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Chapter 1151 - A Life of Two Masks
🕑 Added 2025-06-04 11:21:06 +0000 UTCJake kept watching as the newly renamed Golden Forest King slowly lowered himself to the ground, the control of his own energy a bit wobbly. Energy was still pulsing throughout the Unique Lifeform’s recently formed body, as it seemingly took a few moments for it and the mask to fully become one.
Only a moment, though, as soon the King landed on the grassy ground softly. Artemis and Yggdrasil had both taken a step back, allowing just Jake and the Unique Lifeform to have their little reunion.
The wisps of consciousness settled on Jake as he felt the Unique Lifeform still adapting to everything, but once he was confident his former Nevermore teammate could hear and understand him, he really couldn’t help himself.
“Man, are you lazy or what? You’re hopelessly behind in levels. What have you even been doing while dead?” Jake said, crossing his arms and shaking his head.
“I’m more surprised seeing you’ve managed to get any levels at all as the last time we met, you were still lazing around, wallowing in your own stupidity after severely injuring your soul,” the familiar voice of the King echoed in Jake’s head, making him smile.
A part of him had still been afraid that the creature brought back wouldn’t truly be the arrogant asshole he knew. However, seeing as the King’s massive ego couldn’t even give Jake one joke after literally having a god help get him revived, it was definitely the same King as before, despite the changed name.
Speaking of...
“What’s up with the name change? Look, I’m not saying you can’t change your name, but you’ve already had three in the brief period I’ve known you, and if you keep up this pattern, you’ll have hundreds if not thousands by the time you fail your ascension to godhood,” Jake fired back with a smile.
“I only change my name as a result of very important events. Dying to you and subsequently finding myself bound to you like a slave was certainly worth changing it to remind myself of my own stupidity,” the former Fallen King said. “In the same vein, it’s certainly an equally massive event when I finally manage to rid myself of the chain around my soul.”
“Doesn’t really explain the name,” Jake shrugged, not offended at all that the King was happy to be free of him. In fact, it was a sentiment he very much reciprocated.
Even if the connection had been somewhat useful at times, it was still an overall negative, in Jake’s opinion. He fundamentally opposed what it presented, and while Jake never took advantage of it, the mere fact that he could was enough for him to hate its existence.
He also knew that the King despised it even more than Jake did, and for good reason. Jake also knew that the King would have done borderline anything to get rid of the chain holding him back, and that he’d spent much of his free time researching a solution.
“I considered a few different names, but more important than my new name was to get rid of the old one. Forest was chosen because I’ve always felt a deep connection to the forest from a conceptual standpoint. A forest represents a domain of life for monsters of all kinds. It’s a facilitator of existence. This is the domain I proclaim myself king over. As for the Golden... well, the first thing I noticed after awakening in this new form was that my power of gold had increased in potency substantially, so it came naturally,” the King actually answered Jake’s question seriously.
“Could have just gone with Golden King of the Forest, then,” Jake shrugged. “Would be a good callback to your original name.”
“It wasn’t my original name and far from my first one. I also consciously wanted to avoid a name like that. Calling myself the King of the Forest signifies there’s only one forest for me to rule over,” the Golden Forest King said seriously. “Additionally... in the event of my ascension to godhood, my legacy skills would sound dumb. Something like Force Blast of the King of the Forest simply sounds far too silly and repetitive.”
“Huh, never even fought about that,” Jake muttered. “But actually a pretty good point.”
“Naturally. I plan on sticking with this name permanently,” the King said.
“To be clear, I won’t think of you or refer to you as the Golden Forest King. Ever. Forest King you can have, but definitely gonna mentally ditch the Golden part,” Jake said, being his usual honest self.
“I do not find myself surprised at learning that three words are too difficult for your mind to consistently put together. You’re truly lucky to find yourself the Chosen of the Malefic Viper and not a god with a longer name.”
“Thinking about it more, it’s actually hard to find a peak-level god with a long name...” Jake muttered. All the Primordials had short official names, a lot of them even just one word.
Turning to Artemis, whom both Jake and the King had expertly been ignoring until now, Jake asked a very serious question:
“Is making your Legacy skills sound good part of the considerations gods make when deciding on a name?”
Artemis threw Jake quite a glance as she sighed. “In my case, I’m just using my name. It’s also quite rare for gods to have chosen their own name, as they more often than not simply get assigned one, and the Records around that name eventually crystallize and give it actual power.”
“Fair enough, but surely there have been gods who didn’t like their assigned titles and forced through something else?” Jake said, having a very hard time believing no god had been pissed off about what others called them.
“There likely have been, but those forsaken names tend to be forgotten,” Artemis shrugged.
“I do apologize for the hunter’s incessant need to sate his own curiosity,” the Forest King butted in as he bowed toward her. “This one greets Goddess Artemis, and I believe I also have you to thank for my revival.”
“I was barely involved,” Artemis shook her head. “The Mother Tree and Jake were the ones behind everything.”
“Your modesty is admirable. I know from personal experience that no task which involves interacting with the hunter for prolonged periods can possibly be described as easy,” the King said offensively before turning toward the dryad made by Yggdrasil. “I believe it is only proper to thank you once more. As I stand here, I feel your power echoing throughout my body, and I can only display gratitude for the vessel you created. It surpasses all expectations I could possibly have.”
Yggdrasil looked at the King for a few moments before nodding. Jake didn’t know exactly what had just happened, but he got a strong feeling that the two had briefly spoken telepathically with one another, having a small private conversation that Yggdrasil seemed satisfied with the result of.
Turning her attention toward Jake, the dryad lifted a hand as a mask appeared floating above it. “One soul, one identity, but two masks of roughly equal power. The one you’ve worn until now has returned to where it belongs on the vessel of the Unique Lifeform. This leaves the other mask. The mirror. While the connection between yourself and the Unique Lifeform has been severed, one between the masks still persists, and your ownership of this mask also cannot be called into question.”
The mask, which looked just like the one Jake had before, slowly floated toward him as Yggdrasil kept speaking.
“The original mirror mask was destroyed when the Unique Lifeform fell, but I reformed it and transferred many of the Records from the true mask into the mirror, and alongside that, the Soulbound connection you had to it. As the masks remained connected eternally, it shall grow in tandem with the Unique Lifeform, but in the event of your demise, rather than the Unique Lifeform suffering a disastrous injury to his soul, the mask will simply return to his possession.”
Jake nodded, as he had a follow-up question.
“What happens if the King decides to go and get himself killed again? Seeing as I’m walking around with the mirrored Truesoul and all.”
“The mirrored Truesoul is made to be a conduit of power, and the Unique Lifeform can draw from it to regenerate himself once more. It stores a copy of the true him. However, dependent on the nature of the damage he takes that leads to his demise, you may find yourself in a situation where recovery will require powerful assistance from an outside force, not dissimilar to the way he was reconstituted the first time around.”
“Alright,” Jake said, more or less having just wanted to have it be confirmed that the Forest King was still very much a cockroach that was hard to get rid of for good. He still wasn’t entirely sure about all the stuff about the Truesoul being mirrored and the two masks allowing the Unique Lifeform to technically have two souls and bodies at the same time, but he wasn’t going to question it too much. With the existence of creatures like Minaga out there, questioning anything related to Unique Lifeforms was a fool’s errand.
Instead, he turned his attention toward the mask, which had floated over to him. Even up close, it looked exactly the same, but when he used Identify on it, he saw that the description had changed a fair bit.
[Mask of the Golden Forest King (Unique)] – A mask containing the mirrored Truesoul of the Golden Forest King, a mighty Unique Lifeform. The mask is made from the wood of Yggdrasil using the Records of the Unique Lifeform. Due to its nature, the mask does not obstruct vision when worn, is near-indestructible, and regenerates from any damage it may take. The mirrored Truesoul and final intent of the Unique Lifeform reside within, drawing power from the true body of the Unique Lifeform, allowing this item to continue to grow in tandem with the Golden Forest King. When wearing this mask, all nobility-related abilities are significantly empowered. Enchantments: Mirrored Truesoul of the Golden Forest King. Passively absorbs mana in the atmosphere, increasing mana recovery rate by a large amount. Increases maximum mana by 25%. Requirements: Soulbound
As Jake’s knowledge of what the mask contained had grown, so had the description seemingly changed. From Jake’s understanding, this was a trait of unique items and even skills. As there would only ever be one Mask of the Golden Forest King – at least only one that was wearable by anyone, not the Unique Lifeform – the description could be fluid. Not too dissimilar from Jake’s own Bloodline description.
When it came to actual changes in the item’s effects, the only new thing was an effect empowering all of Jake’s nobility-based abilities. In other words, a completely useless bonus that Jake had no way to use. However, he wasn’t going to complain.
He already knew that this mask remained his most overpowered piece of equipment by far. Having a mask capable of increasing his maximum mana by 25% was just an absolutely insane bonus that was impossible to find under any usual circumstances.
What made it even better was that it came without any drawbacks. A skill like Anomalous Soul had also increased Jake’s maximum mana by 25%, but that had come at a cost. Having it meant Jake needed more experience points for every level, required better Records to get levels and evolve in the first place, and getting it hadn’t exactly been easy. Especially not the subsequent upgrades.
Meanwhile, the mask had no downsides whatsoever. Instead, it even increased his mana regeneration by a notable degree when he wore it. It was an absolutely broken item that could only exist because of the Unique nature of the Unique Lifeform.
Creating an arrow capable of giving a percentage increase in stats wasn’t very feasible. The amount of Records contained within an item tended to be limited by what the crafter was capable of during the time of crafting. Even if some weapons or other items could grow a little, this growth tended to be limited.
Shit, Jake’s own Eternal Hunger was a bit the same. Right now, it could grow with him, but that was only because the original Records contained within had been enough to create a weapon fit for an A-grade. If Jake wanted to keep using Eternal Hunger all the way to S-grade and beyond, there was a good chance he would have to re-craft or improve it in some other qualitative way.
The mask, on the other hand, would keep growing as long as the Forest King did. Sure, there was a possibility that the King would fail to evolve and the mask would eventually weaken, but Jake had a hard time seeing that happen. Especially not now.
Usually, dying and being resurrected was a great way to fuck up one’s Path and corrupt one’s Records beyond recognition, making progress incredibly difficult. However, the King hadn’t truly died, and his resurrection had been quite the endeavour, involving several gods and even a Primordial. Overall, it was definitely something that could well and truly be called a fortunate encounter for the King.
Reaching out and taking hold of the mask, Jake felt how even the wooden grooves were exactly the same as before. Without much hesitation, Jake took on the mask and fully bound it to himself once more.
Instantly he felt the rush of energy as his mana pool expanded, and the mana in the environment began being subtly sucked towards him. The feeling was wonderful, and having the mask back on his face just felt right.
Looking toward the Forest King, their gazes momentarily met, and the Unique Lifeform gave him a quick nod of approval, which was all Jake needed.
“With this, I’ve done as was forepromised. My role here is done, and I shall trust Artemis to show you both out,” Yggdrasil said before turning to Jake. “Alongside the bow, I believe favors have been repaid.”
“For sure,” Jake nodded, having never really felt like Yggdrasil owed him much in the first place. He had just been a courier who brought her some good stuff from Villy, and if she truly owed anyone, it had to be the snake god.
With a final nod, Yggdrasil dispelled her dryad body as it turned into pure nature mana and became one with the environment once more. This left just Jake, Artemis, and the Forest King back still inside Yggdrasil’s Divine Realm... which technically meant Yggdrasil was still there, just not actively.
“I will require some time to fully acclimate to my new body and ensure everything is as it should be,” the Forest King said as he moved his clawed hand up in front of his mask, opening and closing it a few times.
“You do that at my place,” Jake said. “The Pantheon of Life gave me an entire palace with way too many rooms.”
“Pantheon of Life... so that’s where we are,” the King nodded. “You’ve gone through quite the efforts to facilitate my resurrection.”
“Would have felt like a dick if I hadn’t,” Jake shrugged.
The King was silent for a moment before he spoke again. “I do have to make a confession. While the time and place it happened hadn’t been planned, and my demise had occurred earlier than I would have preferred, I had already intended to-“
“I get it,” Jake held up a hand and interrupted him. “No fucking way all the puzzle pieces required for your return would have appeared that conveniently out of pure luck.”
“Perhaps I had underestimated your intellect. Then again, I should not consider a statistical outlier a new standard,” the King said, sounding almost impressed. “But yes, my demise could have been considered halfway planned. Poorly planned, I came to learn from the Primordial. If I’d have had more time, I would have likely seen the flaws... alas, I have no cause for complaint seeing the final result.”
“Hey, glad it all worked out, though I would recommend avoiding dying again any time soon, as I don’t have any other Primordials owing me favors right now,” Jake said with a smile.
“I’ll attempt to,” the King said, actually taking the well-deserved flak.
Jake didn’t say anything more but just felt glad that the Unique Lifeform was back. It made him feel that at least some of the damage Ell’Hakan had done was now remedied, and made him feel slightly better about his failures in the past.
He also knew that he wouldn’t be the only one happy to hear that the King had been revived, as it was definitely time for a proper Nevermore Party Reunion.
Comments
Nick Borgne
Never more renewal
Tony Belfer
Glad he's back.
Chloe
Party! REE! Tyftc
Parker Bond
Depending on your tier it might not be available until tomorrow
Francis Udeh
Is chapter 1152 up yet? I can't seem to find it and others
Dave
Nice 🎉
Corwin Amber
'even fought about that' fought -> thought
Alexander C Hyde
This left just Jake, Artemis, and the Forest King (back still) inside Yggdrasil’s Divine Realm... which technically meant Yggdrasil was still there, just not actively. (Are both words needed?)
DrDankness
Hey. Hes an asshole. But he’s our asshole and that means something in a world of dangerous ass people. Having someone who you know will have your back is invaluable. Also the guy genuinely is unkillable as a roach. The bro died twice and still comes out stronger.
Tim Schillinger
Oh the sass! Tftc
James Roach
Please have the Desmond lord escape from this realm to be the demon killed in book 3 of a mages cultivation, and of course sissy is Chary’s kid.
Peter Smith
It occured to me that an arcane mana affinity could become a base mana affinity similar to the malefic viper creating the malefic mana affinity. Which means that Jake's arcane affinity could become a named affinity as well. If it does i propose the name of "horizon" affinity, as it is a mana type that epitomizes the aspects of a black hole's event horizon. Stabile as nothing can redirect or destroy it's gorce and direction without overpowering the black hole itself, and destructive as it shreds everything that comes in reach that cannot defy the blackhole's grasp.
Zogarth
Fix stuff. Except last one. Skipping words and stuff is perfectly normal when speaking.
Zogarth
Fix
Vega
Oh hey Duskleaf hates his name. Though that’s another mystery there. Thanks for the chapter!
Phil Ritter
With reunion time tomorrow could this mean we don’t get a cliffhanger on Friday?
Corvid
King goes up to the rainbowfeather sovereign and just says "he was my golden ticket first. Only one Sovereign here." and walks away
Corvid
Jake effectively rules a galaxy, not Earth. Which means that Miranda, Arthur, The Sky Whale, the Returned King, and Elf-boy rule the galaxy. True top tier leadership is all about delegating all the leadership
Daniel Hamilton
Long live the king. Im excited for the upcoming dinner party and Jake’s +1
Ira Smith
The King returns
dash w
Thanks for the chappy
Jeryd Greer
Welcome back King
MarineDebris
Oh hell yes! For real, any time the beginning of this story crosses my mind, it's still bonkers, regardless of the circumstances, that an E-grade Jake defeated a mid-tier D-grade King.
ABTelford
Golden Forest King - I like it! And I wonder if he’ll set up on Earth or go find his own planet…since Jake is the world ruler of Earth, can there be a king under him?
bioticisbasic
Tyftc!
John Durrett
Tyftc. I’m curious to see how GFK and warpsnacher interact
Daniel Jackson-Woods
I love that the king is back but I'm ready to see Jake's bow and see how he fixes palate.
Ender419
I think it would be awesome if the B grade Songbird Sovereign meets the Golden (Fallen) Forest King and realize he was further doomed from the start after hearing the King’s origin story between him and Jake.
Kangaroo
re reading the books and in The Primal Hunter 3 the pov from the caterpillar witnessing the injectors used to kill the d grade Indigo Fungus Mycorrhiza should get a new pov. Like eating the corpse was its lucky incounter, Jake accidently made an op bug that ends up in the pantheon of life and he had no idea.
Devillelouch
Or Nevermore 2 Minaga Boogaloo
Devillelouch
2 guesses: 1.) To tease Jake/Artemis and the GFK. 2.) Because he is prepped for chaos and if we get baby Artemis than he is about to cause an even bigger reunion.
Phil Ritter
Now I’m really wondering what Minaga is up to. It’s kinda weird for him to be quiet for such a long time. It’s almost like he actually has stuff to do and isn’t just bored all the time. But surely he will visit for the reunion right? Also we really need a Silvie POV next chapter. Would be kinda sad to just get a short recollection at the reunion
Phil Ritter
I’m pretty sure as long as one doesn’t integrate it into their own path intentionally there are low chances for it to play a major role. Jake has barely ever acted his responsibilities of the title. Not to mention every powerful existence or at least most of them are rulers to some extent yet I don’t see it reflected in anyway in the path of Gods like Villy
Eden
Lmao, always give jakes intellect flak
Kirivina
I agree! Party time!
JJB4345_80_815
Friendly possible edit: Quote: If Jake wanted to keep using Eternal Hunger all the way to S-grade and beyond, there was a good chance he could have to re-craft or improve it in some other qualitative way. /Quote could have ==> would have PS --> Thank you for the chappy Zogarth!
JJB4345_80_815
Yes, thank you for the chappy Zogarth!
Cory S.
I just finished with the chapter and had this same thought.
SmokeJam
Well if we want to believe his own words, he was fully human before the system arrived, rather old too. And as he is part of the first era, he cannot be system created either.
Jose Reyna
Tftc!!!!!
Rob Lyon
They might go back to Earth and run through the menaga dungeon there together
Rob Lyon
I can't wait to see what Jake helps it turn into with his origin energy
Ty Cooper
Right!
Rodney
Dungeon time
kingofshibainu
I can't wait to see what windy nonsense Sylphie has been up to!
That one, right there.
Artemis and Yggdrasil, let me welcome you to the roast of Jake Thayne.
joel southard
Thank you for the chapter
Thenais
Let’s go party !
alaric
All this talk of unique lifeforms makes me wonder if the first sage was a unique lifeform. Would make sense if his connection and understanding of the system was greater because he was created by it.
Ty Cooper
Lol no he has said harems are a lot of work. He is to worried about the sword. He just happens to have a lot of ladies across the multiverse that want to have tea with him.
Tom
Jake might get nobility integrated into his path somewhat whether he likes it or not. He is on track to being a system recognized emperor and Emperor of the Hunt sounds really cool
SuperAzureReader
Tyftc. Missed their banter I must say
OnEyeDevil
Oh that is good
Drake
hell yeah
Joneric Bohman
Missed opportunity! King says he'll attempt to and Jake could totally have taken that and said "Don't die I said. It's like you unique lifeforms don't understand anything.. I know this other unique lifform Minaga.." Pop.."Hey everyone.. what I miss.." Jake"Jeez it's like you all think you are superior to everyone and just go wherever you want". King and Minaga"Naturally" "I'm doomed I have them agreeing with each other." Shrugging they both say in unison"Don't need us for that" All the while Artemis is holding in the biggest laugh she's ever had.
Tom C
Woop woop! Ain’t no party like a nevermore party! Miyamoto rolls up with his harem of ladies from the life faction 😂 a harem for every corner of the multiverse TFTC!
Grant Anderson
First, TFTC Z Second, side petition to rename this chapter "A atale of two Masks" as a play on "A Tale of two Cities"
Cees Tollenaar
Still think that GFK owes Jake his life in a way but oh well
Apollo Greed
🎵Reunited and it feels so goooood🎵
Rewdan
Thanks Zogarth I appreciate your work
BlackRazaras
Thanks for the chapter
TwistedVanity
EDIT Jake took on the mask and once more fully bound it to himself once more. Delete the first "once more"
Ty Cooper
Right, being honest with Jake as a friend and Jake's typical I dont care reaction felt good.
Ty Cooper
Next chapter/s will be great! Going to get the Forest King all caught up on all the happenings the crew has been up too. Hell he will probably even be glad to see Minaga.... what it could happen. Tftc
Joshua Little
Thanks for the chapter.
Specter
Thank you! there’s only one forest for my to rule over -> me who didn’t like their assigned titles and forces through something else -> forced
Nathan Holliday
I can’t wait to see how busted the bow is! His legendary bow was already broken with its enchantment but now we get a new one crafted from a Primordial with the same enchantment. He will totally one shot a B-grade with it.
IntenseSushi
Tftc
Fyrtue
I hope next chapter is a recap for what the others have been up to before they kick off the reunion Friday. I imagine that Potnia, former chosen of Artemis, has gotten more and more exasperated at Sylphie's shenanigans and she'll be super confused about Artemis and Jake's relationship when she brings the bestest bird over to Jake's place.
Corvid
Can you imagine how silly the pantheon 93rd will probably look like if they all make it. Jake, Carmen, Sword Saint, King, Casper, probably Sylphie too. Clowns, the lot of them. Least Eron and Jacob are in the running to actually be proper adult-gods. Until Eron gets smacked into paste by the system for breaking old age.
Corvid
This chapter genuinely made me happy. Good feels all around. Tomorrow's gonna be better with all the bullying from sword saint and minaga
Sébastien Kingsbury
My bet is it becomes useful during the next prima event somehow
Timothy Spradlin
Tftc
Eric Shivak
TFTC
Fdrugc
Tftc
Jana
I expected Jake to say that next time he’d ask the Viper for help and made sure the King got stuck in a perpetual state of mushroom:-P
brjenness
everybody gets to meet the whippersnatcher!!!
Kt-x
Thanks for the chapter
Alex Testa
No bc it’s not increasing his stats, it’s increasing his mana pool and mana regeneration
Eden
tftc
TyranT-Rex
Nice to have the King back. Really like his and Jake's relationship. Enemies turned Rivals/friends. Can't wait to for the reunion.
Arieh Sochaczevski
Thanks for the chapter!
Randy Plaisance
Calling myself the King of the Forest signifies there’s only one forest for my to rule over,” *change MY to ME I think.* Thanks Z.
Pheo
Ree
Max
Useless in till a niche situation happens, and he’ll be like oh I completely forgot about that buff.
Naotsugu97
TFTC!
TyranT-Rex
Kingly SCHWING
Namorat
Glad the King told Jake.
Devillelouch
I am looking forward to the full party reunion and Slyphie meeting the Slyphs. Also Minaga being here means the GFK is about to be bullied relentlessly.
Posiden 300
Time for them to run a dungeon together.
Jabirttok
The lazy bones has been chilling for too long
Yahyo Malikov
You'll get it next time
RnR_ RnR
Great chapter
Jabirttok
Only a true bro will insult you to your face. I love how their relationship has grown since the tutorial. They respect each other's paths and have become true comrades in arms. Now I just need to see this dang bow 😭 im a sucker for a sweet weapon upgrade. Tyftc also crazy how we're almost 1200 chaps deep and I feel like we're just scratching the surface. I never want this story to end. P.s. im excited for the next nevermore arc
Loststar7
Thanks for the chapter and a happy Wednesday to everyone. Great to see groot finally getting back on his feet.
Matthias
Tftc
Beemoss
tftc
Unwillingmainer
The King is back, long live the King. And he is no longer fallen. Still, I have to wonder just how long Jake is going to hold onto him dying? Probably for as long as they both live. I could see them both making it to godhood and Jake still bringing to up to irritate the King.
Death56
I just had this though do these percentage bonus count toward the Stat cap for items or no
C0bra$
Thank u for the story
Kristopher Hanson
Fought supposed to be thought “Huh, never even fought about that,” Jake muttered. “But actually a pretty good point.”
Sylphie
REE!!
Connor
Thanks for the chapter
Xander
TFTC :) Suggested edits: Ch. 1149 Stuff I missed before. Using toxins implies Jake is using a number of different toxins rather than a large amount of a singular toxin at a time. "far larger amounts of *toxins* at once" "The amount of *toxins* Jake would have to transfer" "forcing his hands to store a large amount of *toxins* would " "Jake felt the powerful *toxins* having accumulated sufficiently" Ch. 1151 "as soon *as* the King landed " from context an extra "as" "only one forest for *my* to rule over" should be "me" "but more *importantly* than my new name" should be "important" "that my power of gold had increased in *power* substantially" repetition. "Strength" "capacity" "intensity" take your pick theres alot to chose from :) "titles and *forces* through something else?" should be "forced" "the hunter *in* prolonged periods can " should be "for" "just like the one Jake had *before it* slowly floated toward him" i dont think this fits here? makes the sentence kinda clunky. Maybe needs a rewording or just ditching these two. "*questioned* anything related " should be "questioning" "Records to get levels and evolve *in the first place*, and getting it hadn’t exactly been easy *in the first place*. " repetition. Suggest ditching the first instance. "mask and *once more* fully bound it to himself *once more*" repetition. Suggest ditching the first instance :D "“You ** do that at my place,” " missing word "can" maybe?
Devillelouch
tyftc
Kristoffer
Oh well, third is not bad :)
SCHWING PAPI
Golden Forest SCHWING
Cory Smith
Second?
Kristoffer
First?
Temlat
first…. nooooooo! i was so damned quick!
Yahyo Malikov
First
