesome sauce. Only because you haven’t used that title yet, and it is a chapter with both Jake and sylphie and that is a whole heaping amount of awesome sauce.
Abriel Blauer
One of the rules of the Hunting Grounds was that one was now allowed to bring any monsters outside the planet unless given express permission. --> One of the rules of the Hunting Grounds was that one was not allowed to bring any monsters outside the planet unless given express permission.
Riptorius
Maybe something like "Second Winds" for the chapter title: alludes to Sylphie's wind stuff and Jake getting a second go round.
Aaditya Ravindran
Edit: things should go wrong. -> things shouldn't go wrong. Or, it should say, "should things go wrong, "
Jake Schmitz
The Hunt Begins?
Jip
Tftc!
Jip
Birb Friends & Shit Lists
Kt-x
Thanks for the chapter
One Winged Angel
Chapter Summary: "Ree!" "AM CUTE SQUIRREL, HELP ME FIND BIG HOME! "Aw, you are just to cute for words, now excuse me while i mollywhop this ganking crocodile bitch and genocide his entire bloodline, then we will go for ice cream!"
Tom C
A chaperone and a grudge-fuelled reaper
lockx
Also thank you for the chapter
lockx
Leaving Just call the chapter leaving. It's got multiple ties to the chapter. Sylvie, Jake leaving recovery, and the warp snatcher wanting to leave
Dalton Dawes
Speculative coalescense
Abriel Blauer
Is it really what you meant, or is it a typo? Potnia had also briefly conversed with the Sylph goddess who ruled this communion of Sylphs, and things should go wrong --> Potnia had also briefly conversed with the Sylph goddess who ruled this communion of Sylphs, and things shouldn't go wrong
Ira White
"Sylphs and the Scythe" title name suggestion
Daniel Hamilton
Title suggestion - A gods dilemma and a request
Terry Robinson
Thanks. Best part of this one made me laugh “pissed-off grudge-fueled reaper “ love it and goi g to have to find a away to use it myself
Naotsugu97
Oh, and as always, Arigato!
Naotsugu97
Chapter name suggestions. “Ree” “The healing snatch” “Travels and plans”
Tom C
Chapter title: The goddess searching for gossip and the grudge-fuelled reaper But maybe more snappy than that? TFTC
Jake Schmitz
Sylphie's Treasure Tour 😆 🤣
Michael Fannon
"Readying the scythe"? Though honestly, you could leave it as is and it would be awesome. Great chapter btw.
Anime Problem
"Heretically heavy" if you want to be funny
Nicklas Falck Jensen
"I'm not fat, just big souled"
Walter Kimberly
Typo: ruled this communion of Sylphs, and things should go wrong.>> should not
Max
Title idea Relationship gossip and Revenge preparation
Daniel Hamilton
Edit - was that one was now allowed to bring any monsters - was that, one was not allowed to bring
Matthias
tftc
Daniel Hamilton
Edit - and things should go wrong - and things shouldn’t go wrong
CHoobler
That, just call your chapter that
Ritsu
I can't speak for everyone, but honestly it would be damn hilarious to keep the title as it is. Doubly so if it stays like this for the audiobook.
Jonathan Venn
Chapter MrChapter
Daniel Hamilton
Edit - Potnia didn’t have to guts - Portia didn’t have the guts
Connor
Thanks for the chapter
Beemoss
Tftc
SCHWING PAPI
Sylphie SCHWING
Arieh Sochaczevski
Thanks for the chapter! “[…] Maybe she had gotten too content, but Potnia[…]” I think you’re looking for ‘complacent’.
